Mood Swings

Wow, so much visually swirling about. Your first stanza hooked me and it just blew me away. Amazing--Brenda

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Afterimages

Wow oh wow-this is just beautiful! Your visuals are a story within a story-loved it!-Brenda

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Wings Attached

Your words are so beautiful and yet mystifying. They speak poetically of art that steals the meaning from my lips. Well done. -Mr Darcy

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Dirty homes

It is possible to interpret this poem and most of your poems in general as pessimistic. However, I understand this and many of your other poems as a yearning, a longing, a screech to come out of this insane situation where god dies daily, but closed-eyed people insist on reading something positive where god lives as a decorative possession in affluent homes. They would instantly discard texts that do not speak of beautiful things with beautiful words. -Supratik Sen, Kolkata

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The Blue Lake Burns

There is only Love... Ever the only answer-K

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Ceremonial

I will unmourn my death Perfect.-Mike Adam

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Scouring

for me, this is astute social commentary... but i do hope to see a world that doesn't inflict violence on every family... or a world where every family doesn't inflict violence within and thereby assault the world... ~ violence of any kind is just too damaging and hard to accept in any form...-serah . 

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Massive Explosion

vivid... i can actually visualize emotional demolition... -. serah . 

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A Kiss Melts

Beautiful imagery.-MrJMSm

Nice write.-Trucker

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Tree Of Light Dances

I'm not sure I understand all of this but I enjoyed reading your poem. Really good descriptive write..liked..-Jazmine Reid

Beautiful write, loved this.Madeira

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Innocent Was The Betrayal

A good write.-darkwolf2uk

Wonderful!.-Madeira

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Gather The Sun

Love 'we disintegrate in semi colons' - fab write .-Helenmatherrogers

A great write .-HITENDRA

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Passion Is A Hurricane

Beautiful write.-pagangirl95

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Lips Will Measure

An interesting write-darkwolf2uk

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To Laugh Or To Weep

Nice write
A dark poem need to read a few times to get into it but liked it.- Trucker

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Grief Unspoken

An abstract poem which reads profoundly. All the best with your creative writing. -Summersounds68

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Irreverent

Very nice poem, great use of metaphor, the words also contain a strong visual component which I think makes them really tangible. "yellow paper" for example, can be understood in a primal way. I love stream-of-consciousness style poetry and feel that this is of that style. Nice work.-Oneyedtoad

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Unsinking In Depth

I take it that you are not inviting this person to stay. Provoking.-Augustus

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Voiceless Calling

"Do not stop me if I start bleeding"
Truly a bold statement.-abstractempo

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BRAIN-DEAD

What a profound poem ..... 😀-sweetsapote1

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Welcome Sir!

and fruit is a luxury a saddness - allets

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‘crossing The Bar' Once Again...

I think of the enviornment and the climate - tears in valleys, hmmmm . . . any ressurection now would probably be welcome -allets

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The Tear Of Things

must have been some trial if the verdict had to be judged - good one Satish - allets

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Non - ‘i’

are struck by sun greetings, but winter is coming and clouds obscure the horizon. I am struck perpetually by greetings to the moon and occasionally, only occasionally, to the sun. - enjoyed, -llets

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No Strings

I do so enjoy your writing. Always impressive, always !-Gene Gary

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Summer’s Fault

Absolutely amazing work, as usual .-Pharaoh33

a wonderful poem my friend.-willyweed

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Gifting

I love the neat layout. Punchy cryptic stanzas that tantalise and tease with possible discoveries.
Take care, -Mr Darcy

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Earth's Intelligence

Wow this is a brilliant write. What really caught me was the beautiful imagery created with:
"The birds are
going to follow the sun carrying
the moon on their wings. "
As certain birds navigate the earth via the magnetic field (governed by gravity) which also interacts most closely with the moon (the closest object to us in space) - I found this specific line genius.

There is only one tiny suggestion I have for improvement:
"Do not open this dirt file of
the suspended time. It reverberates"
the second line of this could be
"suspended time; it reverberates"
taking out the filler word will decrease the syllable count of this line and help it read better, and a full stop in that particular position is not quite necessary, a semicolon keeps the ideas joined and flowing a bit more than it does.
But that's such a minor detail, which isn't going to take away from me nominating this for the weekly contest.-ether

Judging Comment:

The beauty in this piece is that the topic is something both elegant and completely unrelated to all the drama and unrest going on in the world lately. The descriptions are both fun and wheel spinning, and yet off the wall without being totally off the rail - which was an interesting way to complete such a piece - but it worked 100% of the way through. Which is something I truly admire about this author this week, they tried something both unrealistic and beautiful yet al the while the author stuck it out and tried to make that work. Which this week was a success.-BlueJay

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Bewildering

Satish,
This is another amazingly accomplished write.
Excellent. -Ben Pickard

Just wonderful. -Em

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Pardon My Darkness

Nice narration of Violincell that is always present in Some people that are ruled by Yama!
Just Depicted my Life as is now..! relaxes me so much and immensely! .. and that Poem would fall n the ground-Siddartha Montik

A poem falls on the ground
to breath again.
A wonderful inspirational write. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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Trying To Sleep

Floats on the dampened page of life. Profound and thought provoking write. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik 

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On The Breast Of Flames

Yes... my sky, my roof and my 'he'...what about that... we had been fighting for the teachers without paying even a little heed to their teachings.

I am sorry I have been responding to your poems far too frequently. Readers should not think I am trying to form a group. I respond when I feel like, that's all. Readers...please grow up, as you read on!!! Surya please do not delete this...let everyone know that I am responding to accusations and allegations against the quality of YS.-Supratik Sen, Kolkata

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Irreverent

Very nice poem, great use of metaphor, the words also contain a strong visual component which I think makes them really tangible. "yellow paper" for example, can be understood in a primal way. I love stream-of-consciousness style poetry and feel that this is of that style. Nice work.-Oneyedtoad

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Through your poem

Hello Sir,

My name is Naaz Fatima Khan and Iam writing you from Lucknow.
The common link here is Highonpoem. Today, in fact minutes before I read your poem titled "Love in Original". After reading that, I went to the descriptive profile of yours. Initially, as a person who has attached her identity along with words and expressions, your poem travelled and reached to that admiration. Secondly, when your profile says about the social causes and your active involvement, that brought the another touch of respect. 
So, without wasting my time, Iam here to give you and Ma'am many best wishes for all the humanity you possess. Its a blessing of its own kind if time allows you to cross such people who sends beautiful thoughts to the world. Iam feeling lucky in that same way.
It would be my fortune if I could be any sort of help in this.
Basically, I have been indulged in writing. But whatever I do, the core intention is to inspire people around.

I would love to hear from you.

Regards,- Naaz Fatima Khan,Lucknow

A home in my home

Your poems have always inspired me to write, Satish ji. Thank you for sharing this poem.-Supratik Sen, Kolkata

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Silence Of Doors

This deep, thought-provoking poem
asks more questions than it answers.
Must be read more than once,
to gain more from it. - Briz

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