Hurting Dive

A sense of forboding lurks in these lines. Intriguing read!- Gypsy Lane

Beautiful words. Full of sadness. Enjoyed.-jennie charles

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COMING OUT OF SKIN

brilliant write loved the word play =)- SuperSlimJim

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New Genre

The shadows behind the glass...... Expressi e and meaningful.- Seema Chowdhury

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Flowering of the Thought

From the pain, I took a leap. I smile and I exist. Warm regards, -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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Unblaming

mysterious yet good, I am clueless would you share with us its meaning? thanks!-T.G.Raymond

Mysterious words. I enjoyed reading this poem but don't know what it means. I'm a bit dense.
- jennie charles

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MONILIA

Gripping words. Much to read between the lines.- Light H2o

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SEMINAL

A severed hand writes the destiny of man.......beautiful poem composed in meaningful way.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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OSCILLATION

This poem seems gray, images of pending doom. I hear drones on remote. Genocide is an ugly concept. The world whirls - Stella

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Of a Virgin God

A good read, shocking at times! Warm regards.-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

truth betrayed is a calamity on humanity!!-RAJESHWARI SRINIVASAN, MUMBA

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SMALL WINDOWS

A strange but vivid poem on interaction I believe . The imagery is mind boggling . The direction depends on where the reader is coming from and can be anywhere from the future to the past . But I still don't know about the small windows .- South by Southwest

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DUMBFOUNDED

Dumbfoundead?- Pluto Shit

Profound thoughts beautifully expressed.- Electric Peace

The poets poet " so close the truth went brute" as indeed it must at times23 Sep by David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

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I AM SMILE WITH TEARS

Such painted visuals here, damn, damn, damn!-ODAVIS Candyass

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DEVOID OF FEVERFEW

this poem looks warm and inviting-hey.- saturdaymorning

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Hanging Garden

Very funny write, the words pube failure and Mar's glow have left me crying with laughter.-TonyC

Wonderful! Well Liked!-puds1957

Lovely write once more. -jennie charles

Beautifully worded. Great write.-cathryn

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LEARNING

Poignant and well developed piece of work. quite enjoyed the read. - Electric Peace

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ABSINTHE

A profound write which reaches out and stretches us out. The simple language and insightful message flow well.- Electric Peace

awesome stuff here. I love the second stanza especially.- rachel rae

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THE GUTSY CALL

From a stage, without a mic, close to the audience's ear - disparate ideas dance in a strange unity-Lady A

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From dusk to dusk

A terrible poem that haunts us! Savagery and civilization -- inbetween the gulf. The desire to commit wrongs. Great ideas got compressed. Excellent! -UK Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur

In a world of the living dead, where stereotype thoughts are nurtured as a safe measure, where hatred, anger, judgement, power, revolt are the key for looking at things around us, it is little wonder that the mysteries of living in peace and at peace with their pleasures would remain locked for good. Much enjoyed! -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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FLYING GLASS SHARDS

Good things comes even out of the worst. There is always that thing called hope. Enjoyed.-Patricia Grantham

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Empty Mind

Well written poem which makes me think. A young relative has Asperagers. It's sad.-jennie charles

enlightening-T.G.Raymond

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NOTES

Wonderful poem! I love the flow and simplicity of the words, plus the excellent way it was written. - Electric Peace

new moon reference.- Richard Dickenson

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DISTRAUGHT

I have not heard that phrase "It's the Gospel truth" in a long long time...the reworking works nicely - Stella

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Culpability

"...Stillness  as a requiem..." nice - Stella

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UNTIL PAIN

snap crackle , fantastic energy, only you can write this, amazing. - David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

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FRIVOLOUS

I love this one :)) - Mr. Frivolous

You never run out of great lines. Best regards! - Light H2o

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Moving Shadows

In my head this is about war? Pink rain shells? I am of course painting my own pictures as you are too bloody clever. Enjoyed it though. -Helenmatherrogers

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SLICES

"Unimpeachable" your imagery used here my friend - - the shock at the end of the first stanza should sting every reader with the words..... "Man has failed the god" and because the journey to reach the citadel of truth is long and tough humanity needs reminders like this from poets who see and who care. Thank you Satish for posting this clarion call with the admonishment of "Why are you hiding the pen ?". ......... Recommended.- Fay Slimm |

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BAILOUT

Ring around the mind the conundrum bell sounds well. - David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

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SUNFLOWERS

I.. Is this about sunflower harvesting from the perspective of the sunflower? - Phreaddy Doodlehead

The voice is heard only in the echo, good to hear you my old friend.- David Wetzel 

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Secret

This is a real poem. I loved it in truth. Thanks.- Mohammad Skati

good poem, a sparrow sits at window sill, I like it.-Gajanan Mishra

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Rising Curtain

lovely.-sueb

Lovely.x Liked-Karen Fromtod

Beautiful!-puds1957

Beautiful write. Something mantra like in these lines.-Gypsy Lane

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Unhitching

As usual, Satish, your poems are so profound and I read them over and over trying to understand. I come up with my own interpretation but your words are powerful and mystical.-jennie charles

I am with Jennie. You write wonderfully. And I often read many times over before concocting my own ideas.-Helenmatherrogers

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Each thorn was crying

For me, it is an image of an abondoned garden, or of a corner crying with possibilities neglected. Riding on your poem is risky, it takes you in and throws you off... however a pleasant ride indeed! Warm regards, -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

To see the innocence of the sin--an oximoron indeed! How dexterously you coin words! A gift indeed. -UK Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur

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Underbelly

A beautiful poem with limited lines and liked it.- Gangadharan Nair Pulingat

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A Labyrinthine Passage

Beautiful poem. Fantastic lines......
The city sleeps
in morning mist, without
opening the windows?
of consciousness.

Very true said in few lines...Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.- Geetha Jayakumar

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Sawdust Trail

I liked this piece. I found it quite mystical in a way. Thank you for sharing it. Great writing!- Drongan

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Repercussions

Love that line, ...'politics- the massive hunt for fake solutions'!x Liked-by Karen Fromtod

every word is gripping.-Preeti

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VANITIES

impressive.- ave chee

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Rampage

Good images here of feelings of hopelessness and helplessness.-jennie charles

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