Paralyzed Words

All desires have become
wants. And anonymous hurts convert
into scars of an unhappy life.
How true it is!-Padma, Hyderabad

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Near The Sun

The enlightened message of your poem was very touching. One the world should sing in dark days such as these to inspire hope again. Thank you for sharing your poem with us.-Carlos Lorenzo Estrada

Some great imagery here. I felt as though I was in the heat of the desert with no shade to provide escape from the burning sun. The coolness of night would have been most welcome.-Chris Shaw

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The Fabulous Dream

The current scenario and dreadful life are well depicted, Satish jee!-Padma, Hyderabad

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The Fabulous Dream

very good.-pratanubanerjee

This world IS too much, and the last line hits home... Brilliant work! 🥀-mdelleviolette

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Drowned Faith

Such a beautiful poem packed with many emotions and effects, Satish jee!-Padma, Hyderabad, Dec 23, 2021

Sir, its a true learning experience to read your work. this one conveys intensity of emotions words and images.-N K Jyothi, Mumbai

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Stillness Prevails

pure beautiful poetry Satish that I need not understand anymore than the wind in the reeds and yet sense somewhere that I do.. -Dale Costello, Australia

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Poem On Thorns

Excellent dear poet!-Dr Dillip K Swain

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Standing In Queue

It was the carnage of moment.
The brutality of its strength
casts spell.

There was a quick about-face.
Dark night
will paint your face, with stars.'
(a great write
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)-L. B. Mek

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Coding An Ocean

As they say, silence speaks volumes.
I have a question. In the third stanza, will it perhaps be "a simple touch" instead of "a simile touch"?
I could be very wrong though, so forgive me if I am.
A good sad write, in just a few words. Enjoyed reading it!-Shruti

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Let It Go Hollyhock

A beautiful smile to react
with my voiceless noise, the book
of an unprinted epic of grief.
In a happy moment, grief is smoothly expressed.-Padma, Hyderabad

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The Meaning Tremble

sheer Poetic, sublime
I'm in love!
with that last stanza..
how very kind of you
to choose to share
your poetic genius, Guru!
thank you.-L. B. Mek

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Roses Don't Bleed

It's the language of poetry. -mdelleviolette

These posts still make no goddamn sense but at the same time they do.-eyeofvortexyt

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Stillness Prevails

Brilliant!!!-L. B. Mek

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Soldiers in Line

Ah! What an expression, Satish jee! There's no end to water in eyes! Every stanza talks about pain.-Padma, Hyderabad

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Travesty Of Stars

Daybreak, awakens
to shade our nightmares
into reality's scenes..
Moon hides, till our eyes
can be blanketed in stardust, dreams
we the pinnacle of Earthly evolution
merely, tadpoles on fishhooks
in the face
of a universe's, true might..
(a brilliant write!
thanks for sharing, Guru)-L. B. Mek

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A River In Your Eyes

The story of tears and feelings boldly said, Satish jee!-Padma, Hyderabad

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Some Fairy Tale

so morbidly true,
there are so many who profit from other's pain
whilst complaining
about the stresses and strife, in their lives.-L. B. Mek

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Taking Sand Bath

but we still gather
either side, of that same locked door:
some who believe in miracles
others
who are adamant about merit...
(in the words of the great Li Bai:
'Lifting my head I gaze at the bright moon
Bowing my head, thinking of home.')
another brilliant write
thanks for sharing, Guru!-L. B. Mek

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Incendiary Dreams

There is no pain when
sunsets. I will find my peace
in the darkness of a burning heart.
These words are inspirational and encouraging, Satish jee.-Padma , Hyderabad

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Not Like Me

Fantastic. I am very impressed. To say so much with so few words is a true talent. Please, keep it up.-C E Thomas

Such powerful imagery and the second stanza so beautifully penned.-woundedheart

never go to sleep angry, we agreed
and so
we've spent weeks, without sleep
so I'll hold the bell
you - pull the cord, we'll
ring-in our submission
at the same time;
and let the moon, spotlight
another's, stubborn romance...-L. B. Mek

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In God's Shadow

I believe that one Absolute is that God, Shiva, Allah, YHWH,
Higher power, is LOVE and that God indwells each being, embodied
or not. i am grateful that you are here. Are you the most prolific
of all the poets here?-saiom

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In Emptiness

always an interesting and worthwhile read Satish.. cheers DC.Dale Costello, Australia

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Cosmetic Effect

when hypocrites, dare
to test limits
in their hypocritical faiths
then, pause - remembering
that taste of failure's regrets
'to infinity and beyond: onwards
to indignation's, spatial nations'.-L. B. Mek

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Trapped Wishes

you, at your subtle poetic best
poetry to meditate over
than merely read,
thank you, Guru.-L. B. Mek

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Pray For the Observer

Most of our lives is spent living , very few observe objectively and among those very few are able to act in a constructive fashion. As usual strong symbolic poetry Sir.-N K Jyothi, Mumbai

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Under The Lens

This is so beautiful and graceful. Thanks.-KlineXcreed

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Message from saiom, https://www.postpoems.org/

Dear Satish,
Does your name mean God is truth?
I had the honor of visiting india for 2 months in this life and
my guru said that I had lived in india 500 years ago
I am disturbed by the precipitate decline in guests in the last month and wonder if there are any poets you could invite to join us
Thank you for being here and for your prolific pen.-saiom

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Hyperaesthesia

a friend is experiencing hyperaesthesia now
' You generate your
own rains to wash the stains.' beautiful
dear Satish please invite fellow poets to join us here, including those
ho have not yet penned a poem.-saiom

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Cascades

Short, yet the wording has a nice touch to it so it works. Good job!-debtoroftrust

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Gordian Knot

'The elected path
haunts us. Where the moon
sinks in dark sky'..
and we ask, who - elected?
just so we have an answer
to lament over...
(sadly most of your context in this write was lost to me, but still
a wonderfully weaved poem,
thank you for sharing: Guru)-L. B. Mek

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To Tell The Truth

beautiful
'Cannot hear your echoes
from the valley of tears.'-saiom

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Were You A Maneater?

Waiting and expectation will definitely trouble anyone. You expressed it well, Satish jee.-Padma, Hyderabad

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Were You A Maneater?

Love the word usage and also the 'complex simplicity' in your writing. Well done!-debtoroftrust

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Moonlight Through The Filters

no matter how bleak or macabre
its underlying, nihilistic content
when its written: this poetic
it can only be inspirational, as Art!
(another great write
thanks for sharing, Guru!)
'In moment
of hubris, all chandeliers
will crash
and prehistoric dirt, will cling
to hairy legs.'
brilliant imagery,
how deeply your metaphors
can be excavated, to mine
the treasure's in your wisdom-L. B. Mek

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How to Say, Salaam?

I feel the role of a human being is well explained here and violent thoughts about a person too are informed precisely, Satish jee. Well written.-Padma, Hyderabad

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