Friday, March 31, 2017

Dirty Time

A lovely write, very thought provoking. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing it.-Rebecca Lyle

I sort of imagining the wave of time shifting through the ordinary layers of my thoughts to get to the depth of the purer golden imagination buried deep in the recluse of the human mind. He kept on writing till he’s filled all the empty blanks pages, and he has not yet even started. Rebecca this sure provoke a chain of thoughts. Thanks for sharing.-David Bokolo

Nowhere In Sight

Darkness
"...was coming down the hills..." art in motion, Satish. Enjoyed the fluidity of imagery - allets

Thursday, March 30, 2017

Waiting For New Year

Tomorrow was far off.
I am still struggling with today.. yes, present is most important and it brings future, Nice expression. It is a beautiful poem with high penmanship. Thanks for sharing.-Kumarmani Mahakul

Peace

Why this desire of awakening
in darkness,
when light was waiting
at the window?
Great piece, and those lines really spoke to me! I love it-Fredy

Sunday, March 26, 2017

A Love And Hate Story

I enjoy your poetry, but feel a lot of the deeper symbology and metaphysical musings are above me. I still enjoy the rhythm and flow of your words though. It just seems that there is a lot here that I am missing.-Therapoetic4

Thursday, March 23, 2017

Verities

As always so much mystery in your writes. The visuals are beautiful. Well done.-Brenda

Saturday, March 18, 2017

COVERTLY

Amazing write! I like the flow with which it goes.... Superb!-Shubham Kamble

I Was Always Angry

My favorite part is "God of
My favorite part is "God of my mud & water, wide open like a father, who never died." It's so beautiful.-PeterChristophe...

Deserted Wasteland

This poem is about my life right now. You just keep hitting the target center.-allets

Underbelly

Reads like beat poetry. I love this. Your last stanza is beautiful - great imagery. -Princess Prose Poems 

Thursday, March 16, 2017

Intimidation

"Give me a window to have a glimpse of still life" Simply wow.-Aries Rising

Deserted Wasteland

This poem is about my life right now. You just keep hitting the target center. -allets

Chaste Words

"...I had to talk to my
"...I had to talk to my poems..." made me smile. Thanks for sharing that wonderful piece of creation today. -  allets

Wednesday, March 15, 2017

Incinerated

I would take out "will" in the second sentence, adore the second stanza, I would change "the school of fish" to "a school of fish", the poem makes me sad but I like it and the images it creates, nice work-Lulu Bell

Tuesday, March 14, 2017

Numbness

This was quite unique in its own tales. The nature of war battling the environment itself. Giving with such crisp meaning and soundproof melodies. Good read poet.-Hypothesis

Thursday, March 9, 2017

Where He Was

Your writes always give me so much thought. Your last stanza was chilling. Well done--Brenda

Sunday, March 5, 2017

Wednesday, March 1, 2017

Curiosity

very nice I won't say what this reminded me of, but yes that's it. Nice and deep work.-willyweed

Falling Crumbs

Love this!-shadow

An interesting and engaging poem with beautiful imagery! Wonderful job :)-Ren

Your poetry is wonderful in its translucency and never fails to impress me with its imagery.
Nominated.-Ben Pickard

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