Faces Of God

"They turn to ashes" and we are the products of that process. As Carl Sagan said, "we are starstuff."-Buzz Bray

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In Ancient Fire

A well-penned poem packed with a lot of expectations and emotions, Satish jee!-Padma, Hyderabad

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The Last Wishes

A grave poem of graver realities. "No one wants to become another moon".. Five stars, dear poet-Unnikrishnan E S

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Why Complain

even straining, on our tippy toes
we invariably, tend to fall short...
ergo, all that intense introspection
yields, a warped sense of self
since we're always looking
at a distorted reflection, to begin with...-L. B. Mek

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In Hurling Light

'Break a heart to drop
the pride of climbing pink
rose on the white wall.'
masterful!-saiom

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After Rebirth

Will you be the first to reach 5000?
Thank you for bringing your talent and presence!'
'You trespass the deep
pain and my words bleed.'
it seems fools rush into someone's pain
where angels fear to tread-saiom

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In Ignorance

'you cannot make a big hole in
'you cannot make
a big hole in blue sky.' or in the sea either
great poem.-saiom

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In Amnesias

'No prosthesis will work
I will run, run
after
the fading sun, for the last
kiss.
The raw wounds
don't need any bandages.'

'Let us sip, subtly
upon our love's: pseudo nectar
of everlasting's, dreams

then part, before
our awareness
awakens, my dear...'
(forgive me, dear Poet
I couldn't help
but try and scribble a few lines
to accompany your beautiful, Poetry,
I meant no disrespect, by doing-so)
thank you for choosing to share, Guru!-L. B. Mek

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On Fiery Path

The puppet and no to answer the questions. The future is unanswerable.
Thanks for making us all think, again.-James Michael Schwab

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In Anguish

beautiful and powerful words, s. "Never made it. The
two small feet home. "-sophin

'My goblet
remained, full of
black holes.

A cloud
will cross the line. Unrepentant
my poems
would lie on hot rocks, for baking.

Never
made it. The two small feet
home.'
Brilliant imagery, this
is what Artistry of Poetry feels like
to experience and be overwhelmed-by.
thank you, Guru!-L. B. Mek

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In Anguish

beautiful and powerful words, s. "Never made it. The
two small feet home. "-sophin

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Under The Neem Tree

Poignant. Emotions expresses honestly, Satish jee.-Padma, Hyderabad

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Deity Speaks

that quietude of No
to greet
our expectancy of want
over Need...'
('know thyself': to glean
all, that you Need
accepting, all the rest
are just optional, extra's
in this
our one glimpsed, scene
of existence's
unsurpassably finite: fear)-L. B. Mek

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Extraordinary

Not heartless yet.
Like a spear through the heart... Some people love for the sake of vengeance for their past hurts. A poem as extraordinary as its title.-mdelleviolette

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Not Yet Battered

Ooofffttt. Not really sure what to say about this other than its an amazing piece of art.
Regards-Craig-CJ Maleney

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Trampled Dreams

This conveys emotions I can't really pin down. I like it a lot. Thank you-C E Thomas

profound words, that express
such raw incredulity, at the sheer
diabolic status, of our society's morally bankrupt hypocrisy..
a great write!
thank you, Guru-L. B. Mek

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Rain Mind

So beautifully and poetically expressed! It gave me the feeling of falling in love, with the euphoria of breathing deeply to smell the jasmine. You've captured something wonderful here, Satish!-Kelly Scheppers

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God, What is Your Real Name

Not heartless yet.
It goes straight to the soul, like a prayer. 🙏🏻🌹 Thank you for sharing! I also hope the shadows fall away.-mdelleviolette

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Light Luggage

'Ah, the terror
to remain alive, under
the water of mercy.'
just pure poetic genius!
thank you, Guru.-L. B. Mek

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Trying To Remember

beautiful prose.-sophin

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Holy Tree Crying Earth

A gorgeous poem! Lingering is certainly a struggle in these times. What DOES one suggest to turn the tides and refill the ocean of love? Is it possible at all, anymore?-mdelleviolette

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We Don't Agree

Loved the poem m, the play of words, the metaphors.-Unnikrishnan E S

"The cult violence…destroy the pistillate.." A forceful expression against female foeticide, which continues as a serious evil. But the poem is much more profound than that.-Unnikrishnan E S

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Not A Punishment

Incredible write. I can't put into words how I adored this work.-sophin

'The wild pursuit
of your footprints brings bliss.

Fight was on, for not
to be or isness. I cannot
turn away from my
inner voice,'
(great wordplay and effortless flow
a brilliant read, thanks for sharing)-L. B. Mek

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Two Small Eyes

I loved the line when you 'you can't change the world' and it's so true, Satish jee. A good poem.-Padma, Hyderabad

Interesting!-Kuma Raj Subedi , South Australia

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Caretaking

Brilliant!
(and Happy New Year!)-L. B. Mek

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I Write Blood

Facts well told, Satish jee. A good poem.-Padma, Hyderabad

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I See in Dark

Trying to bring positivity in negative thoughts is something commendable and you depicted this so well in this poem, Satish jee.-Padma, Hyderabad

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On The Longest Day

Hits me as a protest against climate change—that is, we must learn to move forward from the errors of our past in order to prevent global deterioration.-Victor Ambiguo

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Deceiving None

this is a perfect poem.. thank you Satish.-Dale Costello, Australia

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No Mercy Today

This is something reminding God to do justice through this poem. Nice thought and well-expressed, Satish jee!-Padma, Hyderabad

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