Your choice of metaphors - impressive. The first two stanzas remind me of a galactic phenomenon, the third and fourth of something to look forward to and the last is a feeling of great 'loss'. But your category states 'Peace' so it's hard to tell. Would love to hear your explanation, Satish. It deserves 5 stars though for being a thought-provoking poem. -Jacinta Ramayah, Malaysia
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