SUN’S INHERITANCE

Very nicely put Satish,
I have also tributes a short poem to people, who thinks by killing and exploding innocent people on the street, the will go to heaven to have a heavenly life!- Dean 

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FREAKING OUT

this one feels a little disjointed... not up to your usual standard, Satish-Roger Wayne Eberle

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IN SELFISH VEIN

Only the author knows of his thinking, yet in metaphorical language it is rather powerful.
Death of one way to bring new life.-Andy Turner

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UNJOINTED

I especially like the 3rd and 4th stanzas Satish. Was it stupid to hope or tend one thing more than the other? We know not what the future holds. - Janna Hill

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EVERLASTING

EVERY ONCE IN A WHILE...WE 'RETRACE THE PATHS' OF WHAT HAS...OR...COULD HAVE BEEN. WE RETRACE 'DEAD THINGS'. THANK GOD FOR THE WISDOM TO QUICKLY 'CLOSE THE DOOR' AND MOVE AHEAD ON OUR JOURNEYS TO...'E- Joyce Bell

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ANTIMATTER

A very peaceful poem indeed. Enjoyed it. Cheers- Chibuzor Ikemenogo, Nigeria

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DECAYED CENTURY

Satish an emormously moving poem of the day the earth bowed in silence! Innocence was driven into a pile of rubble when the towers fell, I still remain speechless as the memories of those lost come to mind. Again, with you, I beg for Peace.- Marcia Schechinger, USA

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MOMENT OF TRUTH

ur lines 'conflict btw doubt and inherited faith' are quite interestin.- S.zaynub Kamoonpuri, Tanzania

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THE KISS ……………….

Satish as always a privilege to read your work, the metaphors with such contrast that take the reader to the innocent and the guilty and their "marriage" in war. The Holocaustal and all victims of any war who only smell the incense of fire over "rain". Your "songs" of peace will be forever heard and remembered as you continue in your work for peace and truth. Thank you Satish.- Marcia Schechinger, USA

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SUSPENDED EXECUTION

Oh Satish this was timely thot...i recently had an experience where it was painful to realize ..your loved ones or siblings or reveredones have grown smaller in their minds...so well composed..thanks for sharing...and bless you...- Rita Singh, India

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SOME QUESTION MARKS

Satish thoughts to be considered after the facts. Sad so many were lost to "haloed tombstone", before they were executed without any source of savior. I read your work and think of the Holocaust and can not fathom how such tragedy could have taken place, and how can 'sick men' get such followings -- many "question marks" in the waste of a human life. Always an honor to read your work Satish, thank you.-Marcia Schechinger, USA

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*Return Journey

You summarize the tale well, death as an arresting image stand out here.- Snehith Kumbla, Pune

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DRIFT ICE

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INVERTED

to a river of tears........... a painful truth.-seema chowdhury


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Death Of A Godman

A really great poem i really really like this one.
Good write.
May i invite you to read my new poem
called back in time.- Dave Walker

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FOR THE CLOTTING

 am not sure, I have a feeling of resentment.... but still acceptence. - Dolphine29


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JUST CRIED

Very good poetry my friend....images all clear in this write... - Michael J. Falotico

I am so happy to see the Soup back up and thrilled to be able to read your wonderful poetry Satish. May you have an exciting week filled with new found inspiration. Love- Carol Brown

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May I say

Your images are ever new and convey a volume. The first stanza is very forceful. Thank you for sharing the poem.- Kumarendra Mallick, Houston

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MOOD SWINGS

I really really love your poems, they are so purely poetic. But I wish you would
stay a while, talk with us, comment on our poetry so we can get to know you a better.
Thank you for your poetry and your consideration.- Kailashana

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A soul dies

Child is stolen from the mother's womb
Ashes were sent to the lake.
Then there is no hope to soul tohave thelife!- Puttu Kulkarni, Hege-Kumta

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ONCE UPON

I love that second stanza, in all the absurdity of the world you were still pursuing some sorta of sense to this life, to be able to help the hungry, but truth was lacking and it seemed to be lacking in a near future also...will there be a better new culture?...very much enjoyed!- LightH2O

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SECRET WAKE

Very stark statements --- your usual incredible writing.....- Lady Dragonwyck 

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GOING NOWHERE

Thanks for sharing...blessing to you!- LightH2O


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WORDS

wow, heavy and powerful, nicely done, k more than nicely am just a little speechless in awe. Thanks- Nancy Jones

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TIME TO ANSWER *

I agree, such criminals such answer for their crimes. I have thought and still think that too often there is an inexplicable readiness to forgive such people and let them go scott-free. How can someone who has raped and murdered and tortured, ever be pure of heart again? If it is possible, then one sign would be that such a person would then want to pay a price for the crimes, and would not want to waltz off free and unaccountable. // So much for the meaning of this poem, whose message is moving. // As for the word choice, I much admire the way you have expressed yourself. So many excellent poetic expressions: "death behind the bars"; "smug oasis"; "weeping walls"; "the strange shadows of crime and pardon"; and--most powerful and poignant for me, as it made me feel my own littleness and vulnerability, the fragility of the tether of my spirit to my body, and the frailty of my body beneath the celestial bodies: "the defeating moon." // A truly excellent poem in meaning, emotion, and esthetic structure. Well done, my brother poet. -poetwithcancer


What a torturous life and terrible memories for the poor victim...thank you for writing this.- LightH2O


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ROCKS AND SKULLS

I'm not the one who would always admit to being puzzled by a poem, but this surely does. The imagery however is superb and quite churning. Keep it up.- Kendzi


... as always, I enjoyed your banquet of mysterious phases that dance across my minds eye, tickling and teasing me to guess what secrets dwell behind your wonderful word songs.- york2frisco


Much enjoyed, but puzzled me.-LightH2O


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* BALD AND PAINFUL

You always amaze me...great write.-LightH2O


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SUNFLOWERS

From the beginning of your poem, to its ending, you have all, even the kitchen sink.- Kailashana

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VELVETY RETURN

Amazing and beautiful as always.- LightH2O


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HOMONYM

It's a dark vision, but a vision none the less.- tsultrimserri

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THE URBORN

deep writing here, you wake up the thoughts with the last line!- Cat


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LOST MY NAME

Very thought provoking my friend.
One day when man learns that it is better to talk than shoot
maybe just maybe we will begin to find the truth of real peace.- colin skilton 

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SLICES

Out here in the lonely wild
they wait us out
patient with pain
a storeyard for the discarded

have you seen the horses
cardamon cut outs
throat singing descriptions
of what it is like
not to be alive

broken porcelain moon
blood stained
leather worn saddles
moths

it wrote you
so write it back

enjoying your poetry, Satish Verma- Nesster

"Moon is riding on the church." Satish, a thousand more and you'll be home.- tsultrimserri

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Wait

Satish saheb, you picture a pathetic situation caused by man's apathy in the society. You are very true, and you have come heavily on the social indifference.-Kumarendra Mallick, Houston

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BAILOUT

I've met some people
who are counting
on the end of the world
to bail them out- sstoth0

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MIRROR RAVAGED

Yes, enough to make you angry and go insane, the duplication of laws, the violation of rights by the elders, while still keeping the facade of a perfect law...such poverty that the poor borrow from death (satirical comment)...last line not too sure, maybe those not ready yet unite?...all in all a very good write full of symbolism, injustice and corruption.- LightH2O

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TRINITY

Great lines as usual...love that last long sentence, yes, they want to keep everyone drugged or poison to keep them from waking...excellent point.- LightH2O

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ABANDONED

Very powerful..I feel the intensness in this piece..- Irene Meack

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BRAIN-DEAD

Your intense proclivity for the creatively absurd is on spectacular stage here....Though, I cannot fully discern the whole of the completeness of this work, the resplendent throes that shadow it are captive ,however moreso attracting is your employment of serpentine or wrap-around verse. The lone closing couplet, works well as most envboys do.....I like this,Satish...Perhaps my interpretive largess is not as acute as i think it be? Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR

Wow! My friend! A very thought provoking and powerful write that clearly shows your Wisdom and Experience! Thank for sharing! God Bless You! Keep it up! Love and Peace for always!-Romeo Della Valle

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ABDICATION

heavy writing yes..
thanks for sharing your poetry here...it is written almost flowingly and with much great effect.- editor_in_chief

In-depth write as always. Have a great day, sir.- Lady Dragonwyck

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UNBORN

Morning, Sir -- very thought-provoking write as always. May your weekend by lovely.- Lady Dragonwyck

Your words re so crisp, vivid and expressive- Tina 

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Ode to loneliness

Your images, Satish saheb, are not easy to understand, yet I enjoy reading your poems whenever you post.- Kumarendra Mallick, Houston

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THE SILENT COLOURS

It is in your truth we hear again of man's inhumanity to man... A Passionate verse...My heart has ears... Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing- Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2

Sounds so sad...thank you for sharing.-LightH2O

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WRINKLING

Another great write!- LightH2O

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SLICES

I felt three different poems, nice- Robin B. Lipinski

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*PLASMA SCREEN

Wonderfully written very vivid words grace this page, so deep.- Tina

A disturbing account, and regretfully might be true.- Dean 

Satish: very well written. Your writes always deeply touch me.- Lady Dragonwyck

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* VELVETY RETURN

Deep and lovely tribute...thanks for sharing!-LightH2O


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HOMECOMING

Very vivid images it brings me to some place far away and yet feels very much like home.- Tina

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SINGLE DESIGN

Enjoyed your deep and meaningful write.- LightH2O

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CONFERRED GUILT

darnit....i hate when the spoons do the unthinkable and act like swords...
satish...i can't say i know where you are coming from.
however i could relate to the part about the title meaning guilt i know about that.
also, i decide where i like to keep spoons in the kitchen ...altho i do not have ownership in a house or even an apartment or any other such .....so the position is almost meaningless to my method...
please accept this comment for what is worth...i see your category as inspirational...so screw it i guess another day suckin Gods good air makes sense. not sure if you deal with comments ...so i guess unless im told otherwise...i will leave this detailed practical plain talk present tense jimmy jamma.... adios and aribba derci- editor_in_chief 

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JUST CRIED

Quite a bleak scenario on this write.- LightH2O


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THE TROUBLED FAITH

I understand your deep dark pain... I would like to understand it more, good write.- Irene Meack 

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CARBON CHOKING

Sad situation,the last two lines are promising... yes! you're busy " grafting the skin of unhealing wounds"- LightH2O

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ENOUGH

S.V.,, very interesting,,,, thank u for sharing. - Poet Destroyer ~ A

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IN REVERSE

I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Satish. I wish you a most enjoyable weekend with lots of sunshine and happy thoughts. Love- Carol Brown

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