I like the neat little stanzas. The poem itself has lovely internal rhyme, like: suspense and intense. Also the imagery of rain/fire/clouds and my favourite - barefoot on grass, I mean, everyones got to feel that one.
I was confused the the odd placement of the question marks, perhaps that is the idea?
I feel this poem is about fuelled revenge. The poem ends well, with the sky falling onto roses and with it eyes blur and close - the end.
This poem could be a warning to the world that is so messed up and on its way to self-anihalation, or simply a more personal, individual write. Either way, I liked it.-Mr. Darcy
I was confused the the odd placement of the question marks, perhaps that is the idea?
I feel this poem is about fuelled revenge. The poem ends well, with the sky falling onto roses and with it eyes blur and close - the end.
This poem could be a warning to the world that is so messed up and on its way to self-anihalation, or simply a more personal, individual write. Either way, I liked it.-Mr. Darcy
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