Monday, July 27, 2020

What Else You Should Know

Who am I?
I search my name on your face.
You won't recognize a lost coin...........expressive expression on the finder existence; wanderer through long pavement-Mahtab Bangalee

My Craft Trembles

Great writing sir ji..... -Ujjal Mandal, West Bengal

Saturday, July 25, 2020

Will You Know?

Nice one.....

Life- with full of an elegance
Thursday, July 23, 2020
11:22 AM

dead may be buried heaps below
but his work shall allow
lots of controversies to come on the fore
and make many people feel sore

so live in a simple way
but show the magnanimity in all the way
life is not that important
but how you lived is talked about and instant -Hasmukh Mehta ahmedabad

Tuesday, July 21, 2020

Hope Dies Daily

so true and the irony is this becomes the only truth in 2020.. hopes dying daily in different eyes and in different homes... :-SHWETA VASHISHT, shahdara

Sunday, July 19, 2020

Beauty Of Truth

As usual, these verses are loaded with deep philosophical thoughts. Give much to ponder over.-GSP Rao, Hyderabad 

beautifully written sir, wondering through whole this writeup.-SHWETA VASHISHT, shahdara 

Beautiful Poetry Sir ... -Komal Sharma, Jaipur

A Letter Unwritten To You

The morning glory always inspires you and all of us. You have interestingly written a beautiful poem.-Kumarmani Mahakul

Friday, July 17, 2020

In Yellow Moon

i am still gaining confidence in commenting as an early experience upset me but i want to say this had going off in different directions and really got me thinking. a challenging poem i find so much more interesting. -DianeKey6

Snow Flurries

Lovely and painful... I felt like I knew where you were going from the first line. Yet it was a shock nonetheless.-jarcher54

Compressed Emotions

A truly beautiful read.-Milly Hayward

Wednesday, July 15, 2020

Blue Targets

"I will think of you during break.
I was teaching pure truths..." Pure truth helps in motivating life in a greater realm. This poem is very brilliantly penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

Tuesday, July 14, 2020

Becoming Otherself

Sun is visited by red
moon in twilight, before parting
once a day for a kiss..........lovely scene is delineated-Mahtab Bangalee

Monday, July 13, 2020

Light Luggage

reading your work is a
reading your work is a privilege-eleven_eleven

My Pledge

Your poems are very amazing and these are really heart touching. You have interestingly penned this poem.-Kumarmani Mahakul

Sun Was Cooling

Beautifully expressed...
There was so much
noise between the full stops.
Words forgot to say prayer.

Loved the poem very much Satish ji!
Your poems are simply superb!- Giti Tyagi, Karnal

Saturday, July 11, 2020

Beware Of Pain

Comment: No benefit comes.
Your fingers speak for the broken
faith. Where gods sleep?
........amazing questionku-Mahtab Bangalee

Friday, July 10, 2020

Thursday, July 9, 2020

Drunk Like Black Stones

The way you put words together is a masterpiece within itself.-PoeticBiscuit

Dreamscapes

Amazing work sir, though maths was never my favorite...-SHWETA VASHISHT, Delhi

Wednesday, July 8, 2020

Enactor

So many ways of responding to poetry... I will remember this one, being mauled by a raging tiger. Yes, we've all been shaken like a helpless prey by the right poem, or the art of poesy in the right hands... Countee Cullen, Yeats, Blake, Sappho, Anne Carson... and sometimes a humble community poet on MPS!-jarcher54

Creation Of A Myth

Those first two stanzas have an overwhelming verbal power! Very wisely and strategically, you dial it down a notch in order to give the remaining lines a coversational tone---a very musical effect altogether. -
Starward

Friday, July 3, 2020

Pain Of Surrender

A style enticing. A real sense of beauty with the stylish imagery.- unni krishnan atiyodiZf5, payyanur

The theme of reconciliation is depicted in the last stanza.....Loved the way you've shown here......thank you sir.... -Ujjal Mandal, West Bengal

Beautifully composed Sir, enjoyed reading it..-SHWETA VASHISHT, Delhi

Wednesday, July 1, 2020

When Truth Was Exhumed

Simply superb...
No I don't want
to learn the art of
cheating at rising sun.
Loved the verse Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal India