I liked how you did three different haikus here. I love how each one tells a different story. I believe the second one is the most powerful because it tells the story that there is so much you can say in such a small amount of writing. Very creative writing style you have.- Beautiful Soul
Nice, I like it.- Jyoti Rawat
The lost road in
bamboos comes out
as solitary song.
- I really like the image of this haiku as well as the thought one can gather from it. Actually, anyone can take a different view from this piece. I searched the title and I see it's a bouquet of herbs. So I thought that that's what each of those haiku were like... put together to give a greater picture. Thanks for sharing. - Everlasting
3 Haikus in one with different images for the reader to see..nice write.- Meena Krish
Nice, I like it.- Jyoti Rawat
The lost road in
bamboos comes out
as solitary song.
- I really like the image of this haiku as well as the thought one can gather from it. Actually, anyone can take a different view from this piece. I searched the title and I see it's a bouquet of herbs. So I thought that that's what each of those haiku were like... put together to give a greater picture. Thanks for sharing. - Everlasting
3 Haikus in one with different images for the reader to see..nice write.- Meena Krish
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