Death is Not a Ceremony
I like the freewrite form, and I love "air will kiss the lips of fire" I really quite like how you can tell a story and be poetic at the same time. To a lot of people poetry is just ryhtming words together, when it really isn't. I love the way you put words together and I must admit I am impressed with your choice in vocabulary. I give you kudos. Awesome write.
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