Strong lines, each line carries a wise observation. Fascinating!-
LightH2O
A beautiful picture postcard painted with words. The last stanza: "Pull up the veil./ It separates the truth./ Do not filter the pain./ We may find a god." is thought-provoking and the title is brilliant.- Gita Ashok
A beautiful picture postcard painted with words. The last stanza: "Pull up the veil./ It separates the truth./ Do not filter the pain./ We may find a god." is thought-provoking and the title is brilliant.- Gita Ashok
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