For Fallen Deity

For fallen angel I can say. The first line is wonderful to read.-Randhir Kaur

" Scream goes unheard, God sleeps.
The sky burns endlessly"
Intensity of grief in memory of the departed loved one is simply touching.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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The Golden Gate

What appears to be, ‘tis truly not!
Excellent poetry!-Laura

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Heart-Wrenching

so glad I am not the ones watching, where I come from we call watchers 'warchermen and they stand at Gates watching, shame they get paid very little and they are very impoverished. So thank God if one is important enough to be watched, it means you are privileged.-Yenson

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History Of Pain

A magnificent poem, sir Satish...-Bernard F. Asuncion

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Haunted

Forewarned is forearmed...
According to Nietzsche,
“If you stare into the abyss,
the abyss stares back at you.”-Laura

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Standing In Canyons

We are a hybrid nation!-Laura

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Aftereffects

I Like This Image
"moonlit/dark waters -allets

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After Separation

MOST POETIC.
A BIT ABSTRACT... -R R Gandikota , Kakinada

As Emily Dickinson said, " After great paiin, a formal feeling comes'. Enjoyed the read, Satish Sir. Thank you for sharing.-Maria Zafar, New Delhi

Very beautiful verse Satish ji!
Especially loved these lines:

'Like meteor of
a melting star, you were moving
away faster than light.'-Giti Tyagi, Patiala

As Giti madam said, loved the last three lines.-Sangeeta Das, Delhi

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Improvising

Upon those
‘oneiric rocks’...
we can choose to alleviate
the core of our dreams!-Laura

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Strange Phenomena

Indeed strange is such life that presents such fatal moments. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma

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Not Parting

keeping OWN PERSONA BLESSED IS Wonderful really. This poem is very brilliantly penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

Between why and how, discovering life is amazing really. An excellent poem is very brilliantly penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

Magnificent poem, sir Satish.......-Bernard F. Asuncion

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Eye-Openers

I have to say each of these I saw seperately and each leaves the reader thinking, wondering as images are mixed and there is some discordant phrases.-John Alexander McFadyen

My mind is blown. This was truly a brilliantly creative write. I’d say to the uncreative- this poem would seem simple and drab- but oh my! To the mind that thinks out of the box- this poem is right on point and written perfectly, and with such subtle depth-Meliss@k 

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Cuckoo Will Sing Again

Powerful...
...thank you for sharing!-Laura

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Too Old

Well said - allets

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Suaveness

Agree with your stance of weaving our own web of hoax. Thanks for this insightful verse sir.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Not Parting

Between why and how, discovering life is amazing really. An excellent poem is very brilliantly penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

Magnificent poem, sir Satish.......-Bernard F. Asuncion

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Aftereffects

Today the angels have spoke.-Johnny Lawless

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Untouchability

This took me to several places and several layers. Firstly it felt like somone who is in a relationship without a physical bond, where sex is prefunctory and secondly to a place where two people simply want one another for sex. Whichever a provocative and interesting write.-John Alexander McFadyen

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The Scorpio

Spider silk ways are very strong really. This poem is amazingly penned. An interesting sharing is done really.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Very Unsettling

An Exceptional Write!-Laura

HA* - ! U* - KIDDING* - ! IT'S* - REVALATINATORY* !-OUTBACK

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Sometimes

The imagery of your penned words is stupendous!-Laura

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Travesty

Sharing undivided pain and getting love to heal life is wonderful. An excellent poem is brilliantly penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Ephemeral

A beautifully crafted and imaged poem.-Robert M Smith

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To Agni

Absolutely Brilliant. Emotionally stirring!-Diamond

Flows like an extraordinary river. The fire will always be there amongst the rapids.-Johnny Lawless

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Dark Waters

I rather enjoyed this. The imagery is good, very effective expression, shows experience.
Honestly- I want to know what it is about. Can you tell me...-Bryanel The Fallen 

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The Imperfect Poem

Last stanza- divine!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Gift Of Takers

Layered as only you can do. Thanx again.-Johnny Lawless

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Travesty Of Stars

You have indeed created a travesty of sorts with all the elements. However, the composition serves as a prelude to something that is more relevant and momentous.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Wonderful poetry Satish ji. A spiritual one . The last line I interpreted moon as Consciousness. Your poem forces the reader to think . Highly appreciate it. -Mona Lisa, Toronto

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Navigating You

A lovely write, sir Satish.......10.-Bernard F. Asuncion

This poem is definitely very beautifully and excellently expressed. Thank you very much for sharing this.10-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Compelling Charm

Drinking milk of moon is really very amazing. This poem is excellently penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Not Seeking Retribution

Exceptional!-Laura

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Not Reproaching

I like this.
I hear a chime when I read it.
Some form of imagery.
Love and Laughter,-Joker44

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Leapfrogging

Thunderous write!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Too Old

In times of stress―
the island sinks.-Diamond

Powerful, thank you.-Poetic Dan

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New Invasion

Hello dear friend, you have penned this well with a clear message understood.You have been a joy to read and I wish you much love and tenderness. Take care..jenikawhispers

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Marking The Graves

"Moon moves on"
I like that line. Interesting to contemplate - allets

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Posing Questions

The intricacies of the unknown path. The mind is a terrible thing to taste sometimes.-Johnny Lawless

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Becoming A Totem

A fantastic write, sir Satish.....10+++++++++ -Bernard F. Asuncion

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Empty Bowls

touches me-
You were not immortal
I had lost my speech
in my pain's birth.../// beautifully penned this poem.-Mahtab Bangalee

Inspiring poem, hope is the only way out when bowl is empty and prayers are the constant source of filling it up, A thoughtful poem.-Mohammed Asim Nehal

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Matter Of Fate

A wonderful poem penned here.I love your word choices and how the poem flowed along.The story behind your words easily understood.I enjoyed reading this.I send you love and happiness.-jenikawhispers

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Graceful

An excellent poetic expression, sir Satish....-Bernard F. Asuncion

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Frost Was Setting In

Hello Im a newbie here and have just finished reading your poem and wish to tell you how much I enjoyed the read. Your piece is full of emotion felt and visuals seen clearly. I love the story behind your words.You have penned this beautifully .I wish you well with love and happiness.-jenikawhispers

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Ask Me

For the shake of moon I say, this is definitely a very brilliant poem shared here.-Kumarmani Mahakul

An introspection related celebration, based on hard earned wisdom and experiences. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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Strange Eyebaths

I always enjoy your work.-eleven_eleven

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Golden Afternoon

Great piece.-Bonaventure Onuabuchi

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Unreachable

'The rivals bloom,
without water of eyes.
O daisy, I was run over
by the stamping of clouds.

Give me the speed of light.'

Simply wonderful. -Sangeeta Das, Delhi

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New Sports

wow, how wonderful expression this is-
I would defy
the death, but life
defeats me...///-Mahtab Bangalee

Message of love motivates many. When moon sleeps, stars play chess. This is an excellent poem very brilliantly penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Spelling Out

This is quite interesting! Good job!-Zia Mikaela

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Unmaking Love

wisdom writings-
Who believes in
one's own death,
to be born again like a
third person. /// penned beautifully.-Mahtab Bangalee

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