BLOODSCAPE

words of wisdom and concern towards society at large ...i like the expessions and creativity ...the metaphor is just grand- Nikunj

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ANNIVERSARY

Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Satish. It was a pleasure to read. Have a wonderful inspiration filled day my friend. Love- Carol Brown

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Serene revenge

Dear Sir, The metaphor usage is with creative excellence. I admire the poignant reflection with dose of irony. regards, -Shigufta Hena Uzma, Patna

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BLANKSCAPE

Super poem, great imagery really enjoyed it- jag

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DEATH’S REVERSAL

Questions on death are ever increasing - a thoughtful verse wrapped in your usual masterly manner my friend. Cephalic delusions are manifold and you verse that point well.-Fay Slimm


Are there any worlds beyond the stars? Interesting.-Debs




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RETURNING

I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Satish. Thank you for sharing and I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Love- Carol Brown

nice one- sumbal qureshi

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TURBULENCE

Smile ~ “Let's Us Hope Sooo Because, Your Perspectives & Views, Are Way Too Dark. ~ `Love-John Rhinem

Very creative work...Enjoyed reading this morn..Those mosquitoes are the pits but I am sure that you can turn out a manuscript.-Sara Kendrick

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UNBECOMING

A brilliant and hard hitting piece! Please do read my poems if you have the time m still budding and would love your insight...-Sameer Gardner

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TABLEAU

Was that tableau or taboo?- James T. Adair


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PUZZLES

nice one.-narain, jay p.


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COUPLING

I like this..gives the feeling of 'sad but necessary' to me.- Jim Kistner Jr

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LONGEST ECLIPSE

Another in-depth write. I do enjoy your writes.- Lady Dragonwyck 

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THE TANGO

Tragic but wonderfully written.- Indah Widiastuti


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Dark language

Your images are too good, Satish. You write with a flair. Thank you for your regular posting.- Kumarendra Mallick, Hyderabad

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EMPTY DAY

Melancholia wafts from each line so succinctly - another deep and thought-provoking verse from your superlative mind my friend.- Fay Slimm

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My Diary

This is excellent work, I have looked up your site, the rest of your work is indeed very commendable, if you have not used this site before please take some time to look at your commentary in regards to critique and views on your pieces of work. Regards- Grahame (Centra)


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SEEKING

Confusing, but very interesting with some powerful verse. Grahame-(centra) http://www.poem.nu/

TRAVELLING TO MOON

Dear friend I find I have to agree with Frank below - it is sometimes obscurely difficult to follow the message your genius with pen is extracting from that fine mind of yours. Nevertheless your work has always given me much pleasure to see here on P.F. as it lights my shallower way to more depth.-  Fay Slimm

Morphogenesis kind of sums up the abstractive efforts of each stanzaic offering,here...My only problem that continues to exist in my earnest attempts to extract and chew on the quasi-unique elements you employ with seemingly errant rapid-fire.... is in digesting & achieveing some absolute message that can be of indisputable concrete interpretive value....You are a hardball player of verse, you are!-   Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR


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SUNS INHERITANCE

it is indeed a bleak panarama, Satish. There is really no plausible excuse for any of it. Thanks for sharing- Robert A. Dufresne

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SPLITTING

wow, Verma,, and the moon pick up line was awesome and very unique... splitting one waits one goes,,, enjoyed.- ¥ Destroyer ¥ Poet

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The Ritual

 Incredibly well. Very strong structure. Great imagery. Fine poetics.
I rated it 10/10. - Mohd. Akmal Nazir


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CUDDLING

We have so many amazing writers here at PoetrySoup and I enjoy reading all the poems. I am happy your poetry was among the poems I was able to read today Satish. Please continue to write and share your poetry with the world. Love- Carol Brown

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BREATHING DUST

back to the drawing board................................-  Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR


I liked the line 'the corpses of dreams'...the poem poignantly seems to reflect the predicament of the author-Shriram Sivaramakrishnan


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CROSSBARS

O.K., Satish, now this (i think) i have a firm grip on from onset to close-out...And so this poorNow, this, Satish...i (think) i have a firm grip on from onset to close-out...And, now, so that this Old World Oscine bird from the Family Alaudidae,better known as the LARK, may have his query accurately replied to in hopes that he will sleep in solace tonight, albeit he may sleep with his eye's peeled to the sky tonight in wrankled stress in receiving his answer which of course ,as you know is "NO ONE! -Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR


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SPLITTING

Satish sir .. a nice love affair with the moon .. enjoyed. warmest regards.-Rassool Jbraeel Snyman, South Africa

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OUTRAGEOUS

perfect title. and brilliant word choices. "Plucking the nector from knobs of naked flames" Yeah, i like that.- ju


Well, Satish, either pick it up with the knobs ,or if it was "dumped" flaming naked , have the decency to cover it up with the nectar...lol! - Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR

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PLASMA SCREEN

I enjoyed your unorthodox visions and your descriptive talents, so well-evidenced by this poem.-Leo Larry Amadore

Wishing you a wonderful day and weekend too. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Satish. I hope your weekend is filled with love and joy and you find your soul filled with inspiration. Love-Carol Brown

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GOLD-TIPPED

You speak in a tongue thats hard to read sometimes... you never reply why??- She Whispers 

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IN THE NAME OF ………

I really like the first stanza. It's almost a poem in it self.-Roger Bacon

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STUMBLING

interesting. your writing always seems to make me think alot and take off with ideals.-eddie bryant salinas

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GOLD-TIPPED

Excellent writing. A breath of fresh air.- Roger Bacon

Satish: really enjoyed this write. Very in-depth. Your usual excellent styling.-Lady Dragonwyck

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Secret wake

'sanitizing
the hands
after the killing'
tells a lot in six words... - Snehith Kumbla, Pune

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THE TROUBLED FAITH

Smile ~ Let us cross our fingers dear - Jhon Rhinem

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LANDSCAPING

Great poem with brilliant imagery and wonderful style. I rate it 10. - Mohd. Akmal Nazir


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POETRY

time for fellatio ! Humm . . . Great write and very explicitly described . .- Smriti Jha

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IRONY OF AUTHOR

No laughing matter, our moonlight chatter... Most literary work is an architected perk.... fueled on Tears & Smiles ,employed by shrewd beguile.....Jealousy .....not my cup of green tea... cenerstage...full front-page , i do confess, i handle best!...-Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR


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SERENE REVENGE

The title tho' oxymoronish, is sumo creative in impactual essence. I am still attempting, when time permits me, to invade your mercurial mindworx so i may better understand what many times ostensibly comes off as skillfully grandilloquent, as well as a tad imperious. To permeate that cryptic wall of yours & digest your many transfixations such as your relentless & eccentrical depictions of catastropia, and anathemaic scenarios you open but never close. (and of course you know all this ,as this is your M.O.) Alas, thus far, (as you also know) you have been an impervious braintrust to undrape and roll-out before the poetic masses on this Site...And for that i say...Good On You, Sir!...- Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR


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STAR STRUCK

Wow...amazing poetry!! Regards-Chitra Lakhera

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ABDICATION

Love the new found inspiration of poets I have been reading today. Glad to see your poetry among them Satish. May the sun always shine down upon you and continue to bring inspiration to your soul. Love- Carol Brown

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SMALL TALK

Ps. Smile ~ Sweeet Satish ~ Twas Passing Back By ~ Thought That I ~ Would Stop In ~ Again ~ To Give Your Sweeetness ~ A Ruby Red Kissss -John Rhinem

Smile ~ Tis a very well written poem, lovely Satish. Profound in its voice, its possibilities of, one thing or another....I consider my own blood, and I smile knowing, that I myself, would gladly pour into a cup for, tis merely blood; no more no less.... ~ Great Poe ~ Love-John Rhinem

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OF THE NEXT ZEN

excellent write Satish.. zen always interests me luv.. and this piece is perfection...- Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S.

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