Thursday, February 28, 2019

The Challengers

my poem will talk to you one day
under wolf moon.
Wonderful.-Iftekhar Ifti

What Was Invisible

A hard-hitting composition. TFS.- Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Wednesday, February 27, 2019

Your Journey

To tell todays' to magicians
no rabbit in the hat
the purple silk hanky disappeared
Never swan necked entwined

the mute give a sign
seeking placentas don't play
around in my temple
roses shame to gold

snow and green deep in androgyny
perfect match and legal, at home here
I find Taj Mahal to build
conformist holds straight bat
for his team, no off-side

Noises perform tricks
like illusionists making truths
of no intentions
now snows cook lie of truths

the cuckoo was never cuckoo

In homage to Satish Verma.....Distinguished Poet.-Yenson

Small Birds

Short, sweet, clever, vivid.-Matthew

Tuesday, February 26, 2019

It Kills It Kills

Very good write and well written. I liked it very much.-Mike Mezz

Darkly exquisite.-JacieStralkoDuca

Excellently written. Hugs.-MARYT.LIVE

So Much To Think

Thanks for the profound verse...there is indeed so much to change, if ever backtracked. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Sunday, February 24, 2019

Shedding Skin

A relationship that soured and went to long, once freed from its cycle both parties benefited. Then the rebirth of perception realizing the nature of the beast that has crippled humanity for so long. Very nice poem that dives deep with such few words +10-Thomas Kane

Kaleidoscopic

I always find your poetry fascinating. It is like being in a kaleidoscope filled with words instead of colours spiralling around yet revealing slivers of ever changing imagery. Best wishes.-Milly Hayward

Grieving

A thoughtful contemporary theme displaying dissatisfaction of the elements around. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Saturday, February 23, 2019

Friday, February 22, 2019

On Reverse Trail

Time makes you strong.
One day you score a
unique myth. - These last lines convey a meaning much deeper than their literal meanings. It is perhaps not a myth but a uniqueness that is acquired. Thanks Satish sir for the profound lines.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Thursday, February 21, 2019

A Smile Falters

I never quite get the true meaning of your poetry satish but it doesn't make it any less beautiful...-Em (marmite)

Wednesday, February 20, 2019

Sunday, February 17, 2019

Eclipsing

" The fair queen has
a scar on forehead. Third
eye was waning."
Fantastic flight of imagery. Thanks for sharing.-Ratnakar Mandlik

Thinking Deeply About Something

I think your mind is the most malleable I have seen, at least in this site; for example this: 
"The fixing magnifies your
scars. Do not go deep
in the veins. "
Wow only wow.-BOB GALLO

Saturday, February 16, 2019

Cause And Reality

Satishverma,
An Excellent write and a great question you have posed...
“Can we undo the damage
and become friends?
Unuttered, but still vocal.”-Laura

Not Like Me

Differences between a couple beautifully expressed. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Friday, February 15, 2019

Tuesday, February 12, 2019

Monday, February 11, 2019

In Quiteude

Sometimes, it's inevitable, I think to stop ourselves from walking towards them even though it hurts, but then it hurts either way when we're pulled away by force...
I like the tone of this write, and it's very close to how I myself write at times, I'd say.
Acceptance or rather defeat, despite wanting something else, is what I got from this poem.
Interesting read. -Dr. YumnaKay 

So Much To Think

Every December snow
becomes a shroud.
Intensity in the emotions flowing through the poem is simply touching. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

Friday, February 8, 2019

We The Possessed

marble! brilliant darkness!-Doug Bentley

We Will Not Part

VERY GOOD POEM.-R R Gandikota , Kakinada

What an aura of romance the poem creates! So different from your usual verses Satish ji.-GSP Rao, Hyderabad

Beautiful composition and well depicted emotions.-Padmavathi, Khammam

It's too beautiful, sir. Enjoyed reading it.-Sangeeta Das, Delhi

Very beautiful poem Satish Verma!
The brevity and conciseness of the words chosen is wonderful. Beautifully written!-Giti Tyagi, Patiala

Thursday, February 7, 2019

Some Thinking Space

a great read. thanks for sharing.-psychofemale

Mutilation is at our core. Thinking contradicts innate essence.-Lawless

Wednesday, February 6, 2019

Not Your Doings

a lovely write, well written and painted a beautiful picture.-psychofemale

A good write.-orchidee

Tuesday, February 5, 2019

Dumb Dolls

Soothsayer Has Nothing To Say

Intetesting, as always, to read you.
. . . silent soothsayer.-Morningglory

In Restraint

An excellent expression of your inner self!-Laura

What Times

I really liked this poem, very unique. With little words evoking such imagery. Great work.-DarkNDangerous

Trapped Wishes

Very touching Satish ji.-GSP Rao, Hyderabad

Very heart touching- simple, short yet meaningful poem!
How beautifully the poet compares the aging concerns with a quake- struck building!
“As flames are dying’ shows a little pessimism but the poet is strong enough and hopeful of starting afresh as he wishes to ‘script a new song’.
The last line of the poem …”In twilight of age” says it all.
Beautiful poem Satish Verma!-Giti Tyagi, Patiala

Monday, February 4, 2019

All You Know

Awesome inference, The fever was mystical.
In delirium you will recite
a poem It is a tragedy that it is factual. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

In Vacuum

Sunday, February 3, 2019

Cosmetic Effect

Apt images in play. The subtlety between virtual and actual is expressed well. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Saturday, February 2, 2019

Debating Point

Some of the choices of phrase in this are wonderful. I particularly liked 'the game was fair but the players were dishonest'! I like the short stanzas as well, as it allows you to compact your ideas.-PatrickPink 

Existential

A profound poem, Satish....10.-Bernard F. Asuncion

Friday, February 1, 2019