DARK LANGUAGE

Your poetry touches something inside my soul, no matter how horrific or dark it is.-Sara Lokken

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DEAF AND DUMB

This is "I was dreaming of only bleeders"- this is you, what you're doing, and your words certainly haven't lost any edge at all. You are brutally honest. I don't know how to describe what I'm getting in your metaphors, but I share in your grief.-Sara Lokken

I love the Tut and tutenkhamen reference.... Good one here Verma.....-Jared Pickett

strange poem, moving in a horrific way.-Doris Culverhouse

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* THIS MOMENT

This almost sounds like human trafficking. Heartbreaking... horrific.... dead... is what I am getting. Yes, I keep changing my name, because I can't make up my mind.:) I'll leave it with the old one. I'll go comment on some more work. Sincerely,-Sara Lokken

so sad-Susan Palli

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CROSSBARS

NO ONE! So, Satish, make them stop if you can! I guess it is up to the Heavenly beings. Many men seem to have lost touch. Great thought provoking write. Keep writing. Smiles, -Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

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OUTRAGEOUS

person empty. But precious is the heart of the faithful. And forgiving oneself is often harder than forgiving another...because we know! But happiness is based upon righteous living and forgiving ourselves along with others. Our Creator wants us to be righteously happy. He forgives those who ask. Be happy. Lovingly,-Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

What a wonderful way to spend this snowy day reading poetry. I am so happy that yours was amongst the ones I am reading today. Thank you for sharing your poetry today Satish. Love, -Carol Brown

Nice Verma.... Keep them comin'.....:-Jared Pickett

Interesting write Satish and luv your title too ... thought provoking .. thankxxx for sharing.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup.. -Linda-Marie Bariana

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DIVINITY WITHOUT

I feel I am crying with you. This is so hollow... -Sara Lokken

Very interesting writing today Satish. It was a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup. Love,-Carol Brown

Wow, quite the image you have here my friend... Excellent word-play... Good work....:-Jared Pickett

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MINACIA

You are standing back from something, painfully.... -Sara Lokken

You have excellent use of words that create imagery and and thoughtful responses from a reader. Excellent, Satish. Smiles, -Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

WOW... Intense poem... Good job my friend....-Jared Pickett

What is Minacia? This is very intriguing if not a little unsettling. It reminds me of a Plath Poem. Milk for the soldiers? It's too deep for me. -deneith reif

IMMOVABLE

Satish your poems like prayers amplify all of us longing for peace. Your bold images cut me to the core and I stop in my tracks and whisper a prayer for our world. -Marcia Schechinger, USA

Crossing the time zone

Dear Vermaji. Kudos to your poetic prowess that is very unique in all your writings. Sadly some portions I could not decipher in this poem. They are a bit complicated with some deeper meaning. I could only make out some as I rewrote one to form my own impressions. And here I shall reproduce the same, though it is a bit crass. I only await your comments correcting my version and further elucidating your poem. - Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad

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OUTRAGEOUS

What a wonderful way to spend this snowy day reading poetry. I am so happy that yours was amongst the ones I am reading today. Thank you for sharing your poetry today Satish. Love, - Carol Brown


Nice Verma.... Keep them comin'.....:- ared Pickett


Interesting write Satish and luv your title too ... thought provoking .. thankxxx for sharing.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..- Linda-Marie Bariana


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FOR A FORGOTTON STORY

The world is destroying itself and people don't care. It is good of you Satish to make us remember our responsibilities. Well-written.- Jacinta Ramayah, Malaysia


Satish with graphic reality you express the need for change. Change in government procedures, change in person, and change in prayers that God will lead those in power from corruption and proceed with more compassionate hearts. Last stanza - a real power punch. :)- Marcia Schechinger,  USA


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Moon rise

Respected Sir, A beautiful piece of poetry. Liked it much. Warm regards, - Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi

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MINACIA

WOW... Intense poem... Good job my friend....:JP]- Jared Pickett


What is Minacia? This is very intriguing if not a little unsettling. It reminds me of a Plath Poem. Milk for the soldiers? It's too deep for me. - deneith reif


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FLAME

Satish, I know about inheriting "the depth of a problem", but life is not over and who knows when the "flame" will ignite. May we all find that place of peace in our lives. :) - Marcia Schechinger, USA


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IRONY OF AUTHOR

Excellent write Satish... Keep em comin my friend....:JP]- Jared Pickett


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STRIKING PORTRAIT

nice imagery - Susan Palli


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Resurrection

very good! i thought it was excellent. really liked your style and language, and the way the poem inherently flows when you read it. just one question though, what is meant by the line "sine die for the sake of peace?" - AaronGott


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SOMETHING HUMAN

wow this poem is great i cannot believe i am the first comment on this beautiful piece, the imagery you've used in this poem is very magnificent! loved the last stanza!=)Jo - joanna smith


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DEAF AND DUMB

strange poem, moving in a horrific way.- Doris Culverhouse


I love the Tut and tutenkhamen reference.... Good one here Verma.....:JP]- Jared Pickett


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SMASH THE BOOK

Great stuff Satish' But,Excactly which book are you talking about ..smashing?- Steve Chering

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... stunned me

Just like its name, it indeed is a stunning composition. Kudos to you. Warm regards, Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi

The image, the scene it brings up is eerie and yet beautiful. Snehith Kumbla , Pune

CANNOT OPEN THE LOOP

Satish we all join you in the wish for peace that we might not know "the ruins of dreams" anymore.


Marcia Schechinger, USA

CUP OF ELIXIR

Great poem, with words communicating directly to the spirit itself. Thanks Satish, for I was really moved by your sad reflection of humanity's present nature, in contrast to the sound past...


Dowell Oba, Nigeria

Dimensions

Satish, In your poem you have made great statements. Grief brings psoriasis, the eternal itch and restlessness.... and  'to protect the purity of tongue, silence was not a golden word...' Kudos.

Ch J Satyananda Kumar, Visakhapatnam

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DIVINITY WITHOUT

Very interesting writing today Satish. It was a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol Brown

Wow, quite the image you have here my friend... Excellent word-play... Good work....:JP] Jared Pickett

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THE HOLY MAN

Beautiful word-play.. Powerful and thought provoking.... Keep em comin' my friend....:JP]

Jared Pickett

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BLACK WALLS

Marvelous write. The subtle journey from white to black.

From inner peace to the dark dungeons that creep up on a unguarded soul.
Very intelligent penn.-Andy Turner

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THIN VEIL

Carol Brown
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Satish. Love, Carol

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REPEATING HISTORY

Interesting write.

The last stanza reminds me of our Viking ancestors, who'd put a body on a raft then when it was out on the river take aim with a arrow alight and ignite the raft. - Andy Turner


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A GREEN PRIDE HAS NO AMBITION NOW

L'nass Shango

Date: 2/7/2010 10:29:00 AM

This is truly a great poem and deserves to be featured. Reading this poem make me believe that there is still poetry left in the world. Satish, this is your immortal verse, it has open the annals of history to you as an English poet. Well done, my sage friend.

john freeman

Date: 2/6/2010 11:30:00 AM

ABC's of an awesome featured presentation here Satish. Congratulation on a fine feature. Sincerely, Moses

Janette Fisher

Date: 2/2/2010 11:49:00 AM

Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette

James Fraser

Date: 2/1/2010 1:52:00 PM

Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James

Gary La Buda

Date: 2/1/2010 10:26:00 AM

Satish, congratulations on your feature this week. Always, Gary La Buda

Ann Rich

Date: 2/1/2010 5:42:00 AM

Contrats to you on being featured by PoetrySoup this week. Keep pen and paper on hand & never say never! AR

Carol Brown

Date: 2/1/2010 4:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Satish. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Paula Swanson

Date: 1/31/2010 8:30:00 PM

Congratulations on being featured this week. Love this poem

Karen O'Leary

Date: 1/31/2010 5:22:00 PM

Good use of imagery for a creative view. The emtion comes through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/31/2010 2:48:00 PM

Congratulations Satish, on having your very interesting poem featured this week. I like the way you called it an ABC poem and then in the last stanza said, "Do no give it to me, my award." Each word entices the mind and seems to have an underlying depth... saturated with some kind of sorrow. I'm not sure what. But the poetry is very good. Keep writing. Lovingly,

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Obed Dela Cruz

CLOUDS AND ROADS
wow... this one is really poetic... i can see it!

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SUICIDES

You have to be really down and out to comit suicide, thoughts have to be avidly off. I do like this poetry though.- Lois Christensen

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Balachandhran.S, Chennai

Revocation

Hello Satish, I found your poem to be very cryptic and therefore fascinating. The third paragraph starting - Green goes the sea by full moon... - truly is one to savour. In the second paragraph did you want to use 'of' instead of 'off'? Good piece. Keep going. Thanks,

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Annorlunda

Charity
A very good poem. I liked the brevity of it, it gave the poem more 'punch'. This was my favourite bit:

'Dying was an appropriate thing
a festival of freedom for veils,
to leave you alone with your morality.'

A fantastic bit of description there.

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Carol Brown, Scarlett Anderson

GREEN PASTURES

Carol Brown : It has been a pleasure to read your awesome poem today Satish. Thank you so much for posting and sharing it with us. Love, Carol

Scarlett Anderson :Whoa this is very profound. I look forward to reading more of your material. Have a great day! Scarlett

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Janette Fisher

A GREEN PRIDE HAS NO AMBITION NOW

Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen, Karen O'Leary, Paula Swanson, Carol Brown

A GREEN PRIDE HAS NO AMBITION NOW

James Fraser : Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James

Gary La Buda : Satish, congratulations on your feature this week. Always, Gary La Buda

Ann Rich : Contrats to you on being featured by PoetrySoup this week. Keep pen and paper on hand & never say never! AR

Carol Brown : Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Satish. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Paula Swanson : Congratulations on being featured this week. Love this poem

Karen O'Leary : Good use of imagery for a creative view. The emtion comes through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen : Congratulations Satish, on having your very interesting poem featured this week. I like the way you called it an ABC poem and then in the last stanza said, "Do no give it to me, my award." Each word entices the mind and seems to have an underlying depth... saturated with some kind of sorrow. I'm not sure what. But the poetry is very good. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane

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