Josh Silvers

DEATH AND DUST
nice verbage and good poem
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Liddie22

REVOCATION
Beautifully said. We all vow to challenge tradition in our youth only to retun to it for comfort as we test our strength over time and then forget the great call of endless possibilities audible mostly to youthful ears. Great write. Liddie

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Zelgin Yorae

WHAT ENDING?
Not bad, I feel that the ending is never near, that the separate stories end, yet stories continue when others end. This is the reality of living creatures.

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Patrick McFarland

SUICIDES
Sad and moving. I have heard it said that to be a great poet, one must know great pain. I feel sad because you are truly a great poet.
Peace.

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Roger Cornish

HOLDING MY TOES
When I read poetry like this it illustrates how far I have, Poetically, to travel.
So, I'll make up some sandwiches and get on my way.... and if I get even close to your writing, then I will be thrilled!
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Patrick McFarland

DESERTED WASTELAND
Wonderful and moving and wise and tranquil all at once. What a great great poem.
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Sunil Uniyal

ASHES OF HATE
A beautiful poem, Sir, thought provoking.

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Melvin Banggollay

CATCH THE SUNSET
I love this piece so much as it poetically display the magic of your pen and wit of your mind.

thanks and best wishes,

melvin
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Melvin Banggollay

IN THE INTERMITTENT LOVE
very nice poem. I like its deepness and content.

best wishes,

melvin

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expression

Messeage from expression

I have been reading your work. It is very deep and profound so much so that I am unable to comment on it. Please excuse me for it. Some of your verses are beyond my understanding too.

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rajagopal haran

EMPTINESS WAS SCREAMING
Loving can cost a lot but not loving always costs more, and those who fear to love often find that want of love is an emptiness that robs the joy from life.-great poem sir; enjoyed it


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Mystery

BLEEDING HEART
I really like ""Do not wake me up I am sleepwalking in the courtyard of the muse"". It is easier to spend time in the land of fantasy and inspiration than to walk through the anguish of the world. Nicely done!

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Subbaraman N V

FACE OF TRUTH
Seeing the face of truth is always a great exercise! Happy thet you could see the face in the course of a night! Congarats! A good poem!

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Subbaraman N V

FAILING GOD
'Seeking my own truth, I abandon the path and fall upon lies'! And there lies the problem and attendent difficulties!

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Subbaraman N V

FAITHLESS AUTUMN
Life of an ordinary mortal is well portrayed! Good poem, nice thoughts, great presentation!
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Subbaraman N V

FALL OF A TENDER DOCTRINE
Why always a tinge of sorrow? God guides, we take the things in their stride and perform our duty without much of unusual expectation! Life is bound to be joyous and peaceful!
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Afua

JUDGEMENT
one day rains will wash away stains on the boulders when the future enters the past i will be ready for judgement welldone Satish

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Genevieve

MIDNIGHT SIN
So, another write to ponder upon. Beautifully written!

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marvin brato

ERECTED IN MY PAIN
Poetic passion describing how much pain we suffer if we succumb to miseries in life, but if we can sustain courage and hope then we can survive to live a happy life. Good thought, highest marks.

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Pramod Khilery

RETURN TO MYSELF
The dilemma of life as seen from the most vantage point articulated in such a heart wrenching as well as heart warming way courtsy the poetic sounds of rhythmic words.
warm regards
pramod


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Patrick McFarland

RETURN TO MYSELF
ved your poem. Great depth and understanding of the human condition crafted with perfect language. I give it a 10.
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Mystery, Buchi

TIDE
Buchi
this is frightening.

Mstery
The world as we know it is changing. Climate and people are becoming less temperate. Nicely done!

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Goldy Locks

TRAMPLING
scaring or scarring? ..it's time to put a spring back in the depleted step; put some air back in the trampled chute. Or is it more beautiful this way...

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Goldy Locks

LIKE A MOONBEAM
`I could hobble along with a younger poem'... is destination the purpose, after all? they tell/feed you the living is in the journey... but how can one have a journey w/out an aim. Does it become a crusade? keep on, sjg

`Our shadows entwined
with our steps.'

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Goldy Locks

LEGITIMACY
'beauty of crucial controversy [...] Greatness was the idea of mediocres. / Every thought had the dignity / of its own! '

Loves it. ~~sjg

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meonomous

BY YOURSELF
I am drawn by the image of the' shadows pulling us apart'. It is powerful and feels all at once sad but also a revelation showing us a solution.

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Meonomous

UNBLINKING
It seems that some things draw us in more than others, it is different for each of us. And these things bind us and make us different, but we are all drawn to something in so many similar ways.

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Goldy Locks

A KISS MELTS
a riftquake certain
to incinerate me up
despite my wedged dissent.

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Goldy Locks

ALONE IN THE HEAT
Seems inevitably futile (not fruitless) . Does life have a point? it's one steady realization after the other. Yet there's nothing steady about it.

best care, sjg xx

'Moon cries at midnight
looking beneath the soft clouds,
to follow eternity.' ... . . . . . . .... loves it.

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Goldy Locks

ARROGANT CURVES
you're more drawn/fascinated by the imperfections, rather than the ideal proportions.

are you? the complexities.

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Goldy Locks

EPILEPTIC TRUTH
momentum, for the sake of momentum.

i always sass keep your sympathies, for it's a swift down-slide to pitying.

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Goldy Locks

PAUSE
behind the tiny engraved names:
we grow towards an undoing,
an undone.

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Pamela Chesnutt, Ardelean

TALL FAITH
awesome poem.... Pamela...ordained minister

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Pamela Chesnutt, Ardelean

WAKES THE BLOOD
I like this poem too. God bless...Pamela...ordained minster
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poewhit

NAMESAKE
"" they have started molesting the mirror"", that is a great line.

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Angeldeath

WINDOW
How do you come up with such deep poems? I am inspired by your work, but i cant just get as deep as you. Great and powerful write. Angeldeath Adam

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You dont need to dig up deep.Watch yourself and around you to feel and share the happenings with empathy without seeking anything in return.Maintain the purity of truth, you will get the bliss of pen. And thanks for keen observation.

meonomous

I read your words here like the texture on a wall, it is full of fine detail which if not looked at closely you will miss, so you run your fingers over it and find even more. Excellent.

hedges776

YOU have obviously been observing HUMANS for a long time ... but, I ask, is it safe to let them see themselves in the mirror you so skillfully move gently before the masses ...? Will they recognize themselves? Did you by chance change the title from ""Mirror"" to ""Window""? ...

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lillyjane

DAMP THIGHS
Somewhere a bell rings keeps on ringing clear and faithful untouched by echo, chained to a soundless sea. I love thease words , the poem is beautiful and sad , brilliant to. xxx

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lillyjane, rizalbob

MY FAMILY
lillyjane

Thats so beautiful you are indeed a very talented poet. xxx

rizalbob

I like the line ""in nightness of shooting stars"". Beautifully written. Well done.

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goldy_99

INCOMPLETE MAKING
In your poems have got so much philosophy. I like them.

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mintchocol8chick, poet3296e, goldy_99

INCOMPLETE MAKING
mintchocol8chick
""When were you saint, when did you sin ?"" This is really good. Simple language with much deeper meaning.

Flag poet3296e
I like the paragraph that starts with when did you lose when did you win, very profound words also i agree with what goldy said.


Flag goldy_99
In your poems have got so much philosophy. I like them.

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Goldy Locks

BLISS OF ANOTHER SELF
your stuff kindles the core.


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Goldy Locks

TREE OF LIGHT DANCES
i adore conclusion & it never changes.

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Goldy Locks

BODY RECOMES THE PATH
soul mates only exist in children - glad you captured, expressed that.

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Goldy Locks

CLAUSTROPHOBIA
The flameless fire collapses
lapping up the anger.

ending took me by complete surprise... and that's what it's about. best care, sjg

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Goldy Locks

CLAUSTROPHOBIA
ps: Is irrational pain - true pain?

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