Monday, May 30, 2016

Turning To Dark

And I reached the emptiness
Of a vessel, which had
spilled over the milk of seeds.
Devastation caused by emptiness superbly narrated. Thanks for sharing.-Ratnakar Mandlik

Covered With Quills

A sentimental write portraying touching memories of the loved one.- Ratnakar Mandlik

Wounded And Alive

A beautifully envisioned realistic poem of life. -Ratnakar Mandlik

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From The End

A beautiful poem on 'suppressed truth' .A suppressed truth may one day turn lethal.-Bharati Nayak

From The End

With maturiy, one's wisdom forsee certain hings inevitable. Yet, circumstances make one to remain lip-sealed. This is life. Realistic write on a real thought. Thanks for sharing.-Jayatissa K. Liyanage

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The Ire

A beautifully crafted thought provoking poem with deep meaning, may be, throwing light on social scenario! Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

Tall Slogans

There was a spiritual conflict
Without giving any purpose.
This must be a part of politics and must have been unleashed to asses the strength of opponents by politicians
A thought provoking write. Thanks for sharing.10+ points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

Voiceless Assaults

A bit strong, but i like it. It seems to tell me of a lot of emotion thrown about. But i like the way the poem s written in.-Mohabeer Beeharry

Once On Earth Day

 A beautifully envisioned meaningful and thought provoking poem narrating the manifestations of nature and their beauty. Thanks for sharing it here.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

Retrievability

 Beautifully written my friend.-Gary Liles

Thursday, May 26, 2016

Wednesday, May 25, 2016

The Massacre

Greek god of cupid-ity, an assassin ? Wrong creed...U must be thinkin' 'bout Shiva!!! LoL ~FjR-'Frank James Ryan, Jr. / FjR

Sunday, May 22, 2016

Darting Fear

Dear Vermaji.

Life sucks the laughter, - UFF kya baath hai!!

Very true , life does that to you sometimes- it just drains you off leaving behind not even a drop of laughter.

loved this description-
go back to childhood,
shut the eyes and recite the hymns of
history,
when prophets were roaming in
neighbourhood...

as usual great poetry.
thank you for sharing.

-J Nair

Friday, May 20, 2016

Smash The Book

Very nice read. It gave me the sense of mortality shadowed by darkness. It's always nice when you can instill an emotion upon someone else.-Rolo

Tuesday, May 17, 2016

Latest Woes

Nicely done, a peek at the near future through your well versed keyhole.- ray schreiber

Friday, May 13, 2016

Emotionally

Nice one! I like the line "Will come as a cloud to read your eyes."  Humble Poet

Monday, May 9, 2016

Avalanche

Wow! Just beautiful! This write just flows so smoothly-human interaction, cause and effect rippling out, touching everyone. I absolutely love the visuals!-Brenda

Tuesday, May 3, 2016

Tenderness

Amazing expression Satishverma. - Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

Cultural Drift

Really enjoyed this poem it has so many good visuals and metaphors.
I love the idea of unwashed beliefs, of someone winning a half bread and claiming immortality and my favourite part
When death starts writing poems on the wall
beautifully expressive and sad.-Milly Hayward

Failing God

the fragility of my existence,

amidst the sounds of stubborn, half-baked truths.-noah count

Monday, May 2, 2016

A True Deception

enjoyed it.-LAD1066

Again!
Food for thought!
Mind stretching stuff!
A good read again write!
Kind thoughts.- Kirky

The Red Rock...

Yep!
Death and taxes!
The only true certainties in life!
Oh!
And someone witnessing you fall head long in the street!
Loved it!
Kind thoughts. -Kirky

Sunday, May 1, 2016

Bloodscape

I do not know what u mean but love the ways you say it.-allets

It is what poets do.-allets

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