Sunday, August 30, 2020

In Your Own Temple

Wow! Superb lines...
You speak via eyes,
how to live in sanctum sanctorum
Loved the verse Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, karnal

Friday, August 28, 2020

Morning Landscape

wonderful!
I wish I wasn't as ignorant of some of the context you were alluding to, I imagine the read would have been that much more profound.-L. B. Mek

Thursday, August 27, 2020

The Atavism

Ever read something so deep and mind-blowing that you lay your head back afterwards and try to recover from the overwhelming emotions? I just did, reading this one.-nourayasmine

Watercolors

I love all of your poems. I love all of your metaphors. I love all of your thoughts. You are an inspiration. You are a brilliant writer.-nourayasmine

Wednesday, August 26, 2020

This Violence

Lovely lines...

Worst was not enough
I want to drink hemlock
to turn my neck blue.
Simply loved the beautiful poem Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

Monday, August 17, 2020

Pain Of Pain

Nice. Happy Independence Day sir.-Ujjal Mandal, West Bengal 

Loved he beautiful lines Satish Ji...
This was invisible
love, before sunrise. Dream gazer
goes green in dark.-
Happy Independence Day! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal

Sunday, August 16, 2020

Life's Pilgrimage

Hello Satishverma,
A superb ✍ write.
Life is indeed a journey.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.-FineB

Saturday, August 15, 2020

Reaching Out

Don't stop writing! I should take my own advice lol-RiverJordan

Understanding Me

Such beautiful lines...
Where do we meet
at horizon? I wanted to
say hello to bright moon.

Wow! loved the poem so much Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

Friday, August 14, 2020

The Blessings Fail

What a complicated poem, I'm not even sure what you intended to be about but it resounds with meaning in me. Love lost and seeking meaning in apocryphal scrawlings on the wall. You did not set a scene as much as you set a feeling.-T.S. Ulmus 

Tuesday, August 11, 2020

Hyperaesthesia

Beautifully expressed...
You generate your
own rains to wash the stains

Loved the poem Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal

Wednesday, August 5, 2020

Tuesday, August 4, 2020

Where Dreams Are Killed

Can you redefine truth
in dark, when moon was unable
to stop the butterflies.........beautiful

Define
truth in darkness
stopping butterflies by moon
of life
terrible beauty is born here-Mahtab Bangalee

Sunday, August 2, 2020

In Bell Time

Moon was not at all dead. Moon was very calm and we felt moon's beam. This poem is very amazingly penned with much brilliance.-Kumarmani Mahakul

Saturday, August 1, 2020