PATH OF DESTINY

A miscarriage... Then beauty in imagery awakened by poetry brings relief from pain...amazing line "I run towards a non truth revenge of love overwhelms" ...inward journey beautifully described .... "intimate trust melts like lava" another fine line, can be seen as warm and binding, or dissipating. Recommended- Some Girl

http://www.poetfreak.com/

REMEMBERING ADAM!

wonderful perception....unique illustration....classy climax with serious message. - partha sarathi paul ,  guskara-burdwan 

 

http://museindia.com/

THE RED ROCK...

I enjoyed reading your poem and especially liked the stanza;

I was longing
to meet myself today,
to find the throw back.
Which of me was real?
An antique bird feeding on honeydew?
Or a honed up desert hurricane? - Avril Meallem, Jerusalem, Israela

http://museindia.com/

HOLDING THE POEMS

The "screaming moon", wow good use of language.- just Arun

I have missed your wise words sir...thank you for sharing this masterful write.- Kaylanna George

GREAT INK.- MatloobBokhari

http://www.poetfreak.com/

EMPATHY

Down the pathways we walk; happy or wary of the future. As always, LOVE your writes. -Lady Dragonwyck 

http://www.creative-poems.com/

CLAIM FOR FAME

Wow. The roots squirm. That is one of the most expressive lines I've read. Great write.- cjblaze

http://www.poetfreak.com/

THE HABITAT

There's a place i call the habitat. It's a nature preserve here in Tucson. I always feel more alive there. Very well written!- cjblaze

http://www.poetfreak.com/

LABYRINTHS

Not sure I always understand, but some of your phrases and images are amazing. Like this one: "Time's white hands are snarled in pain; cannot write the elegant script of surrender."- InTheRain

http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/

ETERNAL WAIT

really enjoyed the inspiration in this write...keep penning on !- honesty811

http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/

NON-STORY

A profound piece that urges the reader to think.-Gita Ashok

This is a great poem, and I love the title. Thank you.- DeadNationScholar

http://www.poetfreak.com/

MUD PATH

"The echo of pulsating memories...I lay out a mud path for the reader." you create more than a mud path, you create a world of amazing images bordering between the abstract and the surreal.- LightH2O

The read takes me to the very "edge of a prayer" in this cascade of meaningful expressions - thanks for posting it Satish.- Fay Slimm

http://www.poetfreak.com/

IMMOVABLE

"Nothing could be redeemed....I wanted endless journey to find the windows." your deep phrases always get to me.-LightH2O

And once fear starts, nothing can stop it. Butsome profess tobe able. But I have yet to meet one who is fearless and still lives.-Ultra Violet 

http://www.poetfreak.com/

WITHOUT BARGAINING

Can we live without bargaining? my dilemma too................thanks.- nimal p. dunuhinga

The price of peace is death and the cost of war is life. But there must be something more but never in love.- Ultra Violet 

http://www.poetfreak.com/

VIGILANCE

some forceful, powerful emotions hidden between these lines..running up one's imaginations...- Wendy Meyer

http://www.poetrysoup.com/

MUD PATH

The read takes me to the very "edge of a prayer" in this cascade of meaningful expressions - thanks for posting it Satish.- Fay Slimm

http://www.poetfreak.com/

IMMOVABLE

And once fear starts, nothing can stop it. Butsome profess tobe able. But I have yet to meet one who is fearless and still lives.- Ultra Violet 

http://www.poetfreak.com/

REMEMBERING ADAM!

Sir, very in-depth write. I felt a lot from this. I ALWAYS enjoy/love your posts. Have an awesome weekend.- Lady Dragonwyck

http://www.creative-poems.com/

ANOTHER BLOSSOM

intriuguing- labchaddy

http://www.poetfreak.com/

BLIND ALLEYS

What Would I Liken This World It's Moment In Time To ? A Predator, Upon The Prowl It's Greatest Desire To Crawl Into One's Heart As Mind; Bind Them With It's Misery ? Kind Of Like That Song By Elton John: Someone Saved My Life Tonight; You Almost Had Me Roped And Tied ? Hang In There Beautiful Satish, And I Do Love Your Young Heart's Passions ˜ My Love, Always- Johnny Rhinem

http://www.poetrysoup.com/

WAKING IS PAINFUL

"Old memories" are indeed "indelible" my friend - - this awesome piece of work has me spellbound. A stunning read.- Fay Slimm

http://www.poetfreak.com/

COMMUNION

What is a communion..without acup? Good poem.- Ultra Violet Hellfire

http://www.poetfreak.com/

The Scream

Insanity One Two Five ? You Know, Sweet Beautiful Satish, Standing Within Our Creator As Father's Arms Amid Heaven; Showing Myself His Beautiful Love * Tis Hard For Myself To Fathom An Eternity Of Anything Less ˜ Smile, Hang In There Baby Girl! Love- Johnny Rhinem

http://www.poetrysoup.com/

WATCHING A GALAXY

Ha, a call to Opening.. Nice- Geo 

https://gspoetry.com/

LIVING LEGEND

Poignant and powerful expression.- Gita Ashok

http://www.poetfreak.com/

THE WATCHMAN

You always amaze me, keep the ideas flowing.- LightH2O

http://www.poetfreak.com/

ARROGANT CURVES

Original and loaded with interesting imagery.- LightH2O

http://www.poetfreak.com/

SMILE BECOMING LARGER

an interesting write with a mystical touch.. I agree with Gita- Sandra Martyres

A mystical write with fine use of imagery. Thought-provoking, too.- Gita Ashok

Dark is creator..light is destroyer. - Ultra Violet

http://www.poetfreak.com/

ONE GARDEN CITY

Society and our neck breaking race with greediness has spoilt everything your last line I mean concluding ///Sexless virginity is at stake! beautiful 10- Aftab Alam Khursheed

http://www.poemhunter.com/

BODHISATTAVA

The title fits aptly for this elegant poem. I have read you for a long time. You have a fan now. - Maya

http://www.creative-poems.com/

THE LOST GENERATIO

Feeling this piece nice work.-Lazarus (DaGreat)

Such finesse. I enjoyed the wrapping put into this thought. Art! Respect friend.- bubblegutzbrown

https://gspoetry.com/

FALL OF A TENDER DOCTRINE

Yes, sometimes, because of how rotten our world has become, we dare say with impunity that Death is the only thing that can save us from Life.- GEURRU

Make sure to catch it!- Ultra Violet

http://www.poetfreak.com/

PEACE AFTERWARDS

Good write, Congrats.- WILLIAMSJI

http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/

IN THE GARDEN OF GETHSEMANE

Your always heartfelt write. You always "touch my soul" with your words. - Lady Dragonwyck

 

http://www.creative-poems.com/

UNSPOKEN SECRETS

Sir, you are one of my favourite poets. I wrote so many comments to your poems in museindia.com. None was published to my great disappointment. Your poems have great depth, metaphysical allusions and enigmatic surrealism ..great to read and reread.- sathyanarayana

Good read!- Eusebius Han

http://www.poetfreak.com/

AN UNBORN PRAYER

Very Powerful.- msfresh07 

https://gspoetry.com/

MAULED SELF

Indescribably gripping work, like no other.- LightH2O

http://www.poetfreak.com/

EPILEPTIC TRUTH

Is like you travel outside your body to find the most extraordinary and original lines that makes one wonder. "The dust smears the face of epileptic truth."- LightH2O

http://www.poetfreak.com/

FEET OF CLAY

Nicely written- Weeping willow

http://www.poetfreak.com/

MY BLUE VALLEY BURNS

Nicely written- Kiran Bantawa

 

http://www.poetfreak.com/

RESSURECTION

Sir: I like this write. I wonder when my time to leave "this" Life comes, what will happen to me. I want to just go sit in the Library of Heaven and see if I can find my "records" and try to understand "Me". Excellent write, as always.- Lady Dragonwyck

A journey without destination must be tiresome and noisome, indeed...I agree~- Wide Awake

http://www.creative-poems.com/

INVISIBLE PARTICLES

I feel the hurt and dementions of pain and sense of confinement that is being so masterfully expressed here. Well done!- KayinBH

https://gspoetry.com/