Saturday, June 27, 2015

Along The Path

The arrival does not finish
the journey. There are far―
away worlds beyond
your fantasies. .... nicely envisioned. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. ......10-Kumarmani Mahakul

Left On The Dunes

No truth was ready to accept. I like it.-Gajanan Mishra

Other God Was Sleeping

@ satish_verma, the other god was sleeping, indeed.
Matters are not tended well as it is. Philosophical.-Editorial Board ( @Editorial_Board )

Second-Hand Event

An enjoyable piece; appreciated the message; nicely conceived poem; well done!.-Joe Breunig

Of A Virgin God

The reference of the virgin god who did not want to succumb to the human greed is a very relevant concept in these time of abject corruption., very nicely put.- Iman ( @Iman_Singh )

Wednesday, June 24, 2015

Sunday, June 21, 2015

Left On The Dunes

no truth was ready to accept. I like it.-Gajanan Mishra

Bowl Was Still Empty

nice thoughts expressed in this poem…reflects how we all are just lost in the big world and don’t know what we seek nor fear…-Shamala Chandran ( @Shamala_Chandran )

Thought provoking one.-Geetha Paniker ( @Geetha_Paniker )

At last I read something I can relate to
words with depth
abstract emotions
psyche explored
hope hoped for
and then nullified…

bravo bravo bravo- Zyborg ( @zyborg )

Waking Is Painful

This is very deep and probing poetry.-Sallee

Pleading

Magnificent word-weaving. Really, I enjoyed this. - Julia Veltman

Saturday, June 20, 2015

Death on grass

Quite a commanding take Satish- make you want to read between those lines….I think its a killer.-minakshi.balasubramaniam ( @minakshi )

Thursday, June 18, 2015

COMMENTRIES

Book of pain nicely opened. Yet, let's hope to see light at the end of the tunnel.-U Atreya Sarma, Pune

Yes Sir, time is running out. Back of her head is bald. futile to try to catch her.-UK Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur

Give Me Some Poison To Live

How ironic what people generally take to die, poison in this case has to be taken for becoming alive again. Beautiful irony!- Iman ( @Iman_Singh )

Lips Of Moon Were Hot

The comparisons are just WOW! And I love the lines”concept of the sky was a lie” and “You had cheated the boat, you may not be lucky this time”- Iman ( @Iman_Singh ) 

Walking Down The Lane

Wonderful imagery. Nicely presented. Enjoyed. Thanks for posting.- Kumarmani Mahakul

Wednesday, June 17, 2015

Kleptomaniac

Popular icons are idiotizing the worlds population, and the irony is the glory we associate with it.-Nadeem Qazilbash ( @nadeemq ) 

Tuesday, June 9, 2015

WAITING TO BLINK

This poem is lovely. I can't quite comprehend the meaning, but I know it is an intelligent write and it rolls off the tongue!-Anna Hopper 

Metaphysical View

Wow... This is so full of intellect on so many levels... Great job. - Michael Cardinal

Saturday, June 6, 2015

Today

Love this & the picture you're painting. Tfs. Check out some of my poems? - adrein blue

Wednesday, June 3, 2015

Soliciting

Wing pierced, like
butterfly amidst cacti,
still trying to reach your lips.

Thanks for this amazing poem, Sir. You have elevated the status of personal pain and suffering to something the world desires and craves for. Following lines are the most poignant ones.-Rajnish Manga

Tuesday, June 2, 2015

Armless Enemies

"The vortex of existence needs surgery."..."I am asking god to pray for me." So much food for thought in your lines as usual. Warm wishes for you. - Light H2o

Monday, June 1, 2015

Devoid Of Feverfew

There is a certain fear, a silent calming effect felt after reading this poem…-Preeti ( @Preeti_Vandana )