Sunday, January 31, 2016

Saturday, January 30, 2016

Bouquet Garni

Your musings are connected to the jungle, yes? Have you read "Burmese Days" by George Orwell?

Thursday, January 28, 2016

Tuesday, January 26, 2016

No Complaint

A great descriptions as always..Jazmine Reid

…… Of Humanity

Emotion and imagery.-VerbalEyez

Forgotten Hills

This poetry seemed to echo what i often in my breezy days would hum.. Quiet a hill song! Thank you Sir! -Purabi, Gandhinagar

Excellent. It smells earth. Best. - Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

Nostalgic and evocative poem, Satish ji.-GSP Rao, Hyderabad

Sunday, January 24, 2016

Consecrated

the simplicity brings out the need to read in between the lines. This is elegant and beautifully written. I hope to see more from you.- Allyssa Treglown

Saturday, January 23, 2016

Friday, January 22, 2016

Bliss Of Another Self

I feel so much sadness in this piece.
Very thought provoking.
Nice job!
Take care.-Cindy

Wednesday, January 20, 2016

Taking Off

I like them all... especially the 2nd one. Well done, Satish. -Lin Lane

Nice your words reverb.-germanamericanchurch

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Tuesday, January 19, 2016

Innocence

Very vivid images. Thank you.-Johnsonraven 

It Does Not Matter

Intensely passionate utterances. A poem of unusual depth. Bravo !-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

Temptation

Clarity
Verse form is a realm full of new possibilities. I am rejoicing. "...give me some reason to die..." a war of the soul against everything not the soul.- allets

Saturday, January 16, 2016

Death Was Pure

hi mom satish my name is graham im from namibia africa i read your peom Death Was Pure and even tough its short it touched me and now i sit here and cry thinking of the only love i lost my grandma thank you for the sweetest memories. i intend to get married this august and it hurts to know she wont be there, i was wondering if maybe you could write my something for my wife to be so she would on our special day know that i truly love her pls mom satish your truly.-morinsHUSBAND

Thursday, January 14, 2016

You And Everybody

...your writings still fascinate me... very well thought out.not everyone likes or wants to hear the truth but the truth does set free those things we can't see all by ourselves. Debera

Metaphysical View

A fascinating insight on the human condition, and the combined process of living and ageing in a constantly changing world!-Oojah Smith

Black currants are amazing so it is the the descriptive power of these words, your voice is unique.-germanamericanchurch

Impresa

Great really like your poetry.-germanamericanchurch

Memorizing

maybe the drip need adjusted.- Cat Hodgson

Wednesday, January 13, 2016

Blameless?

An interesting mystery about an anxiety that has become real? A thing undiscovered or ignored for too long? Hope you will share what is behind this expression.- shearerjon

Tuesday, January 12, 2016

The Brightened Fire

Wow, this is really incredible writing. So powerful. -Helenmatherrogers

Fury Of Juggler

Mr. Satish verma has an impeccable pessimism which sometimes are shaped into beautiful poetry, this is one of them ! He has an inimitable style too !-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

Monday, January 11, 2016

The Melting

"...like a moth..."
a comparison of concepts using as or like: I love this moth burning truth! -  allets

Sunday, January 10, 2016

…… Stunned Me

This is very deep and sad. Yet beautiful in the way you present it. Very nicely penned-Poison_9901

Images Rhymed

Bravo satishverma . Thank you for sharing.- Ramin Ara

Nice write.-Thoughtful Depictions

Dope metaphors . tfs .-Jesse bob

Saturday, January 9, 2016

Lips Will Measure

Well lined piece, great write.-Busy Poet

I really enjoyed reading this piece. Great metaphors.-Cindy

Friday, January 8, 2016

Ancient Sins

Yuck! Is that a review? Yuck.-vpalexander

Solemnity

A poem filled with sorrow. Most poignant. All good wishes.-Christine Shaw, UK

Time Crossing

Satish your talent parallels with your cry for peace. May we never forget those who were lost to prejudice, the Holocaust, and war. I remain with you in my prayers for peace.-Marcia Schechinger, USA

No More, No Less

Hi Satish very well said and very strong content ,its a sad state of affairs but it's a truth for many countries .My best regards.-Pattra Shuwaswat, Netherlands

A Long Night

Your first poem is particularly powerful Satish. In my opinion, there is always a poem in someone's tears. When you see a person crying, it would be difficult not to have an emotional reaction. All best wishes.-Christine Shaw, UK

Day Of Anxiety

Sometimes less is more. I found that here Satish. Thank you. All good wishes.-Christine Shaw, UK

Simple, thought provoking. I liked it! Thank you.-Betty Janko, USA

What an interesting poem, Satish :). Thank you for sharing... Warmest! Rufus.-Rufus Brughs, Nigeria

The Nature

Hello Satish, a well thought out poem on peace, like the last verse, well written .-Edwin Jepson, UK

Flares

Beautiful imagery here. Nature in all her glory. All good wishes.-Christine Shaw, UK

Brings to mind songs of my native blood, a oneness with all the beauty of Nature... irresistible, because it is a part of us...-Granville Holt, USA

Evoking Images

Images indeed, on the cusp of dawn may lie the whisper of muse... hopefully we can learn to listen...-Granville Holt, USA

Being Watched

A powerful emotion, spoken but not said... enjoyed.-Granville Holt,  USA

Living Dangerously

Hello Satish, a poem full of interest for the reader, well written with powerful wording.- Edwin Jepson, UK

Hello Satish- You always deliver a powerful poem that is dramatic and well expressed. You again have done so and it is greatly received. Sending warmest wishes.-Nancy Crossland, USA

In Exile

Beautiful language, Satish, with very rich images. Thanks for sharing.-Elizabeth Olesen, Denmark

DESPERADO

Are people really desperate to become saints? I believe, real saints have become saints without any thought of getting the prize of sainthood. It is we, who are left behind who grant them the honor and prize that they have honorably and saintly lived and served among us. Otherwise, they themselves, I believe, never have counted themselves as saints.-Elizabeth Olesen, Denmark

Wrapped In Stigma

Hi Satish, I am amazed at the wide scoop of your coverage in this poem. This is a rhapsody, pleasant to the ears. Enjoyed.-Reyvrex Questor Reyes, Philippines

The Blooming Blood

A fine poem , full of sincere emotions, Edwin Jepson, UK

I like this poem. I know you got these words from deep inside. A very good write. Warm regards.-Conrad van den Bergh, South Africa

Massive Explosion

Your choice of metaphors - impressive. The first two stanzas remind me of a galactic phenomenon, the third and fourth of something to look forward to and the last is a feeling of great 'loss'. But your category states 'Peace' so it's hard to tell. Would love to hear your explanation, Satish. It deserves 5 stars though for being a thought-provoking poem. -Jacinta Ramayah, Malaysia

Your Voice

Wow Satish this is a powerful poem with an undercurrent of meaning. Intense. All good wishes.- Christine Shaw,  UK

Hi Satish,intense and emotional to the core. Enjoyed. -William Willis, Scotland

Hi Satish !!! I really like this poem. I find it to be a very emotionally intense alluring to several deeper meanings, depending on where you are from in this world. An excellent write. Thank you for sharing. Warm regards.-Conrad van den Bergh, South Africa 

Sunday, January 3, 2016

Micropains

lovely & well written.-La'Darius Henry

THE GIFT OF ABANDONMENT

Abandonment is not gift Satish.. only when we are saved... This is a great write..-Silent One

Bringing Down

Ode To Now
One reads and floats - nothing else will do here - Happy New Year (I pray for your health and contiued wealty of necessary words). allets

Saturday, January 2, 2016

The Goodbye

The depth in this poem is incredible. A beautiful piece. Very much enjoyed and liked.-Helenmatherrogers

Friday, January 1, 2016

Return to Myself

Every line makes the reader think. In complete awe. I would have stopped at 'history was an aberration and not use rags to riches.-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad