The Clan

Can empathize with the repercussions of destruction - a sad and mournful state of affairs. Excellent portrayal sir. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Ejection Fraction

interesting progression of images that sound like fragments of news feed in good rhythm.-slithr

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The Genius

I love this so much. So beautifully put and just satisfying to read. -Cas Murray 

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Obstinacy

Very touching Sir, it's all about the bare realities of our painful existence. -Rubina Shaikh, Mumbai

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The Frost

This is a very deep and meaningful piece filled with strong and powerful imagery. A most vibrant and revealing read. Best wishes Milly x-Milly Hayward

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Blue Tapestry

Your wise and profound words become the source of my inspiration! I've been trying to connect tradition with social themes and I see you have done that beautifully! Indeed, truth and falsehood coexist in our world, and many are manipulating people's minds by rhetorics. However, we need to remain sober when the rest is drunk. Thank you so much for sharing!-Henry Tong

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Streaking Alone

Wonderfully coherent to my current situation. Thank you for this illumination.-abstractempo

All things fall into darkness. Everything turns black. It is only in the energy at our core that has color.-Lawless

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Undreaming

as always the unique display of words provide different interpretations to the poem. nice writing.-sette 

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Blending

again the metaphors in the poem are simply amazing,this is what makes your poems different from the rest.-sette 

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Like an Asteroid

Pillow soaked of moonfall
Anguish of bodyless grave....
Beautiful expressions. -R R Gandikota , Kakinada

Beautifully woven.-Chirasree Bose, Hyderabad

Exquisite expressions!-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore


Loved the deep expressions!-Chaitali Ray Sengupta, NL

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Sent Anonymously

A splendid read. TFS. -Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi,

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A Sneak Preview

This feels like W. Blake's painting, but in words :) Love it.-Post Scriptum,

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A Pilgrim’s Woe

No matter where we go, we cant escape raality, or ourselves for that matter. I realy like this poem.-Post Scriptum,

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Under The Cloud

Amazingly written as usual.-Jason Vancelette (AKA Pharaoh33)

i especially love the first few lines and your reference to the sing song teapot .. i just love the wording in this poem. truly enjoyed.-charlotte connolly

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The Nature

Weaving words like these is a true gift.-Lawless

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Unexisting

The voice of the departed soul resonates in the stark darkness of your poem. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Last lines were so intense and impactful. TFS.-Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi

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Secret Deals

Intense lines accenuating the violent, monstrous night. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

What a depth of thought. TFS. -Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi

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Vendetta

the pain is equivalent to the

the pain is equivalent to the idolatry which always being a substitute is filled with more convenient one. Interesting write nice ideas making a complex mix of imagery. Hugss


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Commentary On Last Wishes

The poem unfolds with philosophical undertones at different levels. Expressed nicely.
Did you jump into a
dry pool to know
the depth of sky.-Rajnish Manga

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Implacable

A great poem transcending the average intellect. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Breakthough

Another thought provoking piece. I enjoy reading your poems because they are so deep with many interpretations that I find I have to keep reading and rereading to find new nuances. Best wishes.-Milly x

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Taboos

Too hard to understand. -KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka

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Dying Art

'The snow capped peaks...green fires...for the running tribes' - intriguing lines. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Loving Our World

I always enjoy reading your material. There is so much substance to it. It makes me pause and think. That's a good thing!-heritage

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Unsucceeding

Intense lines sir. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Thoughts rush at much vast speed than ours.. these words give depth to those emotions.-Devika Chhibber, Ambala

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Personal Loss

Quite fascinating and philosophical. Thanks, Satish ji.
The fall was / imminent.
I wait for the snow / to bury my past.-Rajnish Manga

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Loss Of Identity

I enjoy the words & flow of your poem. Opposite meanings seem to stand out. Yet beyond that I seem to lose my own identity while trying to understand what it all means. I would sure like to hear from you and any comments you would like to share with me. Until then I'll have to feel a little like Erick Church, Mr. Misunderstood. -jvaughan

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Song Of Promotion

A WELL WRITTEN POEM, TOO PHILOSOPHICAL BY NATURE BUT VERY MEANINGFUL.-sette 

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