Of All Time

Beautiful lines Satish ji...

Bare foot I walk
towards the burning pyre, to
see the ascent of ashes. -Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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Punctuality

I was a big fan of you, before you got popular! And I'm glad you keep on posting poems.
I agree with MarryAnne, I read your poetry and read again, and every time I do that, I interpret your writing in a whole different way.
The conversation between the priest and repentant made me think this poem is about "god", or a high power that this "cult" has faith in. The cult that moves in circle - that never changes? You mean by that, all religions?
The veil, I thought you were talking about the sky, or space, or whatever we will be able to discover through the years.
So, what I got from this poem is that someday, we will discover the mystery around us, and we will unravel the ugly side of death, unable to pretend there's an after life anymore.
Yeah, I feel this is about a day all humans stand face to face with the whole truth.
I like the way your poetry makes me think.
Just one suggestion, I guess if you use less dots, it would be easier to read. Unless of course it was intentional, and I had no idea. I just felt better punctuation would help us interpret your words more. :)
Beautiful poetry as always.-nourayasmine

Your poetry is unlike anything I've ever read before. It's full of intrigue, an ambiguity that I can't help but admire. I see the category as nature, yet I like how you brought in the example of the conversation between the repentant and the priest. Like in a confessional. Being on time for death? Does this insinuate a coming storm, the clouds covering the moon. The absence of something.
So thought-provoking!-Poet on the Piano

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Learning You

Beautiful lines Satish ji...

You cannot roll the
carpet after the blaze.
The tangerines will give
a big surprise. -Giti Tyagi, KARNAL

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Blue Sunstroke

Beautiful lines Satish Sir...
I was knitting
my life near hornets nest.
Words betray the anguish,
giving credit to hemlock. -Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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Nothingness

Very valid questions uncle. Ones which always keep coming back.-Riju Bhargava, PRINCE 

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Drifting

Words keep on changing the sounds

Lovely lines Satish Sir!
Thanks for sharing! -Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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Forgotten

BEAUTIFUL POEM ... -R R Gandikota, KAKINADA

Good. You can put you ideas meticulously.-Erfan K, Wandoor

Beautiful lines Satish Sir..

You walk in air
without leaving footprints,
giving me nothing.-Giti Tyagi, Patiala

Beautiful poem sir! Your poems are always full of so much beauty of experience, always a joy to read! -Cherime Sangma, Williamnagar

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This Myth Of Life

I enjoyed the read but I found this very sad as I've never felt "alone" in all my life, not even as a child. Oh, I've been alone and I lived a bachelor's life for nearly 30 years. I've suffered the loss of both my parents and a few of my siblings but I've never known utter "loneliness". I can say that no ruins last forever. I share that belief with Shelley and his "Ozymandias". Life has a way of moving us all in our destined directions, whether we walk, crawl or need be carried.-Fabian G. Franklin 

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Entangled Sufferings

You have all reverence, no doubt poetical brains
Whistling wonderful words of dazzling brilliance.-Dalton

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Atonement

The false beauty of everyone never tricked anyone.-𝑺𝒖𝒛𝒚 𝑩𝒆𝒓𝒍𝒊𝒏𝒔𝒌𝒚

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Who Was Blessed

A very beautiful poem Satish ji!
Loved the poem, especially these lines...

The Sunday moon was
always beautiful. You stay
on terrace to say goodbye
before closing the book.

There was eternal pain,
outside and inside. -Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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Tolerance

beautiful piece...philosophically splendid-whisperingquill

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The Charity

Lovely poem Satish Sir!

Loved these lines...
The nascent pain
is taking birth. The seed
cannot promise to become
a tree.- Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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Celebrating Blood Signed Will

Very beautiful poem Satish ji!
Lovely lines...
You tried to catch
the flames without burning
your hands.-Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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What Else I Will Do

"I think like a python engulfing more than I can swallow."
Wow! What a line. ----- Stephen

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Cold-Bloodedness

I like the depth of this poem and the underlying emotions which speak with a calm sense of coldness....excellent!-Meena Krish

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The Exit

Very beautiful verse Satish ji!
Thanks for sharing!

Unquenchable thirst
was me. My head in a spin,
I go beyond the words,
to find the clapping hands. -Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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