Wednesday, December 30, 2020

A Summer Poem

I loved this poem, especially the line "Confine the blue lilies unkissed by tears" awesome poem! I can hardly wait to read the next one!-Louise Robello

The Myths

Love the imagery.-jo Marie Christina

O Blood, O Tears

Especially loved these lines Satish ji...
When you recite my
poems, a black hole opens the
mouth to suck them in.

Beautiful as always! Loved the poem much!- Giti Tyagi, Karnnal, India

Friday, December 25, 2020

Becoming Strangers

 and behold: you can write again... lol

Happy holidays dear Poet-L. B. Mek

Thursday, December 24, 2020

Aborted Faith

Lovely lines Satish ji....
Moon has disappeared.
I forget the human touch.
Beautiful!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

Wednesday, December 23, 2020

near the sun

You have a most beautiful way with words Satish. Sending love and peace your way at Christmastime.-Pauline Miller, UK

Supposedly

just wow! and on so many levels too...-L. B. Mek

I love it.-Trenz Pruca

Monday, December 14, 2020

Where Dreams Are Killed

Beautiful lines Satish ji...
Can you redefine truth
in dark, when moon was unable
to stop the butterflies.

Loved the poem much!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

Sunday, December 13, 2020

Friday, December 11, 2020

Thinking Loud

I like this, but especially love the last two stanzas.-MelissaJA

The Avenger

So layered I could write an SA for each line...
thought provoking, with crisp vivid imagery,
good write, as always-L. B. Mek

Thursday, December 10, 2020

Wednesday, December 9, 2020

Saturday, December 5, 2020

Eros Was Blind

I will play with 🔥 in separating flames... insightful contemplation! 5 stars-Dr Dillip K Swain

Coming of age with beautified situation. Eden was dying daily. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

Lioness In Cloak

An insightful write! So well penned... Top score-Dr Dillip K Swain

Fragment Pains

Only moon will cry.....great poetic expression! A magnificent piece of work....5 stars-Dr Dillip K Swain

Blast Cells

Although I am a bit confused by the concept of this poem, it seems very unique and the choice of words are good! "Now theft has taken
place of stakes, meant for black lungs." This line would have to be my favorite because of how well you described it using the word theft.-Kay/Hayden 

Wednesday, December 2, 2020

Some Halters

You write of universal mystery in such lovely poetry. It reflects the mysterious cosmos nicely and leads me to dreams, sensing deep connectedness and contemplation. Thanks for inspiration satishverma!-RDS