I love that last stanza it sums it up really good. Blessings to you.-
LightH2O
In truth this is a poetic gem, that merits a re-read. Your stark ending says it all so succinctly!- Carrot
"The silence is ultimately the moment of/ truth. Truth erases the lie and seals a/ kiss of death. "Intense, thought-provoking lines in this sublime verse. The title is apt.- Gita Ashok
I find your writing as poetic gems that has value more than gold, reading them is an experience in itself, and I savor each line as fine wine. This poem is excellent in form, style, content, and impact.- CynthiaBuhainBaello
It wanders around in my brain , making itself at home any place it likes ...peace- leafsailor
In truth this is a poetic gem, that merits a re-read. Your stark ending says it all so succinctly!- Carrot
"The silence is ultimately the moment of/ truth. Truth erases the lie and seals a/ kiss of death. "Intense, thought-provoking lines in this sublime verse. The title is apt.- Gita Ashok
I find your writing as poetic gems that has value more than gold, reading them is an experience in itself, and I savor each line as fine wine. This poem is excellent in form, style, content, and impact.- CynthiaBuhainBaello
It wanders around in my brain , making itself at home any place it likes ...peace- leafsailor
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