Lost in Black and White Eyes

A very lovely poem that is packed with emotions, Satish jee.-Padma, Hyderabad

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Not Taking Revenge

A beautifully written poem with an emotional touch, Satish jee.-Padma, Hyderabad

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Enlightenment Comes Late

Thoughts well expressed, Sir!-Padma, Hyderabad

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Not Taking Revenge

A beautifully written poem with an emotional touch, Satish jee.-Padma, Hyderabad

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Enlightenment Comes Late

Thoughts well expressed, Sir!-Padma, Hyderabad

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A Revisory Argument

The proof is shown with a few sensible examples in this poem, Satish jee.-Padma, Hyderabad

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Pulverization

Most apt poem on life and death! Thanks for sharing!-Ramesh T A

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The Solace of Sadness

Vivid expressions and you hit the nail on the head, Satish jee. Very prompt questions.-Padma, Hyderabad

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Unclenched Hands

To come out of the gutter
and ask, did not I complete the
punishment to remain human?
How beautifully you asked this question, Sir! A very sensible and valuable question that one needs to ponder about.-Padma, Hyderabad

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Meet a Maverick

It was a visual murder
of the signatures to build a
mausoleum of a disappeared deity
Saddened feelings and pain are truly depicted, Satish jee.-Padma, Hyderabad

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To Die for Something

Feeling the pain and standing in front of the scorching sun! What a beautiful line, Satish jee! Depth in meaning.-Padma, Hyderabad

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After Rumi

Very nicely written write, emotional as well.-Becks/Beckie

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No Love Is Safe

Last stanza I liked the most.-Nabakishore Dash

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Bronze Meanings

Unhinged sky and sea will clap the brains.-Ramesh T A

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Dying To Live

The burning candle is burning to dispel darkness. A meaningful poem with a wonderful title. Top score-Dr Dillip K Swain

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Hide My Footprints

Life is criminal.
Death opens the door.
How powerful lines are these, Satish jee! You hit the nail on the head!-Padma, Hyderabad

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Do Not Favour

Beautiful poetry. You are great dear poet. You are indifferent, impartial. moreover, I admire your sincerity, maturity and consistency. May God increase your tribe!-Dr Dillip K Swain

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Fire's Song

You shape my pains.
Time squeezes. How much you
will give your tears to wash me?
The emotions and strong feelings firmly depicted, Satish jee.-Padma , Hyderabad

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You Walk Alone

Why should you hesitate to walk alone? You came to this earth alone and you will depart the stage of life alone. Appreciated the underlying philosophy!-Dr Dillip K Swain

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In Serene Mind

Very good concept. A serene mind helps us a chance to express feelings. Loved it, Satish jee.-Padma, Hyderabad

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A Blue Castle

I get a sense of foreboding beauty from this. It feels like some piece of how it must feel to be at the edge of a black hole. Its meaning escapes me, but the feeling sticks with me.-Earthrise

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