THE TALE
Verma. a very poerful recount of / the return of bernazi/. My God! whats happening to us:/ it is not violence! it is nature! I am tempted to beleive you.
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Friday, December 26, 2008
Thursday, December 25, 2008
Eatrthborn
DANCING OF GNOMES
a startling piece. versification and language very ENTICING. The theme is very well handled and the lines move with grace in spite of the morbidity that permeates the atmosphere. I love the lines:/ the gnomes (goblins) are dancing.
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a startling piece. versification and language very ENTICING. The theme is very well handled and the lines move with grace in spite of the morbidity that permeates the atmosphere. I love the lines:/ the gnomes (goblins) are dancing.
http://www.8hop.com
Monday, December 22, 2008
Xraided
Death is Not a Ceremony
I like the freewrite form, and I love "air will kiss the lips of fire" I really quite like how you can tell a story and be poetic at the same time. To a lot of people poetry is just ryhtming words together, when it really isn't. I love the way you put words together and I must admit I am impressed with your choice in vocabulary. I give you kudos. Awesome write.
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I like the freewrite form, and I love "air will kiss the lips of fire" I really quite like how you can tell a story and be poetic at the same time. To a lot of people poetry is just ryhtming words together, when it really isn't. I love the way you put words together and I must admit I am impressed with your choice in vocabulary. I give you kudos. Awesome write.
http://allpoetry.com
Saturday, October 18, 2008
Thys, South Africa
SIGNIFICANT
Satish Verma: Man has a spiritual sharing with god. A part of him is there in human.
Thys, South Africa: I hear what you are saying, and if I understand you correctly, that type of talk could be seen as blasphemous; by the doctrine of my youth... But, I am not a yound man anymore; and have learned much about the fables we have been told as children and how removed it appears to be from what could be truth.
From my own estimation and conclusions; I gather that Someone as Great as God, must somehow encompass all. Therefore, like man; God must know good and bad, have a freewill to choose between the two; and in order to be seen as All Good, have a great "track record" and integrity in choosing good... my estimation is, that He has always chosen good. That would make Him a Good God, across all dynamics, know and unknown, not?
What do I; we know? Not much, and most of our convictions, based on either stories or own estimation. Need I say more?
Love Always,
Thys
Satish Verma: My earlier comment was a bit understated. Creation is part of creator. The soul of man is fractional essence of a big soul our God. So God lives in every being.
Thys, South Africa: I am much comfortable with it being said that way.:) Thanks you kindly for a very valuable comment.
Peace for you my friend.
Love
Thys
Satish Verma: Man has a spiritual sharing with god. A part of him is there in human.
Thys, South Africa: I hear what you are saying, and if I understand you correctly, that type of talk could be seen as blasphemous; by the doctrine of my youth... But, I am not a yound man anymore; and have learned much about the fables we have been told as children and how removed it appears to be from what could be truth.
From my own estimation and conclusions; I gather that Someone as Great as God, must somehow encompass all. Therefore, like man; God must know good and bad, have a freewill to choose between the two; and in order to be seen as All Good, have a great "track record" and integrity in choosing good... my estimation is, that He has always chosen good. That would make Him a Good God, across all dynamics, know and unknown, not?
What do I; we know? Not much, and most of our convictions, based on either stories or own estimation. Need I say more?
Love Always,
Thys
Satish Verma: My earlier comment was a bit understated. Creation is part of creator. The soul of man is fractional essence of a big soul our God. So God lives in every being.
Thys, South Africa: I am much comfortable with it being said that way.:) Thanks you kindly for a very valuable comment.
Peace for you my friend.
Love
Thys
Saturday, March 1, 2008
lillyjane
UBIQUITOUS
Depression is an awful feeling I can relate to that as I have felt that way, a brilliant poem that really explains the feelings xx
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Depression is an awful feeling I can relate to that as I have felt that way, a brilliant poem that really explains the feelings xx
http://www.8hop.com
Wednesday, February 27, 2008
Earthborn
SCRIPT
Wow! Excellent command of langusge. Imagery great. Love the finality of:put away your swords!
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Wow! Excellent command of langusge. Imagery great. Love the finality of:put away your swords!
http://www.8hop.com
Tuesday, February 26, 2008
Earthborn
STORM AND GALE
the mystery of the elements can never be fathomed by Man. We can however relate to it. Your perspective in this poem is awesome.
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the mystery of the elements can never be fathomed by Man. We can however relate to it. Your perspective in this poem is awesome.
http://www.8hop.com
Friday, February 8, 2008
Earthborn
SUN WILL HIDE
Hmmm! The morbidity again. Fear, Sorrow, confusion and Treachery. Can we ever escape?
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Hmmm! The morbidity again. Fear, Sorrow, confusion and Treachery. Can we ever escape?
http://www.8hop.com
Wednesday, January 2, 2008
ychinesepoem
I like the beautiful sentences and the artistic thought of the poem.
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Tuesday, January 1, 2008
Rajagopal Haran
FOUNTAIN
They keep telling us that in war truth is the first casualty, which is nonsense since it implies that in times of peace truth stays out of the sick bay or the graveyard.......
wonderful write sir; ...
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They keep telling us that in war truth is the first casualty, which is nonsense since it implies that in times of peace truth stays out of the sick bay or the graveyard.......
wonderful write sir; ...
http://poemhunter.com
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