MUM IS THE WORD...

Good expose on the goings-on that I assume. Kudos as always. -Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad

Mum is word... nice poem

Golden advise from lord
not to utter simple word
if found not necessary
that shall be piece of advise from so many.-Hasmukh mehta, ahmedabad

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AN AGONISED PRAYER

Agony shall finds its path. It is a very appropriate poem to describe the year 2013 which caused a lot of anguish and misery the world over. The horror and loss of so many lives, floods and cyclones showing the nature's fury were catastrophic. India is the worst sufferer. Let us hope for a happy New Year 2014. Thanks for sharing.-Sri Hari Krishna Mocherla, Hyderabad

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THE KISS ……………….

Greatly expressed,like it.- Weeping willow

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RESURRECTION

Always profound you write thoughts to ponder.- just Arun

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SLEEPING BUDDHA

Yes... Rivers are sad and trees are weeping... Buddha is sleeping. Weeping Willows sing ... Where there is life... there may be hope... truly... Pat- Hibiscus

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Bouquet Garni

I liked how you did three different haikus here. I love how each one tells a different story. I believe the second one is the most powerful because it tells the story that there is so much you can say in such a small amount of writing. Very creative writing style you have.- Beautiful Soul

Nice, I like it.- Jyoti Rawat

The lost road in
bamboos comes out
as solitary song.

- I really like the image of this haiku as well as the thought one can gather from it. Actually, anyone can take a different view from this piece. I searched the title and I see it's a bouquet of herbs. So I thought that that's what each of those haiku were like... put together to give a greater picture. Thanks for sharing. - Everlasting

3 Haikus in one with different images for the reader to see..nice write.- Meena Krish

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Utopia

This is a hard poem to think about. I will give a few thoughts to what I think. I like the title because it really draws the reader in because utopia is a place of peace. It seems like you are running away from something. But you are lost. I love the use of the imagery in the like butterfly catcher and the woods by the beach. It adds so much to the poem. At the end it's sad because you seem to lose everything you love and you cannot remember the scents from your childhood. Great write.- Beautiful Soul

The depth of this write has a deeper meaning for the writer then it is for the reader. There is a sense of peace which the writer feels and at the same time seeing that peace going away perhaps..?.All in all, I like the imagery and the flow of this poem was a smooth read..lovely.- - Meena Krish

So many images, the war, the beach, the butterfly catchers, that provoke thoughts, I like it.- Everlasting

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ONCE MORE

What I take away from this is a person decides not to commit suicide backing away, returning to their old self, remembering life events, looking for a gift (there has to be more to life than this). The destructive thought process of the person never changes therefore the tears never go away but lessen and light a candle which gives hope and light that there is more. Might be a little disjointed but I think you can get the idea of waht I said. Nice work- Sylvia

I like this poem a lot as well. It tells a very sad story that darkness can consume you. It seems this person found the light in something and made a huge change to their life. This is actually a very well written poem. Because it keeps me interested the whole time. You also tell a story of warmth. The darkness/sadness consumes you at first then you found hope in something. The flow is very beautiful as well each line connecting well with the next. Well done- Beautiful Soul 

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CONTRAST

Wonderfully penned piece!- preciouspoetess

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COPULA

A very awe poem!!! Merry christmas to you, Verma .Just drop by to greet and wish you all a very merry christmas and a bountiful New Year!!! ..from your friendly poet.- AiyaH de Torres

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SPASTIC LEGS

Such tremors can bring frightening conflicts, you certainly describe a terrible struggle either physical or spiritual (metaphorical) in either case both are painfully assaulting, till we learn to deal and accept such. My best to you always... enjoy the season with your family.- LightH2O

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ON THE JAGGED STONES

Very deeply layered in textured. Powerful play with words.- just Arun

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POINT OF VIEW

Nice poem
World has changed
Everything is masterly managed
No place for misery or pain
Self interest has only remained.-Hasmukh mehta, ahmedabad

Thank you for sharing this. In a world of sin and crime, it is little wonder that tears turn into stones and a heart-breaking song becomes an irony.
It's perhaps better to look into the sky thank looking into the eyes.- Supratik Sen, Hyderbad

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THE SWAN - SONG

wonderful as usual..Good imagination !! -VS, KL

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GENESIS

Book of life with greasy stain.... Nice expression- seema chowdhury

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THE ENDING

A wonderfully deep pen, in such a short poem you put a lifetime food for thought! The wonders of the truth, the life and death, the looking forward unscared. I really loved this poem, thank you for share!- Elena S

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A FRIGHTENING DREAM

the poor mostly cannot survive without Love of one another
so some know God long before the rich destroy this earth for 'profit', thus destroying their evil...- stranger

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KILLING ZONE

I love this a lot, the different histories embedded, from different path. Lovely ponder-Entelechy 

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MOON RISE

A sensitive look at the ways fear can take us - - woven with care your word- reflections make an enlightening read. Thanks for sharing this depth of thought Satash.- Fay Slimm

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RIPPED APART

picking up flight, good write, thanks.- Gajanan Mishra

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ONE SUMMER MOON

Beautifully written, Satish ! - Happy Christmas! - Anne Lise Andresen

i like this nice.- DENISE NARAYADU

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AN AGONISED PRAYER

The world is slowly turning bleak, to many crimes, ignorance and greed. Nice written poem, gets you questioning and lingering for more....- leahlopez

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DESPERADO

" The spilled blood always
instigates to drink blood from the fountain head
of the sweet revenge"
Revenges, cruelty are disguising in different ways in the socity.Even the crime ,violence and genocide in the name of religion or some isms confer the sainthood to such persons or organisations who show their trophies of dried skulls!.
Wonderful poem, sir. -PURANIK R B, BANGALORE

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AN AGONISED PRAYER

The world is slowly turning bleak, to many crimes, ignorance and greed. Nice written poem, gets you questioning and lingering for more....- leahlopez

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UBIQUITOUS BEING

Very inspiring. As always, your always marvelous perspective.- Lady Dragonwyck

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TALE-BEARER

The metaphors are too great though the destruction is seen everywhere in our mother land.-VS, Kl/Thanjavur

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NOTHING VERSE

I think it is fear of all kinds that leave us with nothing and prevent so many of our desires and wishes becoming true.- Bengieske

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ONE DAY

WONDERFUL....stark and dark images....all the best.-Syam Madappattu

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NAKEDNESS

I found the title very interesting and the analytic suggestions in the poem itself quite intriquing.-dcwriter

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A FUTURE WAITS

Proficient written - spread your seed ..... - Beautiful Satish ! - Anne Lise Andresen

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BLACK MAGIC

Nice work,enjoyed very much.Thanks, for sharing.-Sue_Pinkston

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COMMENTRIES

What an amazingly lingering line: "The violence of our thoughts created an empty wasteland." I like the way you develop the theme and the strong impact of the conclusion.-robyn selters

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UBIQUITOUS BEING

Very inspiring. As always, your always marvelous perspective.- Lady Dragonwyck

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PRIDE OF VALLEY

A dark poem filled with haunting imagery but an interesting and intriguing read. Best wishes.-m eleanor3168

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SOME QUESTION MARKS

As usual your deep thoughts are unique, your senses amaze me. Is as if you sat, chatted and drank tea each evening with life and death.- LightH2O

This is very powerful and emotional. Brilliantly written.- cupcake

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TALE-BEARER

the metaphors are too great though the destruction is seen everywhere in our mother land.- VS,Kl/Thanjavur

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GALLOWS

i like the intensity here.- labchaddy

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KILLING ZONE

I love this a lot, the different histories embedded, from different path. Lovely ponder- Entelechy

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KILL

At lost for words, but thinking of you. Take care!- LightH2O

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