Thursday, November 29, 2018

Secrets Of Unknown

<3 !!!-eleven_eleven

I really like "fighting with
I really like "fighting with shadows of ghosts" good stuff.-fuche_bu

The Nightmare

A brilliantly written message!
Extraordinarily penetrative!-Laura

My Story

Lovely composition, sir. I especially liked these lines:
moon bled to death,
when you left in dark... -Sangeeta Das, Delhi

Well written though esoteric.-KH Prabhu, Kumta (Karnataka)

Truly a wondrous story, deep in it's reach... keep them coming.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Wednesday, November 28, 2018

Recreation

Satish, such a well thought poem...........10++++++++.-Bernard F. Asuncion

Knack of recreation out of anything and every thing is laudable as it is very difficult achievement. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

Tuesday, November 27, 2018

There Was No Prelude

Great write, philosophical write, satishverma. You give us a great deal of food for thought with your words.
Now that scientists, through DNA, proved we all evolved from one woman and one man (Adam and Eve) your words are even more profound. It's true. See the following article:
Adam and Eve DID exist! Scientists discover all humans are descendants of ONE couple
https://www.mirror.co.uk/news/world-news/adam-eve-exist-scientists-discover-13641589.-Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet

Godsend

Evocative lines hinting at the windfalls. Liked the read. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Monday, November 26, 2018

The Vinegar Test

Forgive me kind one,but I am lost a bit here reading this. I can see the sadness is obvious. Could you briefly explain this write. I surmise it has to do with dying away flowers? Now some might read and fully understand others may read and not understand and not inquire. But because it felt emotional to me I would like a better understanding of your write.-JacieStralkoDuca

When The Attack Comes

beautifully criptic.-olivia2002

Saturday, November 24, 2018

No Hatred

The experience of your words is haunting. You have come through an episode that remains deep inside. Yet no hatred. I hope I am reading this correctly.-JacieStralkoDuca

Living Dangerously

Your poetry is so intense and intriguing. This is no different. I am slowly learning your style, as it’s so distinctive and cryptic.-The Prince

Piercing Mind

Wow! Insightful and transpiring. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Friday, November 23, 2018

Sorting Again

lovely writing-
Love blooms in hush,
like cranberry. It heals soul,
half moon, half stings.-Mahtab Bangalee

Tuesday, November 20, 2018

Lips And Wordless Miracle

This is absolutely stunning....your work always is....I look forward to reading your posts every day...knowing it will make me think..rather than picking random pieces of poets who's fortes lie obviously in some other field....Blessings.-Jason Vancelette (AKA Pharaoh33)

Monday, November 19, 2018

Friday, November 16, 2018

Buoyancy

terse vivid lines,
sharp images,
subliminally soothing
well written .-costa siwale 

I Speak

"TYPICAL SATISH'S STYLE". Beautiful poem Varma Ji.-R R Gandikota , Kakinada

A poignant verse. TFS.-ANNAPURNA SHARMA, Nellore

Very nice
I share
Thursday,15th November 2018

I speak not because
I must suppose
and choose
an occasion to repose

it is my duty
towards humanity
as it has been thrust upon
by an almighty and shown

I must share
and dare
to remain among
even if they are proving wrong

Human life is miserable
not for one but for all to struggle
to come out of itis big challenge
as we are sitting on the tough edge

let us not vitiate it further
and cause fear
in the minds of poor and downtrodden
speak on behalf and stay happily driven.-hasmukh mehta, ahmedabad

Wednesday, November 14, 2018

The Undefined

Oh the shadows of the night shall fall, the sun shall scorch the day and still no rains come our way, but in the stillness of the night I will cry out to the dry winds to change into a soft Autumn rains.-Slightlyslimer

Afloat In Words

A Side Journey
Slipping int the world of Satish is always an adventure - allets

Fair Play

I agree with Prince This poem is so skilfully written:
Today I climb a red
mountain to know my height.-BOB GALLO

Some lovely writing here! Unusual imagery that really captivates the imagination.-The Prince

Not Negotiating

Sometimes fate leaves no chance for negotiation. Thanks for the verses pregnant with profundity.-ANNAPURNA SHARMA, Nellore

Monday, November 12, 2018

In Exile

Graffiti spreads everywhere.... thanks for the insightful read.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

No

last stanza nice imagery /// wonderful poem.-Mahtab Bangalee

Friday, November 9, 2018

Thursday, November 8, 2018

Wednesday, November 7, 2018

An Unasked Eulogy

Outstanding!-Laura

We are shadows amongst the energies of the sun and moon.-Lawless

Finally Injured

Tough Tulips
Enjoyed this one. It's election day in usa nov 6 tuesday. The lines were not too long this morning. best wishes.-allets

Tuesday, November 6, 2018

Karma

The Stranger

As always the lines dig deeper than their outward appearance. Thanks for the philosophical share sir.-
Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Monday, November 5, 2018

Sunday, November 4, 2018

In Disguise

I don't always comment but I always read your poetry. Such clever word choice, just enough to paint the picture but not too much to over egg.
The imagery and darkness in this piece is thought provoking. I'm always taken on a journey with your poetry. Nominated.-Darren

This Kind Of Time

Nicely wriiten the lines which reflects the present day situation.-debasish verma, Ghaziabad

Thursday, November 1, 2018