Satish,
I found the imagery of the first three verses striking and fancy I find meaning in them at a personal level.
The end of the poem mystifies me.
Most of your work is indecipherable to me though I note the threading imagery of moon and lake in your recent posts.
There seems to be a certain leaping from thought to thought between verses in your style of writing.
Many times I find myself being pulled up by the striking imagery and power of words as I read them in your poetry even if I may not grasp your intent.
To the continuing read,
best regards- Gion Gion
http://p4poetry.com/
I found the imagery of the first three verses striking and fancy I find meaning in them at a personal level.
The end of the poem mystifies me.
Most of your work is indecipherable to me though I note the threading imagery of moon and lake in your recent posts.
There seems to be a certain leaping from thought to thought between verses in your style of writing.
Many times I find myself being pulled up by the striking imagery and power of words as I read them in your poetry even if I may not grasp your intent.
To the continuing read,
best regards- Gion Gion
http://p4poetry.com/
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