Virtual Images

Let it rise or fall, no difference in our concoction. No answer, no truth.
My apathy floats.
Burp!-James Michael

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Crying Silently

Deep feelings woven into this beautiful write...-Annette

Beautiful poem-Uma natarajan

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Leaves Are Changing Colors

An outstanding piece......Bernard F. Asuncion

This poem is as close to perfection as it could be!-Kostas Lagos

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Broken Bridges

An intriguing yet very profound write displaying the essence of the turmoil of thoughts in a distressed mind. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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O Trinity

poem of the poems.........ten out of ten.-Sankhajit Bhattacharjee

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At The Beginning

At the beginning seems to be the end... An insightful read. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Verma ji, Venus flytrap, the carnivorous plant which traps insects with it's open book like leaves , needs a foot note. Very nice poem.-R R Gandikota, Kakinada

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No One Was Real

haunting ... images, sounds and emotions ... i like the use of the language ... what more can one ask of a poem ;)-Einstein Noodle

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Nonetheless

Observing reflection through mirror on the wall is very amazing definitely. An excellent poem is beautifully penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

Giving birth and dying and life continues. Interesting reading.-Kingsley Egbukole

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Beyond Tomorrow

I Was Chuckling
I have a strange sense of humor - non-offensively - but this one made me read and re-read and there was evidence of mirth. ie, carpetbaggers in nirvana? Hmmm... I think :D - Lady A -allets

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White Shrouds

I Shivered
Thinking of "forbidden fruits" - allets

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Without Fear

Like you want to
meet the Demigoddess, before
you go in bloom..................................excellent metaphor...............full score-Sankhajit Bhattacharjee

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After The Harmony

World View
Used as stairs...know that truth. To be is to be employed as a stair - allets

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Taking Revenge

Beautiful poem. Very interesting to read...10. Please kindly check my poems HOPE and THE BEAUTY OF DEATH and leave your comments and rating.-Kingsley Egbukole

Why you want to sell
a fake idea, wrapped
in tears of sunken eyes? ........................fabulous.............full score.-Sankhajit Bhattacharjee

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Absolutely

Absolutely! But is it that easy? TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Serene Encounters

Love This Line
"...Your were not you in my every poem..." I read it twice as "You were not you.." nailed it the 3rd and 4th closer reads. A Satish flourish. Enjoyed. - allets

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To Be Human

So relevant, Sri Satish Verma.-Diamond

Out would Love the last stanza for what has been done to his identity here on MPS.-Diamond

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Behind The Glass

Fantastic write and beautifully written. I really enjoyed reading this one...-mikemezz

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History Of Pain

Images of pain well portrayed. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, NELLORE

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Swift Descent

i like the religious references and how they are used...
and if the moon gets stuck we are in trouble...
with all the hate in the world and so much violence done in the name of God.
what the heck are we doing?
soon we will all sleep with the fishes...
j.-jacob erin-cilberto 

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How To Proceed

Tomorrow is another day.-James Michael

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Candle Burns In Colors

A hard hitting verse portraying the chaos around. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Truths well said! I agree with Annapurna.-Padmavathi, Khammam

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Violent Shaking

One can interpret this in various ways. The shaken baby syndrome, the unforgivable disciplinary shaking of an adolescent, or the tremors of one who has any of the many neurological diseases. Whatever my friend those who have been subject to the violent shaking some never coming out of it all I can say is that you have penned a masterful write here.-JacieStralkoDuca

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Help Me

Brilliant!-Ganesha Michael Shapiro

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Watching The Lethality

A hard hitting truth well portrayed. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Meeting Nemesis

The World's A Stage
Stopping it and getting off is contraindicted :D be well Satish - allets

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Sea Salt

Wonderfully expressed. Beautiful Poem.-Weeping willow

Spectacular!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

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Unbendingly

hmm be true b 3 no butcher has ever scared me try to stay true speaking true word get u into more trouble than its worth at time what i learned wen asked to speak for certain thing nice write think your butcher should b fairy sprinkle sum good stuff on him ha enjoyed have good evening.-janetmcglone

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Smoking Candles

& " DONE " ! _______________OUTBACK

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I Remember

The scars should be removed from mind. A tender path should be followed soon. An amazing poem is shared.-Kumarmani Mahakul

A well composed pragmatic poem......10++++-Bernard F. Asuncion

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Stray Moments

I really like this. So much conveyed here with a minimum number of words. Why, indeed, cut the rose?-Willys Watson 

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Made On Earth

I love your unorthodox line breaks.-Aislinn Wilson

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Compelling Charm

A thought provoking one. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma

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The Man And God

The Man And God...
The narrative is well-crafted in three haikus. -Aniruddha Pathak

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The Man And God

The Man And God...
The narrative is well-crafted in three haikus.-Aniruddha Pathak

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Elusive Peace

I feel at home in this.-Jon Thenes

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New Questions

I - DON'T* - " KNOW " = ?-OUTBACK

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Who Answers?

Sooooo resonates.-Diamond

And surely gives me the inspiration to write. Thank you.-Diamond

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New Sports

Beautiful verse Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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