Monday, November 30, 2015

Hating To Do

All of your work is superb. I don't comment much but I read you all the time.-

Moon Walk

A nice work satishverma..........- Ramin Ara

Lovely write;-}- Weeping willow

Saturday, November 28, 2015

Suicidal Wish

This poem has many layers of thoughts synchronized in the body of poetry. Powerful one.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

Expressionless

A good powerful write. As usual, nice poetry. -Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

A powerful poem. As usual, thoughtful one too.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

Thursday, November 26, 2015

Tuesday, November 24, 2015

Wet Landscape

Loved the last stanza and closing lines..!-Amit Agarwal, MEERUT

Another Journey

Almost as if we are like a tree. Exciting poem on rebirth.-Thecraig

Sunday, November 22, 2015

Eternal Drift

As beautiful as it is , I rarely understand your work. This piece however is more direct I feel, possibly about recent life experiences, maybe cathartic or an acceptance of illness?
Whatever the meaning your words themselves always hold an abstract beauty, always a joy to read. -Gene Gary

IMPERSONATION

Nice write Satish..-Silent One 

Friday, November 20, 2015

Kava Kava

There is consistent death-consciousness in all poems of Satish. Death comes in all forms, it has become a reference point His philosophy of life does not interfere with the poetry of the piece. Muse is wondrous here.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

Tuesday, November 17, 2015

Black Walls

I get a sense of anger in this. Perhaps struggle? At any rate,this is well structured. -heritage 

Devil’s Realization

A beautiful image has emerged out of despondency. Nice write.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

In Our Breasts

Apart from tenor of pessimism and consequent poignancy, a hope of redeeming is peeping through. Good execution.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee ) 

New Apartheid

Brilliant. Great imagery, great vision .-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

Millennium Celebrating

As usual. it is passionate, poignant and great poetry !-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

Moving Shadows

Contemplative write...thought provoking. Well written, .- Pristine Poetry

Wonderful images.- Weeping willow

Resilience

splendid tone... quite good.- Keely Barton

Sunday, November 15, 2015

Stoned

A ruthless , poignant poem vibrating with passion. Excellent cadence.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

Without Qualms

Images galore with excellent treatment. Stylized expression. There is always a bit of poignancy in Satish’s poem.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

Another Stroke

Excellent cadence. Brilliant execution.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

He

In this poem, Satish seems somewhat to come out of his usual pessimistic world-view. An excellent poem.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

The Dilemma

Very nice! An excellent bit of ink! - Sean Scribbles

Reminiscence

An wonderful psychological analysis turned into a beautiful poem.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

Pandering

An intriguing piece, an enjoyable read.-Gene Gary

Heart Unsnaps

Good poems come from an abnormal state! I read it twice.-unnikrishnan atiyodi pm, Payyanur

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Saturday, November 14, 2015

Ambulating Pain

I thoroughly njyd reading.. It ws vry vivid and ncely penned.-Kaur

In Reverse

Sad but true in some cases, this one makes me think, how lucky most of us are
there are two sides to life happy or sad. I know which I would rather have. great heart felt write tho` as I say it makes me think.-Divena

Darting Pain

Expressive and a thought provoking write.- Seema Chowdhury

Thursday, November 12, 2015

The Escape

A reflective and an expressive write.- Seema Chowdhury

Destiny

It is frenzied utterances really ! But what a force is there ! You can search out a message of great import there.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

No-man’s-land

As usual, Satish, in his inimitable style. His poignant, pessimistic world-view strikes a chord in our heart. We are saddened but we are charmed by the sweetness of that melancholy.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee ) 

Mockingbirds

Passionately expressed. Well executed.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

Sunday, November 8, 2015

Face To Face

As usual, he is intensely original. The poem is strikingly bitter and pessimistic but It is a great piece of poetry.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

Passage To Unknown

We're verbal creatures, we discribe the world using words. Death of a truth could be interpreted as a death of language, because it's just an expression. And it's published on the site for "art of comunication". Beautiful irony, isn't it?-Varret

Blast

Powerful visuals are evoked. Wonderful !-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

Sweet Revenge

A sort of staccato rhythm.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

It enhances terror & evokes eerie feelings.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

My Battle

a beautiful exit. Very nice. - Green eyed Blues

Friday, November 6, 2015

Pink City

A dismal, poignant poem still it has certain sad beauty. Enjoyed reading.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

I See My Own Demise

Hauntingly deep thoughts here.But oh how well you weaved words and stanzas in this pen.-JacieStralkoDuca

Rags And Riches

A Fine poem.Imagery is beautiful.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee ) 

Fixed Flux

A continuum of Journey of human civilization expressed par excellence.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Killing Zone

A particular world-view expressed well. Consummate skill over the language.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

Disaster And After

A cynic but fiercely original out look.. Great poem. Diction is so good.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

Hanging Garden

Oh amazing! I ever find out the hanging garden. Thank you Sir, for indicating. - BIPIN CH RABHA

Monday, November 2, 2015

Unasked

Poem like inevitable fate of a human being working for survival and his mission of dream draws us inevitably to the realm of poetry. Great !-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

Nothing Verse

Well-balanced. past mastery in use of language.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee ) 

Nakedness

The poem reveals rarest sensitivity . Fine piece.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

Wavering

The poet has got a philosophic turn of mind. It gives poems certain depth without losing poetry of the piece. Also satiric way of telling things. Enjoyable piece.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

Black Magic

The poem is aphoristic but beautifully so !-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

Sunday, November 1, 2015

Aham Asmi... *

Satish - Aham Asmi is a Spiritual connection to the self - inner conciousness.

I really enjoyed reading this one.
It reminded me of a poem written by Zen master Adyashanti
The Awakening http://www.vrolijkverlicht.nl/77-stories-of-awakening/62-awakening-adyashanti-poem. Thanks for a great read.-J Nair

Neutral

We cross paths again
And if our eyes meet
Are we to understand
Or is it just the craziness
Of desperation
That make the eyes speak ?-

Till This Day

Completely beautiful!- Blue Soul