CHEMISTRY ANYTIME

It is so and so it was and so shall it be.- Kailashana 

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JUDGEMENT

Strong read, very well interpurated statement! -  Krys Frost

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ANNUAL RITUAL

A memorable poem, sir.-   Yacov Mitchenko

Super poem.-  allenpaulson

Awesome! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing-  Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2

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NO COMPLAINT

A placid dusk on a beach.-  Nasarudheen.P.

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ANNUAL RITUAL

Awesome! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing-  Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2

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ANOTHER TRIAL

Smile ˜ Stuck amid a revolving door going round and round and round and round and round ˜ Smile, and there is no bloody revolution but, if there were then I would only count it as a blessing to the blind caught amid that spin cycle design ˜ Love-  John Rhinem

S.V. - I don't see the ABC structure, but really like the visions of this write, "I was not ready for this disgrace of religion." says what others take entire books to say...well done. ;-)-  Goode Guy

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A LANTERN GUIDES

Sir: I enjoy your posts; they ALWAYS make me think and explore my inner self. Have a GREAT weekend.-  Lady Dragonwyck

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MIRAGE

A mirage of metaphors that melts amidst themselves and speaks in volumes.-  H.H. Holloway

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BLUE SKY

Some very interesting images, thank god the earth is praying.-  LightH2O

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ABSINTHE

This is beautifully writen. Love it!-   lifeblood of the twig

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A SICKENED CRAFT

sane craftsmanship, is a craft of excellence and distinction...elegant, dignified, much sought after today...leaves a lasting imprint on the artworld...adorns and soars on popularity...Shanti Satish...-  classic

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Flirting

A great poem, really liked it. A gteat write. -  Dave Walker 

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THIS ODYSSEY

"Playing truant from black death ..." excellent capturing line. Blessings to you.-  LightH2O

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IRONY

"Again you cry in your skin for sake of a forgotten god. " A very strong point to end your well penned write.-  LightH2O

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BROKEN PROMISE

I agree, great write. -  LightH2O 

Wow. Sweet write. Great job.-  allenpaulson

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MUTE DESIRE

Morning; another interesting write. I did enjoy.-  Lady Dragonwyck

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BROKEN PROMISE

Wow. Sweet write. Great job.-  allenpaulson

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JEALOUS BLOOD

nice..... enjoyed,.. Have a great one, always & forever-  Destroyer ~ Poet

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TOXIC

it is bad fighting against evils we can't see.. sometimes the battle scars us deep.. nice poem.-  Cat

Havoc wreaked in the name of god , mankind pays the price.-  Nikunj

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WHITE FEAR

Indeed.
A wonderful poem that melts in my mouth. -  Kailashana

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TRAILING WAR

good morning Verma, I do not like that image of kids buried like insects.. This is a very very brilliant poem...disturbing, but with homestyle honesty...love it..always..- Destroyer ~ Poet

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FAITHFUL

Good morning. I really "felt" the last stanza. Incredibly moving write. I do enjoy your posts. -  Lady Dragonwyck 

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TOXIC

it is bad fighting against evils we can't see.. sometimes the battle scars us deep.. nice poem..-  Cat

Havoc wreaked in the name of god , mankind pays the price .-  Nikunj

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MY GOD

I'm with john .... I'd like to see you put some comments in the author's notes to explain where you are coming from in your poems. It isn't we are not interested in them, but rather we don't know what the heck you are talking about. I know poets stretch the imagination, but ...... I for one lose interest after reading so many and not knowing what you are saying.- e. Gene Myers 

you know, I don't quite understand your poems. I like them, don't get me wrong, but I just don't quite understand them. an explanation please? but only if you feel like it.-  John Armlovich

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MY TABOO

Nice-  Floating poet

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Listening To Rwanda Genocide

A poem with a dramatic subject in a modest style, very good.-  iniduo iniduo

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INTEGERS

something from nothing is
nothing
nothing from nothing is
something else;
a four-sided Rubix cube algorithm
is a theory of abstinence,
where can I go that is not here?

where are you in the solution of nothing?-  Kailashana

When you look for something
you find something else.-  Ann Waddicor

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UNCHARTED SELF

Strange and haunting thoughts
come from the sound of your words
echoed from the tombstones.-  Ann Waddicor

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CROSSING

Million fingers will write history of wailing waves, frightened of hot winds. Very interesting.-  Debs

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CARBON CHOKING

Nice Mr.Verma!- Dr. Kirti Swaroop Rawat, Indore

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GOLDEN LEAP

Just a strange poem...Explain Please??-  She Whispers

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THE PREDICAMENT

Really nice poetry. Enjoyed the read.-  Debra Squyres

Wonderful poem, my fellow poet. Great usage of literature. =)-  Charles Jefferson
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THE BRIGHTENED FIRE

This is such a gripping cry from the spirit. This clearly depicts all the injustices and destruction humans suffer as a result of war, famine and bad governments. The image of a hunch-back, tottering God amongst the destruction suggest this has been going on for ages.-  LightH2O

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DROOPING

The eternal struggle or war between the upper and lower classes. The wounds so old or wise, they will develop whiskers. In other words this being such an old cause. TFS-  LightH2O

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ENUNCIATION

I agree to become one of the crowd you become unconscious. Don't know what the crow represents? I get the feeling it may be a politician, because of the words that follow this poem. Thank God for the fire (righteousness or truth) which will dig up all secret bones... Thanks again Satish for another great work.-  LightH2O

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FIRE AND STRAW

I enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon Satish. I hope to be able to read a lot more of your writing in this new year of 2012. Love-  Carol Brown

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A SMALL CHANCE

"...aura of a lobbied avatar" this and other lines give me the sense this inspiration came to you as you typed in your computer? Your work is like a kaleidoscope it never quite repeats the same image and they are all intricate and beautiful.-  LightH2O

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AGAINST THOUGHTS

"I smear the ashes on forehead of history and squander my poems. " Satish, your lines are so deep and gripping. It amazes me how you are so inspire to write night after night these great original symbolic/metaphorical lines. Best wishes in this new year.-  LightH2O

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INTROSPECTIVE

Verma ji, full of vigour. The poem creates an atmosphere of darkness and horror in the mind of the reader.-
K.H.Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka

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GENERATION

'Each death becomes a daisy" Optimism of a poet. And the ancient lingua franca ought to be pregnant with meaning- U K Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur

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HALF-CLOSED LIDS

Vermaji, Very powerful poem. Better than your recent poems. Congratulations.-K.H.Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka 

Very dark, bleak and graphic. True, we cannot wish away it. Thanks for sharing, Sir.-Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad

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OBTUSE MYSELF

I have long admired Satish Verma's brave originality, which is no doubt lost on many people. His poetry deals with themes of violence, religious and political divides, and so on. I don't pretend to understand all his lines, as they tend to be obscure. But the obscurity and originality are subtly and inextricably interwoven.-  butterflyred (Yacov Mitchenko)

Very original lines as usual, much enjoyed.-  LightH2O

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FAINT WRITING

"You wanted to live
inside a shell
and step outside, in "

This bit was exciting and unusual it inspired me, I wish it had continued in that vein; could you? I should be most interested.-  Ann Waddicor

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HISTORY

That I could be in your mind to discern each line...yet greatly enjoyed. Love this line "Do we need nitrous oxide to offset the gloom of hovering religion?"-  LightH2O

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THE GOODBYE

a sad poem, but lovely. Hugs, :)-  Catie Lindsey

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WOUNDED FLIGHT

I am collecting the words to weave a phrase.. And Barren trees overhear the wailing winds.. Lovely words and imagery, Thank you for sharing : )- Brenda Victoria Northeast

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VICTORY OF FALL

Such troubled times, but then again, from the beginning of time there has always been the struggle between good and evil. "...comatose truth was listening to lies"- LightH2O

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BRINGING DOWN

indeed- Michael Firewalker

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BLEEDING DAY

I just love the imagery - - the strong use of adjectives so much in evidence. Beautiful words in abstract form-Alistair Muir

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A SICK UNCERTAINTY

"The hypocrisy and violence will wolk side by side." well written poem from the heart of a sensitive soul.- LightH2O

Up to interpretation, I thought of politicians spreading lies and the masses eating it up, many too tired to fight.-Yarbrough

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GESTURES

Great poem, really like it. A great write.-Dave Walker

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STONE CATCHERS

so interesting
are these 4 verses stand alone or connected
I find your writing mysterious and beautiful-A PAX

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POURING

may dawn continue to tread lightly
as you awaken us all
to a stark fresh image of morning
lamenting want in the land of plenty
nice to read you in peak form again, Satish-Roger Wayne Eberle

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PRIZEFIGHT

Love that last stanza, specially the line; "The Essence of pain" very much enjoyed write.- LightH2O

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PAIN OF ELEGY

Click ME see the comments............

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TERROR TRAIL

Your use of language is just sublime -- so much texture and elegance. A great write and marvellous read thank you- omment By: Alistair Muir 

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Death In Exile

a great poem, liked it.- Dave Walker

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Unstitching

Really like this. enjoyed reading it. a great poem. may i invite you to read my new poem called, reincarnation.- Dave Walker

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SHAMEFUL

S.V.- Your poem intrigues me, yet i don't understand it much. In S3, why wax, meaning the moon? In S5, are the sins of love, the sins of the father AND the sins of children? Is love a sin? If you please...- Goode Guy

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