SECOND-HAND EVENT

I was drawn by the title and your words surpassed anything I might have expected..."the indulgence of self becomes a second hand event"..so so profound and fit an ending to a thoroughly powerful piece of writing...yes.. this dug deep and reached far beyond.-Naajir Rashad

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FALLING SEED

Morning, Sir. I felt a lot from this write. Your usual thought provoking writes. Have a great weekend.-Lady Dragonwyck

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Anarchy

loved this! wonderful journey through your powerful use of imagery.-Lenny Gazbowski

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Leviathans

deep piece - great lines: 'Civil war started between the yawning wounds'... and how true:'The autocracy will belled the earth till death.- eleanor prince

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Lame Duck

Wow. This really grabs, and it bites with its teeth. I like it.- Arlo Disarray

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Swan Song

Deep but full of food for thought this introspective dance to a swan song. Excellent imagery.- Fay Slimm

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Very Disturbing

like it too for the imagination used. Moon seems to be your fav word. Its my sincere desire to see that work which arouses absolute feeling of happiness, bliss flowing from each of the words. I look forward to the other side of life, through your fantastic poetic imagination.-purnimamanhas

good write.-sueb

Loved this, brilliant write, great imagery.-Madeira

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AFTER LEAVING THE HOME

Cool Poem.. I like the abstract imagery. It is a fun read. -Joel Thornton

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VIRTUE

I love your poetry, powerful as I enjoy because it touches something inside my walls, my gosh-Entelechy .

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RECAPITULATION

we journey on my old friend I first read your poems years ago and was captivated , and remain so , you can take this form to new levels with such ease.-David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

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Choking

love the wording! - Cameron Williams

Another unmissable posting from your talented pen my friend. This write of excellent metaphor and intrigue must be Recommended.- Fay Slimm

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WHAT WENT WRONG

Very intense nice pen versa! A 7 for me! Have a lovely day! :) love and hugs! -Dorian Petersen Potter

Wow.. Really cool Satish! This is my newest favorite poem.. Very well crafted piece. That middle stanza is the impetus of the poem for me. It is just so well written I do not want to condescend by regurgitating some cliche dribble about how impressed I am.. Rated a 7 (highest rating) and tagging as a fav. Thanks for sharing, and I am excited to read more of your poetry. Joel Thornton

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Committed

Flashpoint in looking for its own face will wait - - a set of stark but brilliant metaphors to open eyes and ears - -thank you dear Satish. - Fay Slimm

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BEYOND TRANSCENDENCE

a place that is well beyond agony. great crafting...- JohnFeddeler

Oh gosh this is beautiful!!~Ebonyrose-Entelechy

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Reflecting The Praises

Liked this writing !"- Sagar D Rebel

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Drifting Pain

Strangely charming, well done mate.-martin james

Good write, again-Karen Fromtod 

your writings have their own unique style..keep up-Sammour

 

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Climbing

Darkness sings in the valley of sun. Tongues are free to weave the moon. Beautiful presentation with nice wording really. - Kumarmani Mahakul

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TENDERNESS

reminds me of a winter kaliedoscope - the patterns seems on fire - liked this one. - Lady A

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Sidelined

A strong write. Beautiful language. That last stanza pulled me up sharp. Liked.-jennie charles

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Perception

Yes, I know what you mean purnimamanhas,, yet I too feel drawn into Satish Vermas words. It is as if somewhere deep inside lays a glimmer of primeval understanding, something I cannot really put words to. It just makes me stop, think, read again, carry on with my life and then revisit.- Netty

I am too new to this style pf poetry.. I always click your posts in the anticipation that it challenges my understanding. Clearly, you are too mature a poet for amateurs like us. And the best part, with out understanding much, I hit the like button :)-purnimamanhas

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Naming

Intense and beautiful! Very Nice.- Wanda Huff

Love the imagery. Splendid read and write.- Brandon Whitten

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Occupation

How long these protests will continue? O mother. Nice flow in this poem shared on. -Kumarmani Mahakul

Excellent choice of wording flows with meaning..fantastic imagery.- Chris G. Vaillancourt

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The Fall

brilliant piece of writing! loved every word!-Lenny Gazbowski

too intense.. I liked the style and choice of words.-purnimamanhas

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Annette Abraminko

This morning I opened the Forward Petry Site and read two one your poems (which I commented on) and I was truly moved by your words.  Your words are unaustentatious illustrating stark truth without judgement.  I find that illuminating and tremendously profound.  I am moved.  You paint more profoundly than an artist with oils and allow your readers to absorb your words and take from them what they wish or need for their own journey without apportioning judgment of any sort.  This is a great lesson and I am grateful.

After reading the two poems, I read what you had written about yourself and then visited your Sewa Mandir web site which I read with interest.  Please could you tell me where I could read the research papers in English?

I wish to thank you and I shall continue to look in Forward Poetry to see what else you share there.  

Kind regards, Annette Abraminko

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NOT QUITE A PRAYER

VERY GOOD!! I love the way you have with words!! Thanks for sharing.-Joel Thornton

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Disbelievingly

Code of particles feel the entire life. When I cry.....like diatoms....in eyes erase the sun. Beautifully presented poem shared on. Very nice job done.- Pintu Mahakul

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DIMENSIONS

The first stanza -- arrogance before the gods, No. Second stanza -- a sacrificial gift and a true response, third is awesome -- dance with all your might! loved the dimensions.-David Meade

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Silent Prayers

Poetry.- David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

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Contraptions

Oh beautiful!xxx.-Karen Fromtod

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Armless Enemies

well, a deep piece it is indeed.-BrotherNewton

Nice.-Sagar D Rebel

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BEAUTY OF PAIN

unique and powerful writing.-  Chris G. Vaillancourt

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Revolt Of A Sutra

Brilliant Write! Loved Then Liked!-puds1957

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A Big Idea?

A Little Twisted For Me! Loved & Liked!-puds1957

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Cocktail

Gathered before the god of the evening we wonder, your poem calls us to be in the poet mind.- David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

Stanza 3...Line 3....Did you mean to write ecstasy? Check it out... Now, about the poem..I must admit that your message here was clearly "M O O N S" over my simple mind...as opposed to my arms...Sterling imagescaping though... throughout.- Frank James Ryan, Jr. / FjR

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Voices

A Lovely Write! Loved & Liked!-puds1957

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One Rendezvous

A right imagination and an awesome poem.- Gangadharan Nair Pulingat

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*On 100th Birthday of Alan Turing

Yes what actually happened ? a powerful poem , I have been interested in the story , this was a mind of amazing agility and deep mathematical beauty sad old men made his life miserable because of their inflicted judgment ,Your poetry stands aside in its voice .recommended.- David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

People who travel ahead of time have to commit suicide! - PrEmJi PrEmJi

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Spinning

Thank you for share! A bleeding flag of love my friend, between the comets, may not be shoot, may I suppose, guess, that will fly all by itself?... Please don't lose hope, please look around, now more people than ever are awakening, we may find the means to open up..- Elena S

The poem speaks directly to my poet task. - David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

You speak of the pain between the intangible, an indefinable place but never the less a place sensitive souls can feel. Thinking of you, take care.- Light H2o

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Sovereignty

Beautiful poem. Loved: The echo was searching the sky. -jennie charles

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UNATTENDED

Nice opening lines.- Seema Chowdhury

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Life Moves On

This is nice. Specially the second stanza.- Lina Guerrero

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PARTY

Butterflies like democracy are allegedly symbols of freedom ...That is unless they are caught in a free fall landing of fire and chaos... "Farenheit 451" comes to mind here, as it seems that we continue to burn & destroy our tools of knowledge and opportunity in realizing that this world we continue to abuse and destroy is NOT ours to abuse, as it is NOT our world AT ALL ! - Frank James Ryan, Jr. / FjR

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BECOME MY FATHER

sigh ,this poem of yours holds a somber note such a long time it takes to heal these souls sir, I see the shimmering time in the distance.- David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

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INTERRUPTED

Great observations create a very interesting collage in your unique style. Best to you always. - Light H2o

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VALENTINE

And why not! In the life that we are in, even 'in medias res' seems peripheral. The poem just goes inside! -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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FRACTURED TIME

I like that.. Very nice.- Royal Scribe

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The Ritual

Really nice piece you have created here . - Chris G. Vaillancourt

really nice piece" ...............................................................................nice so now to knock on the door.- David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

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No Rescue

A magnificent web you weave. Well penned. - Brandon Whitten

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ANOTHER TOMORROW

Really liked this poem, well written, imaginative. really really liked the last few lines:

Into the orphanage enters the day
riding on the dust of history.
My journey begins into time
to change into another tomorrow.

Not sure I understood the meaning of the poem, maybe you can explain it to me.-Thomas Heath

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FUTURE HIDES

Good morning. A thought provoking write as always. -Lady Dragonwyck

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INCARNATION

Very well done.- GaelicRogue

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Body Script

Great Write Strong! Liked!-puds1957

Powerful, thank you.-Madeira

life is by a thread amen brother.-T.G.Raymond

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CUP OF SORROW

All artists have their own personal meaning in the work they do, and I am not sure exactly what your's is here, but whatever it is, this is a lovely and deep thinking beautifully written piece, nicely done.- Flyingawayheart

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ON THE EDGE

wow. man that's good! flesh eats grass. petals know the music of death in fragrance. Genius! so much genius you possess. I am humbled. - Bo Raven S.

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A River Flows Underground

So descriptive and I love the imagery. Great poem, satishverma!-RazorRon

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Time Crossing

While I hold the pen and think to write I know time is crossing from word to word. Beautiful one.-Pintu Mahakul 

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TRAILBLAZER

very beautiful. evocative. transcending. I would reconsider however, selling your home of curse. And buy a condo of blessing.- Bo Raven S.

Very Compelling piece of poetry.- Electric Peace

An evocative write, expressive and deep.- Seema Chowdhury

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BLACKENED CROZIER

Motherhood dismayed!! -RAJESHWARI SRINIVASAN, MUMBAI

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STONE CATCHERS

incredible. this style never gets old. it's exciting and humbling to await your creations. The ants were waiting for the death of the lamb. That's creative and thought silencing. Usually it's the wolves that wait. But I never expected to see the ants. great mind you possess sir. a giant's mind. - Bo Raven S.

good form and good choice of words....well written, very well spoken.-  Electric Peace

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Night Light

Beautiful imagery. Lovely write.-Chris G. Vaillancourt

As usual, lovely poem.-jennie charles

Beautiful piece Satish...I really enjoyed it. :)-Gyrocaptain

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Boat Capsizes

True! Remarkably crafted!-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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PINK REMINDER

the colors are indeed changing. wonderful powerful images and symbols. surreal and sublime.- Bo Raven S.

Wonderfully poetic phrasing in this gem of a pink reminder my friend. I will not forget the "golden amnesia" of those "hot greens". First rate read.- Fay Slimm

just to journey a wave of words from your sea of mind yes , a poets delight.- David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

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LIKE A FIREBIRD

Powerful read! Love the delivery.-Stormi 

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Identically

fantastic. the fissure, the divide. the chasm that creates the rift. swallows the lions and the lambs into the abyss. not a moment to dream. only a silent choice of anguish scream.- Bo Raven S.

Yes sir poet so well the words know the hour here.- David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

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THE STERILITY

... I decided that sane thoughts was not the opposite of untruths - I could be wrong. - Stella

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ABSURD MYTHS

It was the words. They always get you in trouble. The letters are innocent ~ :D - I found that humorous. - Lady A

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A LONE JOURNEY

The image of a feather falling on the mirror is softly and slow motion rendered. Nice image for measuring time perhaps. - Lady A

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Incinerated

"... the sleep will level the night..." this caught my eye. - Stella

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CURBING

wow! your poetry is never dull. and never shallow. you are a true master of subtlety brevity and power. incredible once again. sometimes we find tigers, and sometimes tigers find us alone. we are not prepared for battle. unless we arm our selves with armor of your poetry. - Bo Raven S.

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LIKE AN ASTEROID

damn! somebody get the fire extinguisher. this poem, this man's poetry is fire. why you guys sleeping on Master Satesh's poetry?? You guys are truly missing out on some really good, deep shit. His poems are mind blowing and heart pounding. They leave me with a dropped jaw. Poet freak learn from this man. He has style and power, his lightning will make your poetry that more thunderous.- Bo Raven S.

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Animation

Nicely written.- Dark Wolf

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Dream Landing

I must be honest and admit that I really don't get this poem. (Are you referring to the sun?) I read it several times and still think the wording is beautiful.-LaceRibbon

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LANDSCAPING

Lovely and thought-provoking, cleverly and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery. I quite enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing!.- Electric Peace

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FOETICIDE

Very interesting piece. I enjoyed the overall theme & the images it caused my mind to depict... Well done...Peace-disDain

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New Dictionary

Nicely written.-Dark Wolf

Indeed, it is an immoral and disitute world !-C Boomer

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Bracelets

very well crafted... fine work.- Electric Peace

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Suicidal

Great write.-TonyC

I think some of this was lost in translation but what it gained I bloody love it.-Puppybreath

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New Year's Mirror

Great message in your poem. Nice work!- Electric Peace

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LIPS OF MOON WERE HOT

Fabulous in all aspects. -Partha Sarathi Paul, guskara-burdwan

The poem seems to be an oracle that's sprung from the earth, for a change. Yes, you may not be lucky this time, when even the fallen leaves waiting for the fruits refuse to be overthrown, when the star mirrors are working on the sun, among other things. Wonderful images, a pleasure to read and learn. Warm regards.-Supratik Sen, Hyderbad

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Steaming

Ooh I very much like this one. Some great imagery and veiled content. -Helenmatherrogers

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CLAMPDOWN

Well written as usual, and as usual you've captured a bit of truth.- Electric Peace

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INCARNATION

A real look at Reality. Enjoyed very much. Have an awesome week. -Lady Dragonwyck

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FRACTURED TIME

If we do not speak out, no one will know what goes on in the minds of men....much enjoyed, there is a message in it for all.- Fred Clark 

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FOUNTAIN

Short but sweet, well written creative, a good piece. I enjoyed the read and am looking forward to reading more of your poetry .-Thomas Heath

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IMPOVERISHED

delighted. ignited and incited. A poem walks like a truth. penetrated, venerated and exacerbated. such power in your flow, Master Satish! King of Poet Freak poets, all bow down and kiss your feet.- Bo Raven S.

This is captivating and just beautiful.- Electric Peace

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Still Birth

A compulsive read again and again!-RAJESHWARI SRINIVASAN, MUMBAI

From the first to the last line, this poem made for not only a compelling read but several re-reads to get its full import. As usual, it represents the trade mark abstract style of the poet to express serious issues of mayhem and death and this time, hope too! -Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, India

A masterclass poem by a master poet. Thanks for sharing,dear poet. -Partha Sarathi Paul, guskara-burdwan

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Collected Thoughts

This poem is very deep, the phrases you use are strong and powerful! - Electric Peace

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Her Looks

you are a master weaver of words. delight to read all your poems. there is a strange intoxication to your writing, that makes women heat up and moist. you seduce and reduce them to pieces, bits and pieces. good craftsmanship.- Bo Raven S.

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BURNT OUT WORDS

a bleak outlook on technology...but we see the effects at this early stage...it was a good read...-sundeath

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Quenching

This is quite an original piece. Different, unique, and with a sad undertone throughout. Well done!-Drongan

Love this particularly the reference to pomegranates.-jennie charles

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What Ending

Nicely written.-Dark Wolf

For me a lovely but dispairing poem. Another one of your poetic jewels.-jennie charles

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My Diary

Nice job, very much enjoyed.- Electric Peace

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Logistics

I so sorry Mr Satish Verma, this is the third poem in a row that I've added to my favourites. And I feel like I'm slightly stalking you. The atmosphere of your poetry is unrelenting. It compliments this pitch black morning I am sitting around in. You have the gift of rhetoric that captures the space between man and his environment.I genuinely love writing poetry - though I may not have that much on this site. But when I read your poetry, you make me love reading poetry even more. If it wasn't for the fact that have errands to complete, I put the kettle back on and read all of your other entries.- Olm

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A Saint Between Us

Nicely written.-Dark Wolf

As usual an excellent poem.-jennie charles

From the first stanza onwards this is a seriously good poem. I've added this to my favourites.-Olm

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SEEKING

whoooo! you are a prophet, spitting dragon flames to burn my treasure chests. good powerful thinker and genius. you are a charm immaculate Master Satish.- Bo Raven S.

This poem, to put simply - is brilliant. - Electric Peace

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Acrimony

Amazing.- Angelica Poe

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A SICKENED CRAFT

beautiful.- Emily Preston

Your words provoke a lot of images so worth reading several times. No monotony with this one.- Electric Peace

The cascading dream, not a kaleidoscope but a thunderhead only you can write like this , I have been mesmerized for years now.- David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

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GOLDEN VALLEY

Quit the Imagination so much power awesome story telling and keeps them mind working for the glory of the nations under God. Beautiful writings.- SuperSlimJim

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FATE OF THE KEY

I really love your works, very relaxing to sit & enjoy quietly.-Entelechy .

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DUALITY

Very profound and interesting to read!.- N e o S k i e s

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Conceiving

Read the poem but failed to understand it closely. But I liked it.-Gangadharan Nair Pulingat

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Give me some poison to live

The poem just takes you in. Warm regards.-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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Criminality

you have this remarkable talent to hold your readers to the edge of their seats and take them on a wildly thrilling ride. - Electric Peace 

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Fly-Trap

As challenging as ever with abstract metaphors, Satish ji. -GSP Rao, Hyderabad

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BENEVOLENCE

The dawn was still hiding in the bunker. Needed mercy of course. Nice thought expressed in this poem. Beautiful.- Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

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SYMPHONY

"SMILE, `BEAUTIFUL SATISH |*:*\(*{{....~- tristen temple

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Warming Up

Dark, well written.- Dark Wolf

Very dark imagery but well epressed.-  Gypsy Lane

A Great Write Very Expressive! Liked!-puds1957

Wonderful words but a chilling theme. Goor write.-jennie charles

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Moony Affair

A Lovely Write Liked!-puds1957

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POURING

Lovely...a pleasure to read, so filled with depth! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing. - Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2

Thoughtful and thought-provoking! - Electric Peace

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Death on grass

First the line "Violency has pregnancy" indicating the perpetuation of violence. And then these concluding lines:
Death on grass will never show
the second birth of the pain.
The spectre of violence all round us, is superbly articulated in this poem. Kudos Satish Vermaji. Thanks for sharing.-Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

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Debts of gratitude

With glory coming earlier, the satire is overhanging! Warm regards.-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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FOURSOME

Nice flow. - Lina Guerrero

very provocative and well constructed piece of writing.- Electric Peace

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MAKING OVERTURES

"...The pain eases, when the
"...The pain eases, when the memory fails..." That is true, I think. Forget the crappy stuff and remember the great times - the opposite of pain, joy? happens and you smile or at least feel good. - Nice line, rich in texture as always - Stella

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Tirelessly

Nice poem almost Zen like.-Dark Wolf

Beautiful. There is always a quiet insistence with your poetry. Sadness and reflection. -jennie charles

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Rendezvous

True mastry of metaphor… An experience (whether done or yet to come) that adds up to far more than the sum of its parts. - Chaos 1214

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Last Words

A Super Write! Liked!-puds1957

As usual, wonderful words with this dark poem. A pleasure to read.-jennie charles

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COLLATERAL

Wow! This really impacts... very fine concepts and poetry that is memorable... - Electric Peace

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Molten Grief

Very nicely done....................... - Electric Peace

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Obsessıon

an interesting piece ....Nicely done.- Electric Peace |

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Hurting Dive

A sense of forboding lurks in these lines. Intriguing read!- Gypsy Lane

Beautiful words. Full of sadness. Enjoyed.-jennie charles

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COMING OUT OF SKIN

brilliant write loved the word play =)- SuperSlimJim

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New Genre

The shadows behind the glass...... Expressi e and meaningful.- Seema Chowdhury

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Flowering of the Thought

From the pain, I took a leap. I smile and I exist. Warm regards, -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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Unblaming

mysterious yet good, I am clueless would you share with us its meaning? thanks!-T.G.Raymond

Mysterious words. I enjoyed reading this poem but don't know what it means. I'm a bit dense.
- jennie charles

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MONILIA

Gripping words. Much to read between the lines.- Light H2o

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SEMINAL

A severed hand writes the destiny of man.......beautiful poem composed in meaningful way.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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OSCILLATION

This poem seems gray, images of pending doom. I hear drones on remote. Genocide is an ugly concept. The world whirls - Stella

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Of a Virgin God

A good read, shocking at times! Warm regards.-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

truth betrayed is a calamity on humanity!!-RAJESHWARI SRINIVASAN, MUMBA

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SMALL WINDOWS

A strange but vivid poem on interaction I believe . The imagery is mind boggling . The direction depends on where the reader is coming from and can be anywhere from the future to the past . But I still don't know about the small windows .- South by Southwest

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DUMBFOUNDED

Dumbfoundead?- Pluto Shit

Profound thoughts beautifully expressed.- Electric Peace

The poets poet " so close the truth went brute" as indeed it must at times23 Sep by David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

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I AM SMILE WITH TEARS

Such painted visuals here, damn, damn, damn!-ODAVIS Candyass

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DEVOID OF FEVERFEW

this poem looks warm and inviting-hey.- saturdaymorning

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Hanging Garden

Very funny write, the words pube failure and Mar's glow have left me crying with laughter.-TonyC

Wonderful! Well Liked!-puds1957

Lovely write once more. -jennie charles

Beautifully worded. Great write.-cathryn

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LEARNING

Poignant and well developed piece of work. quite enjoyed the read. - Electric Peace

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ABSINTHE

A profound write which reaches out and stretches us out. The simple language and insightful message flow well.- Electric Peace

awesome stuff here. I love the second stanza especially.- rachel rae

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THE GUTSY CALL

From a stage, without a mic, close to the audience's ear - disparate ideas dance in a strange unity-Lady A

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From dusk to dusk

A terrible poem that haunts us! Savagery and civilization -- inbetween the gulf. The desire to commit wrongs. Great ideas got compressed. Excellent! -UK Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur

In a world of the living dead, where stereotype thoughts are nurtured as a safe measure, where hatred, anger, judgement, power, revolt are the key for looking at things around us, it is little wonder that the mysteries of living in peace and at peace with their pleasures would remain locked for good. Much enjoyed! -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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FLYING GLASS SHARDS

Good things comes even out of the worst. There is always that thing called hope. Enjoyed.-Patricia Grantham

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Empty Mind

Well written poem which makes me think. A young relative has Asperagers. It's sad.-jennie charles

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NOTES

Wonderful poem! I love the flow and simplicity of the words, plus the excellent way it was written. - Electric Peace

new moon reference.- Richard Dickenson

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DISTRAUGHT

I have not heard that phrase "It's the Gospel truth" in a long long time...the reworking works nicely - Stella

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Culpability

"...Stillness  as a requiem..." nice - Stella

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UNTIL PAIN

snap crackle , fantastic energy, only you can write this, amazing. - David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

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FRIVOLOUS

I love this one :)) - Mr. Frivolous

You never run out of great lines. Best regards! - Light H2o

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Moving Shadows

In my head this is about war? Pink rain shells? I am of course painting my own pictures as you are too bloody clever. Enjoyed it though. -Helenmatherrogers

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SLICES

"Unimpeachable" your imagery used here my friend - - the shock at the end of the first stanza should sting every reader with the words..... "Man has failed the god" and because the journey to reach the citadel of truth is long and tough humanity needs reminders like this from poets who see and who care. Thank you Satish for posting this clarion call with the admonishment of "Why are you hiding the pen ?". ......... Recommended.- Fay Slimm |

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BAILOUT

Ring around the mind the conundrum bell sounds well. - David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

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SUNFLOWERS

I.. Is this about sunflower harvesting from the perspective of the sunflower? - Phreaddy Doodlehead

The voice is heard only in the echo, good to hear you my old friend.- David Wetzel 

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Secret

This is a real poem. I loved it in truth. Thanks.- Mohammad Skati

good poem, a sparrow sits at window sill, I like it.-Gajanan Mishra

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Rising Curtain

lovely.-sueb

Lovely.x Liked-Karen Fromtod

Beautiful!-puds1957

Beautiful write. Something mantra like in these lines.-Gypsy Lane

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Unhitching

As usual, Satish, your poems are so profound and I read them over and over trying to understand. I come up with my own interpretation but your words are powerful and mystical.-jennie charles

I am with Jennie. You write wonderfully. And I often read many times over before concocting my own ideas.-Helenmatherrogers

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Each thorn was crying

For me, it is an image of an abondoned garden, or of a corner crying with possibilities neglected. Riding on your poem is risky, it takes you in and throws you off... however a pleasant ride indeed! Warm regards, -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

To see the innocence of the sin--an oximoron indeed! How dexterously you coin words! A gift indeed. -UK Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur

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Underbelly

A beautiful poem with limited lines and liked it.- Gangadharan Nair Pulingat

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A Labyrinthine Passage

Beautiful poem. Fantastic lines......
The city sleeps
in morning mist, without
opening the windows?
of consciousness.

Very true said in few lines...Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.- Geetha Jayakumar

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Sawdust Trail

I liked this piece. I found it quite mystical in a way. Thank you for sharing it. Great writing!- Drongan

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Repercussions

Love that line, ...'politics- the massive hunt for fake solutions'!x Liked-by Karen Fromtod

every word is gripping.-Preeti

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VANITIES

impressive.- ave chee

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Rampage

Good images here of feelings of hopelessness and helplessness.-jennie charles

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The Echo reaches the whole sky

Please call, shout, screech and the echo might just change the way we think about the world! The expanse of the poem cannot not touch! -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

Clashes and misunderstandings,
painful separations
lead to void and echo of voices

Maturity and thoughtfulness
forgiveness and openness
make better bondings in relations.-RAJESHWARI SRINIVASAN, MUMBAI

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PARSING

Beautifully penned! Love it! Pandita Sanchez

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PARALYSED

Good imaginations and good poem.-Gangadharan Nair Pulingat

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Gods Were Changing

a courageous poem from a good heart
The world will never be the same as they know the truth Thank you.-Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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SHARED HEAVEN

A cascade of poetically sensuous words on which to feed - expressions both deep in meaning and powerfully arranged deserve to read again and again - your masterly verse as always is amazingly good my friend. Recommended.- Fay Slimm

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WORDS PLAY

You show great skill and promise.-Dan Reynolds 

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OLDIE

Wonderful turns of phrase with amazing imagery - a delight to read this verse of remembered "crystal midmoon" adventures dear poet-friend.- Fay Slimm

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I am burning my bridges

This is how deconstruction begins! Best.-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

A very touching and aspirational poem from a great poet! Quite agree with Rajeshwari's comments.-Padmaja Iyengar, London, U K

Respected Sir, Your words of wisdom , are much much more inspiring !! Our lives till last breath are always worth living, Our remains after death are for Mother Nature,I feel so, Who nourishes our lives and never fails to do so !! She uses our ashes, only to create new beings!! Regards and Best wishes!! -RAJESHWARI SRINIVASAN, MUMBAI

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LAISSEZ-FAIRE

Satish, so interesting.. Would love to know more of your subject matter.-Lyric Man

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GENEROSITY

I agree. The last stanza really drove it home for me. A beautiful explosion.- Jeremy Martin

It has been such a long time since I have been here and read your poetry. Thank you for sharing this one. Love- Carol Sunshine Brown

I really like the last stanza.-Princess Xia

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Actualis

'I must speak of him in his absence'!!! Wonderful read! -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

"An abnoxious presence of unbeings" - says it all about what ails this world. Yet the last line holds out some hope. A deep and profound poem as usual! -Padmaja Iyengar, London, U K

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PLASMA FLOATS

I am watching them also my friend.- David Wetzel

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WILL YOU MARRY ME?

I almost love all your writes, awesome job..keep writing.-Fa Ozay

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Straws

I know the feeling of exhaustionand permanence in this image - appropo for me - be well.- Stella

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Perversion

1 of the 9 muses believed to inpsire and nurture the arts; the Muse of choral songs and dance. I had to look it up - Thanks for the lesson. I always learn here. - Stella

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I AM BURNING MY BRIDGES

I like this. The progression from burning your wheels at the beginning to burning your bridges at the end is good and I like the ashes strewn on the path between.-VH42 

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No Malaise

Lovely liked it !!-Sagar D Rebel

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GIVING AWAY

very touching and strong words with sympathy I can find in your poem.- Dark Iris

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Other God was sleeping

Wonder if the other God is not shaken out of His slumber hearing all those deafening and disturbing sounds... A vivid and telling poem! Great write, Mr. Verma.-Padmaja Iyengar, London. U K

Accept it or not Atiyodi Sir, that is how it is! -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

Vivid description of images of death! Learning experience! Warm regards,-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

Becoming is unbecoming, life is death, and light is darkness! Virtue is vice. all relative. Is it an acceptable philosophy? -UK Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur

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BLOOD DRAPED

You possess a rare quality and one which is admirable, you are honest with your thoughts and this causes your poem to seem all the more raw and relevant to the human condition. Your style is similar to Bukowski's. Keep writing. - Narc Road Pie

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OUTPLAYING

This is a complex artsy poem well painted!-Lyric Man

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The Signs

This violently ignorant world we are mortal members of could certainly use a concourse of song birds in an effort to open the eyes of the masses whose mission of hate with their religious beliefs as the excuse for their abhorrent,murderous acts as these ignorants continue to scoff at the Moon that shines on every front porch by continuing to discharge their anathema (as you say), via the back door.- Frank James Ryan, Jr. / FjR 

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PAPYRUS

Hello, Satish Verma....
Your work was quite descriptive with the symbolic lines that you gifted us....Your world yearns for the oncoming promise...-Respectfully,-The Bag Lady

 

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Aloneness of fire

I see the fire as that of liberation, of enlightenment. Random cry is of course insanely in vain, but bold and firm. Passive euthanasia is certainly a poetic invention. - Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

Effectively presents the hopelessness, helplessness and despair against the frenzy around us. -GSP Rao, Hyderabad

One can feel the images move in this sombre poem!-Padmaja Iyengar, London, U K

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Asia at the Edge

Superbly expressed agony. -GSP Rao, Hyderabad

Every line in this poem comes as a wound as well as with a healing power. The action of the I is also a suggestion, but that of a doer, not as a preacher. Excellent! It is such a privilege to be member of YS that you get to read and learn from poems such as these! Wonderful choice of co-text! Warm regards, -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

This moving poem on war, violence, healing and peace took my breath away!
Amen to your prayers, Mr. Verma. Thanks for sharing this evocative poem.-Padmaja Iyengar, London, U K

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*IMPACT

A nice lovely write, no doubt unity is strength.-Akhtar Jawad

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SOME PRELUDE

Whoa........... Heavy!- Dave Wood

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History was Walking

Tragedies of war and unnatural deaths happen in spite of our faith in an omnipotent, all-caring and protective 'Lord' - attributes perceived by us as hallmarks of the Supreme. We absolve the Lord of failure to be just with our convoluted reasoning. The poem makes us ponder. -GSP Rao, Hyderabad

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RITUALIST

This is outstanding.. I'm ready for the sequel !- Dave Wood

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INTEGRITY AT LARGE

would they but put away the seed bag.- David Wetzel

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Salvaging

Great write.- Helenmatherrogers

As esoteric as ever Satish.-Findo Gask

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Dignity

An individual free from conceptualisation does listen to the vibrations of the only truth, alone. Day is not vision, night not in obfuscation for the traveller. Pleasure reading. Warm regards, - Supratik Sen, 

Hyderabad

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SPOTTED IN GLASS

A meaningful write.- Seema Chowdhury

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Doves had stopped flying

The poem has a strange combination of poignance and acceptance. Excellent poem replete with poetic functions. Let us wait until the earth refuses to conceive and doves cease to fly. Otherwise, there doesn't seem to be a way out. Thank you for sharing this poem. Warm regards, -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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Blazing trail

Yes, thoughts! The second stanza is pretty much open in my opinion. The image of water has come out superbly to depict the ramifications thoughts have over us. Thank you so very much for sharing this poem! Warm regards, -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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Thinking Aloud

Nice poem revealing thoughts.-Bill Cantrell 

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Untrodden Snow

Delightful! Liked!-puds1957

Such fabulous style. I've not yet uncovered it's full meaning, but sometimes that is what makes reading others' work so interesting.-SuzyPallor

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PEACE

The poem whispered to me ...peace.- David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

Everybody likes the peace but the warmongers make it pieces?- nimal dunuhinga

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BLUE DIVINITY

Insightful and interesting write.- SuperSlimJim 

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Fury

bliss rising, falling, good writing, thanks sir.-Gajanan Mishra 

 

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RETURN OF THE POET

the scent of the old garden of life still the fragrance in the flower beds while seeds were crying? poet draws the season well!- nimal dunuhinga

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I was closing the weeping chapter

Wonderfully philosophical. And the talent to present symbols. A poet's heart is exposed.-UK Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur

'I was closing the weeping chapter' is here to stay until we do away with our respective angers, worries, intolerances, mistrusts, jealousies, expectations, blame-games and a whole lot of other Gracelessness. To build a new world, we have to build the Self. I am the blast, I am the demon, and I am the God, 'I am Brahman, and this is the only truth' amidst a pack of lies. As long as there is I and You, and not the only I, there is no liberty from the blasts in any form or shape. As usual, I have read this poem a number of times while being at work! Warm regards, -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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HARVESTING

Love this.- Latrice Smith

Beautiful.-my Soul

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FOOD WAS LEFT ON THE PLATE

sweet, almost sinister, I smile...I loved this. I hope you know the talent that a kid like me can see shining in your work...:D- O'Tadghan

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Ecstasy

The dead tongue now seeks syntax of the lips that smell like enemies.
At the epicentre! A pleasure reading the poem. Warm regards,-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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Millstone

Lovely write - hop you found answers. Peace be with you.-LaceRibbon

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DEATH AND VISION

The game of politics is always rough.No justice,no humanity,no authentic truth!.
Deception is the rule of the day,where as cold blood killings dominate.....Here lays the truth that, a politician can never be sincere.- Nuru J.I Mhina

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CONVERSATION

Love it. Very thoughtful. - Al Righty

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LAUGHING SKULL

captivating poem i lost myself in this poem during the read.well done.-Brian Jani

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CHEMISTRY

Lovely write Sir.! :)- Mr. Frivolous

NICE.- SHALINI -the solitary star

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FREEDOM AT LAST

Such bold and prominent work. Very impressive as usual. Another great piece by one of my favorite poets.- Solomon

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THE ECHO REACHES THE WH

Your words created an incredible scene in my mind. As always, I so enjoy your writes.- Lady Dragonwyck

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At Precipice

We are a strange race. slightly out of pace to our surroundings.-Gaffer

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Cocktail

This is way too deep for my understanding, im still new to poetry you see.-rian Jani

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ASHES OF HATE

Well penned Satish Sir. A nice end to the poem.- Jharna Choudhury

love it.- shay johnson

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PILL

Wow quite a mish mash of imagery and ideas,....a bit meta physical but maybe a bit sci-fi and apocalyptic to boot. Some write. - just Arun

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ANCIENT ADDRESS

loved the flow of it very much.- Neil Sarkar

Deep - samantha belfeld

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AGONY

First off, allow me to say that the first two opening lines are absolutely perfect. It truly sets the mood and a vague mental picture in mind. The next few verses give me the feeling of death and storm arising, agonizing the small voice of a frightened boy (the frightened choir becomes dumb). Then, the last two verses show that same boy in old age, agonized the same as ever before (the forgetful, yellow bones of a thin father). But, even though his youth was poor and crude, he still reaches to it as though it were somehow better (with a gift to fathom the flute, takes hold of the wind).
Maybe my interpretation is not nearly what you meant, but that is the sense I gather. Nevertheless, wonderful!- JLavender

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Genocide

Excellent write!
How can you acquiesce is the question and the wonder! A new model in the making as pointed out by the poet is because of a number of reasons, most of which I dare say are misguided and meaningless that turn the nature hostile, the sky guilty. Warm regards,-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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