No Banality

awesome...I enjoy...unique concept...
the dark devours the light...an excellent image...thanks-Rgarwal Rahul

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What A Galaxy

enjoyed the great work, Satish Vermaji..You have always fascinated me as a few other favorites of mine here..-V S

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Strange Phenomenon

'brain-dead
with amnesia
in winter snow'
loved this poem from the first three lines, superb.-Terry Craddock

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A Lone Prayer

'Leave your seminal
expression with minimal
damage.I am excluding the
human race.'

an ideal we should all aspire to, perhaps especially the 'mollusks'-Terry Craddock

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Uncanny Feeling

 'time will not wait for me.
I started running
against the moon―'

love your style, try an out of body experience as a child with a high fever, will return to this poem.-Terry Craddock

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A Love Story

Another attractive write. Emotions pouring beautifully. They say words have their way of opening wounds. -DarkLight

Satish, this is a beautiful piece made even smoother with the lovely imagery and descriptions.

Here are my edit suggestions:

I have not asked for much but
still attached to you with subtitles
I wanted freedom from you,
removing stings from the flesh.
^^^
There were a few off flowy parts here and subtitles was typed wrong so I decided to just r-write it.

Anxiety was the darkest color
of floating buds on (A) lake.
Sitting on the edge of panic,
I started counting the waves.
^^^^
(A) is an added word and I feel it's needed.

Mixed emotions always subtract a smile
Just lonely, I went for the swim in rimless agony.
Have not heard much of you in ages.
Still memories crop up for a while.
I wanted nemesis from you.
^^^
in the second line I feel you could take out the 'just' and 'the' I feel should be an 'a'
Also, in the third line 'for a while' is not needed and sets the flow off a little.

Talking of blue and white clouds
love has many moods.
Devastated by a burning moon
I was wishing a watery burial.
^^
This is really good but because you haven't previously spoken of clouds and are just linking it with the sea from the previous stanza I feel it would read better without the word cloud as it seems to be just thrown in there.

These are only my suggestions.

All in all great write,-Em

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Rape Of Fragrance

Wow, wow, wow! That's all I can say.
Beautiful imagery. Nominated.-Em

Wow.. perfection. Nothing else i can say..-deeplydesturbed

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Bones Of Winds

Bones of winds, black and white bones on a flag of sin, all that conjures up the famous Pirate flag. Now you might tell us about the hidden gold or the gems within your poem that makes it quirky and unusual. Well done. keep writing.-Cleveland

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………….. Afraid Of Whom?

wow, you remind me of myself. we have different writing styles, but are big on metaphors and symbols. I love free verse. I just started to take up rhyming, but nothing beats the power of a free verse poem. overall, great metaphors and symbols, telling a great poem. excellent job!-Michael

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Golden Throne

Poetry is the shortest kind of fiction. Within your poem 'Golden Throne' lurks many suggestive topics. Behind your poem must be a story. I'm curious enough to try to understand what you had in mind when you wrote your poem since the topics are so varied.How does that sound?
Enjoy the day.-Cleveland

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Prozac

Nice write Satishverma. I tried thats stuff once when I had PTSD. I was done with it after two weeks. Enjoyed and liked your poem my friend...-Socrates

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Catastrophe

We are living in the end times.broken hearts deliver broken dreams.-Words

I might be wrong but: The dying moments of a relationship through images of apocalypse. Liked.- Helikon6

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First Step Of Creativity

Creative indeed satishverma from start to finish your words held me there.
I loved and favoured this one.-divena
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Meditation

Very visual write. Nice write-Suri Ben Noah

Nice write Sativerna. Maybe we could all take a lesson from the moon, and so bring peace to the world. I enjoyed your poem, my friend....- Socrates

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Day Dreaming

Super Pen! Loved And Liked!-Puds

A sense of the spiritual in 'Day Dreaming'. Giving permission to take a break and reach for respite.-GT

Intriguing poem.- Cleveland

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Parthenogenesis

Dear Mr.Verma,

Are we referring to the religious belief in miraculous
births like the children of Kunti, or the ideology behind the birth of Jesus. what is the reference to, of the immaculate Zen - bleeding in chips.

How intriguing is the poem, how i wish you would explain a bit of what you write.

Really thought provoking.-J Nair

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On The Death Of A Friend

This is very beautiful and replete with such beautiful imagery. I particularly like "Your face swims like a dragonfly on the interface of tears." I imagine a dragonfly whose wings are made translucent by human tears. Try as it might, it cannot reenter the frame of life. There is such a tinge of sadness to someone having died unsung. It reminds me of when I was nineteen, discovering that my father was buried in an unmarked grave. How dishonorable it seemed for him to be buried without even his name, unsung, if you will. While I remedied that by putting a marker on his grave, the sting of that finding has never left me.-Linda Marie Van Tassell 

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Not A Dream

i can't do justice at the moment in commenting on this poem, it blows me away. I will make it a point to come back to it, when I can... because, dam! it hits the insides of me and keeps bouncing back.-Invisible Ink 

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A Paragon

I love the punctuation used in this because I can read it in a certain way without worrying that I'm mistranslating it, and I lean towards poetry that doesn't rhyme. Also I love the scenery, it just flows (for me) from under the sea to a busy downtown area where no one is paying attention to a park where two old men are playing chess to a complete zoom out of the earth itself, spinning alone.-Catherine

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16th December 2013

writings on the wall with dark fingers..good one.-Gajanan Mishra

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A Death's Kiss

The earth worm was busy
In turning the earth's soil
Printing the seed's path
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I do not want to be talked about
like the setting sun- - - -A meaningful poem, thanks for sharing.-Bharati Nayak

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Breaking Black And White

separated by a-
monologue of lie.
Wonderful expression. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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Unthreading

Beautiful poem rich in rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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Too Crowded Was Arena

Great loss. A coldness arising from the feet.-Douglas Scotney

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Open Your Bowels

Hello,
Events like these make one question faith and dare to ask why, for God's sake why?-Mr Darcy

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HOMEWARD

No place like home! Nicely done Satish!-Robert Heemstra

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Poetry Boom Poetry Boom

A very strange pace and energy. I like this a lot.- Ygg Drasil

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I Am The Lover

So Much
Dischord. Solemn write -  allets

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Mourning The Deluge

Very Disturbing
images. The world raw.- allets

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Otherness

"Fear hauls you up on the
brazen rocks, you stand
alone in sun to find your toes
breaking the sound waves."

This is superb.Thank you.-lysistrata

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