Disoriented

Brilliant! What images! 'The black name was crawling on the white paper'! Indeed death has many names and the realisation can help one come out of the disorientation. But when the slave has become the master, will the realisation ever come...that is the question. Thank you for sharing this. -Supratik Sen, Kolkata

Though difficult to know the central idea it is still enjoyable because of diction and beautiful imageies.-KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka

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The Secret Path

...is an open secret. Good one!-Supratik Sen, Kolkata

Deep into the woods.... Encounter with the unknown... Quite Philosophical. Verma ji.-R R Gandikota , Hyderabad

Simply loved this one!-Rajeev Moothedath, Bangalore

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Oblique Vision

City of ashes, nice work.-Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Satish, such a fine poem.-Bernard F. Asuncion

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A Quiet Night

I always find your poetry delightfully thought provoking and this is no exception. I love the visuals snd in particular the idea of a haunted house sending forth tiny ghosts. Besg wishes.-Milly Hayward

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Change Of Life

The journey of the Phoenix is
The journey of the Phoenix is a fearful one but a very powerful one. Great write! CheerSs
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" -SSmoothie

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Negation Of What

The Vogue
Yes, Satish. There is nothing new, and we relive and revive and wonder. - allets

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Humbling

Bravo, liked the breadth, depth of sincerity, that the poetic stylings spark whilst dancing betwixt my ears; thanx for entering and all you do. Best poem I've read all year! Namaste.-reality1

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To Understand

Nice poem keep them coming.-Light Night

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Concepts

Beautiful poem. Great expressions calling for closer look and deeper thought. Thanks.
peel off the frozen poem from my lips to taste it.-Rajnish Manga

Satish, such a fine poem...10+++-Bernard F. Asuncion

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The Nectarine Bliss

What other than destruction would it mean! Just look at us, our mindset, we have created nukes to threat, but we have not been able to use any instrument that could heal the earth. If I create a weapon for mass destruction, with eyes wide open you will be scared of me (fear); this fear I will take as respect. Many countries now have weapons that can destroy the earth just to wheel respect and join the power club, but no countries have any instrument that can heal the earth after the nuke would be fired. Much enjoyed the lines Satish. -Supratik Sen, Kolkata

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Emission Biochemical

Tasteful and unique.-mossgirl19

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To Understand

Nice poem keep them coming. -Light Night

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This Autumn

The moon is calling and medusa opens eternally. Autumn beckons.-awless

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Who Was Faithful?

Nice.-Hasna

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Incinerated

Destruction of waste material by burning is well developed on no uncertain terms. However, we never seem to burn our own beliefs, our own wastes; guillotine of god, for the sake of god takes place time and again. -Supratik Sen, Kolkata

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Sick Times

I really like this a lot of emotion but has a true meaning wrapped within it....-Scott Cole

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Perversion

Very nice, love the message!!!-Scott Cole

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Underbelly

A metaphorical poem. The creativity and vulnerability of the night expressed strikingly in a few lines. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

'The poetry matters,
when it is dark.'
it's because it brings light.-KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka

It's the hidden unpleasant part of society that is woven in a clever way in the lines of the third stanza, well the shedding of horns happens annually, unfortunately it happens more frequently in society and yes poetry is the refuge that comes with its own secrets as a coping mechanism. -Supratik Sen, Kolkata

It gave me a sense of enigma. And that's why it seems more appealing. :) -Chirasree Bose, Hyderabad

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A Nondescript Night

Completely had me flumuxed. It was exactly as the title said "a nondescript night but what threw me was the last line you can start reading a murder. It's still whirring around my head what was the connection hence being flumuxed but an enjoyable piece none the less. Best wishes.-Milly Hayward

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Afterthoughts

Breath taking.-Milly Hayward

Beautiful.-Amrita Singh

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Change Of Life

The journey of the Phoenix is
The journey of the Phoenix is a fearful one but a very powerful one. Great write! CheerSs
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" -SSmoothie

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A Lone Journey

Your images are always vast, it takes your readers on a ride, otherwise the lone journey that starts with a feather's fall on the mirror also travels as a bride's experiencing rose petals to unthink is a marvellous way of talking about a journey that has to take meandering turns to the unknown. I find this realisation filled with awe and intriguing Satish ji. -Supratik Sen, Kolkata

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Mystery

Touching. May god bless you.-Alex Yew

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A Broken Pride

I don't always completely understand your poetry but it is always thought provoking and compelling. This piece has so much depth to unravel with its dramatic and unexpected finish. Best wishes.-Milly Hayward

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Waiting To Blink

Very deep and dark write I seen its meaning away from the Light.-SuperSlimJim

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depression

Exquisitely crafted poem highlighting a page of history written with blood.
Thanks a lot.-Rajnish Manga

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Breathing Again

I've missed your writing. This is very interesting. It implores the reader. Very nice.-abstractempo

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The Living Death

I love this. Surreal in a way, calamity personified.-Kriskros88

Beautiful work! - draculazy

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Gods were changing

Wars are endemic to human nature. A poem echoing concerns for the love of humanity. Good share Satish sir. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

'The terror of words
and words of terror, testify
against the predator
for twisting a confession.'
Beautiful lines. -KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka

Dear Satish, It's indeed a challenging world where God and temple, love and word, truth and terror cohabit.. jostling in the same space. You've portrayed it in your inimitable, sage-like way. Thank you.
-U Atreya Sarma, Bengaluru

I absolutely second both the Sharma here. Nothing more to add. Superb! -Supratik Sen, Kolkata

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Solemnity

A lot of thought.-abstractempo

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Paralysed

Just brilliant with the stark, hollow and red images that have paralysed our society, translformed the blue ball into a gas chamber. The images are vivid, shocking and heart-wrenching. The last stanza says it all. -Supratik Sen, Kolkata

Reality checks are haunting. Thanks for the insightful share. -Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi

The concluding stanza is very effective. -KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka

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Words play

Hard-hitting with your characteristic softness and examples that move from micro to macro. There is never a final stroke, they are different strokes. Very nice word play. -Supratik Sen, Kolkata

Thought prooking lines. Deep and concentrated.- swatee sripada, Hyderabad

The last stanza is very effective. -KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka

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Holding The Waves

An interesting thought provoking piece with vibrant imagery. Loved it. Milly x-Milly Hayward

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The Firefiies

I love your work.-Dagmar Wilson

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Absurd Myths

There are infinite wounds - internal and external and nobody is at fault, for time is the best judge and healer of all pains. Thank you Satish sir. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

A great poem, Sir! -Chirasree Bose, Hyderabad

We have to keep guessing I think! -Supratik Sen, Kolkata

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Moonset

Satish, such a heartwarming poem...10+++-Bernard F. Asuncion

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Returning Your Message

Intrigue
This is interesting to me. Read it a few times. I must say, I often read you. Though I fail to comment... I do read.-Hopefulwoman

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Scrutinizing

Human we are.-Lawless

A clever assessment of what humans can be when herded together Satish - - thanks for sharing the meaning of fear too.-Fay Slimm

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Sterility

Cultivating sane thoughts in an insane jungle is rather daunting. Thought provoking lines sir.-Annapurna Sharma

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Remembering Neil Armstrong

A dark and unusual piece that reminded me a little of the old Quatermas Movies. An Alien tale or a tale of an autoimmune disorder exploding. (then I read the title lol) A thought provoking piece that had me captivated. Best wishes.Milly Hayward

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Scarring

True to the letter. -Supratik Sen

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