FLYING BEARD

i love your use of words here, well done- Dirk Kruger

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BREATHING DUST

An absolutely stunning poem! A pleasure to read! A panorama, a moving-picture! -David

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AIR WAS NAKED

...dense imagery of horror...Satish...good piece.- Onyebuchi Okonkwo

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BENEATH THE SKIN

"Each day seeks permission to bury / the dead, and grass waits for the noble feet."...marvelous speak as a sensitive living being on the surface. Space is needed but for why...know not clear. Yet crying cracks the sky, the night, the spring or autumn...crying cracks the time whole from every sphere. Great master, your last two lines are unbearable.....- Pranab k chakraborty

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CROSSBARS

Brilliant Satish,
The way it goes with more and more mad nuke possessiveness, no one will ever survive! Let's hope that buttons are well away from those mad non-humans _aliens_- Dean

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MOODS

A beautiful existential poem. I can't say I fully comprehend it -- but I sure can appreciate the stunning words and the living lines that lead them around this dreamy song. Thanks for a rest from the usual!- Firestone Feinberg 

Hello, Sir. Your always thought-provoking writes. I daily enjoy your writes.- Lady Dragonwyck

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Each Thorn Was Crying

I still cant sustain Istill cant remain
wrapt in malady of love why my deeds went in vain,
maculated is spirituality told me d overhelming rain,
ambit of lament has manifested eminence in me.
thinking bout you me aware cant see you again,
I still cant sustain Istill cant remain.- ARPIT srivastava

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GRAY HANDS

Lyrical and mysterious ... immensely readable.- york2frisco

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PRIVATE MOORINGS

I love this. A lot going on for me here. I definetly felt this way.- C.clear

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RETURNING

This is beautifully written, Satish. I especially liked the last 4 sentences.- Aeon Onopka

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de……..

A dark wrote - with amazing imagery- Sandra Martyres

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HUBBLE TURNS 20

rather sad ending this poem
I think at the bottom of the bottomless pit
when we dig deep enough
we will see our own light shine towards us
greeting us home
Love- venturing neutrino

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MILKWEED

Near perfect. Best I've read in a while. line 1. (spelling) prolonged- Yarbrough

Love the metaphors you've used for lies and truth and the wicked messenger being a viper is a very adequate title for him. I enjoy your daily writings.- LightH2O

much though out poem-Cat

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TORCHES

These images are almost inexpressibly powerful.-  realnothings

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VIBRATIONS

Good morning. Another very thought-provoking write. I do enjoy your writes, as always.- Lady Dragonwyck

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UNLOST EXISTENCE

wow Satish Sir..... wow... short and meaningful.... too good .. :-)- Rahul Dev

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MILKWEED

Love the metaphors you've used for lies and truth and the wicked messenger being a viper is a very adequate title for him. I enjoy your daily writings.- LightH2O

much though out poem, -Cat

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SANTHARA *

"...deliberate defeat...kiss of death ensured the beautiful cessation" haunting lines. Jainism, cowardice act or a step of valor? I cannot judge as I wouldn't want to be judged. Great write!- LightH2O

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ONE ANTHOS

In all of the things mentioned that go on, good and bad, people still seek what is empty in this world. Great write!- LightH2O

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PICTURES

i turn around
and found
moonlight covered
the whole ground

i looked up
and moon
burst into many stars
and smiled from
behind the clouds- zorba

Great tandem, you Zorba and Satish.
Zorba, your delightful poem does exactly what it says.- Dick 

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SERENE REVENGE

Enjoyed your write, as always.-Lady Dragonwyck

Nice write Satish- Robin

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FREAKING OUT

Being disillusioned can be a freeing experience.-Steve

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THIS DAY

A great symbolic poem. Although I didn't get all of it but the penning was great.- Kendzi

You never let us down, night after night the source and energy that drives you provides this unending inspiration... another great write.- LightH2O

This is a wonderful piece listing the inheritence passed on from moderanity and greed to mankind. Makes one think and hits the solar plexis of society.- Nikunj

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FABRIC

A true messenger, he wears the fabric of inspiration... yet nobody listens "the city and streets are empty" suffering for no reason. Sad, but true!- LightH2O

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EXPLOSION

To please the masses you must chock truth within... a choosing that makes you popular as most politicians (royal tradition).- LightH2O

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I WILL GLOW MORE

That last stanza is so revealing... "I will glow more... Suddenly there will be light."- LightH2O

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I AM WALKING ON SHARP EDGES

The first stanza reveals the depths to which your soul will go... later the observance that death creates, as these contradictions make you feel you're walking on sharp edges.-LightH2O

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DISTANT VOICE

Those last two stanzas are powerful.- LightH2O

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AUBRURN DAWN

Of such lament and sorrows the spirit understands.- LightH2O

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DIG THE FLOOR OF THE MOON

Of such happenings one feels impotent, "cannot stop the decline" last stanza is self explanatory... well written.- LightH2O

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FALTERING TONGUE

Of such torturous massacre intensity one can surely doubt the existence of heaven... it's unimaginable that such things can go on, on this Earth.- LightH2O

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DEWDROP

perhaps I've missed something, I just found this to be a list of provokative words, and it's not an ABC poem. sorry but I;m struggling with this one.-Nick Bagnall

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SLIPPING

But the rope is a snake
and the snake is a serpent
and the serpent is coiled
in ecstatic embrace.

The double helix is a story
imbedded in a program we read
with computer minds
if passion flows with grace.

Cobalt blue the night, dangerous
the tongue that writes.

We disappear like stars.- Kailashana

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DYING SCREAMS

"even the ankle-bells of a toddler had gone up for a sale" stood out perfectly in the poem (at least to me), a good read overall.- NostroviaPoetry

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The vigil

Dear Vermaji, your beautifully written poem pierces the heart and reminds us of the tragic heroes of Greek characters. Is the whole humanity a cursed being? That is what I ask myself after reading your poem.-K. H. Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka

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IMAGES

I love the form,, Verma... very deep... and epic... enjoyed,..-Poet Destroyer ~ A

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FLESH AND BONES

I enjoyed reading your writes... blessings!- LightH2O

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DROOPING

Love that last stanza before the last... amazing write, "The wounds will develop whiskers." this line gives such imagery.- LightH2O

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LAND’S SMELL

Wow! ... you've got some very good lines here. "the split lips cannot speak coherently" ... thank you for sharing.- LightH2O

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DEATH OF ABSENCE

So much imagery on this one, much enjoyed.- LightH2O

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The Ritual

chilling piece... the last two lines echoing in me- distorted

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MOON’S SHADOW

So well written and beautiful- Entelechy

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SOMETHING HUMAN

Good morning. I like the "feel" of this write. I always enjoy your work.- Lady Dragonwyck

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RANDOM SIN

Another great write... much enjoyed!- LightH2O

Deep poem. Very good. The mass grave contains the dried bones of renegades. You remember the promise? Who said we will end the war?- erry Collett

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MOURNING THE DELUGE

Great poetry my friend....deep write this morning....- Michael J. Falotico

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THE BRIGHTENED FIRE

I hear you cry of despair, so much waist of human life, so much oppression and it appears that god is impotent towards such calamities.- LightH2O

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OUTRAGEOUS

Much enjoyed!- LightH2O

perfect title. and brilliant word choices. "Plucking the nector from knobs of naked flames" Yeah, i like that.- Ju

Well, Satish, either pick it up with the knobs ,or if it was "dumped" flaming naked , have the decency to cover it up with the nectar...lol! - Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR


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IMAGES

Satish, this is a very strong write, you have not minced words as the cruel acts that go on by the ignorant and fanatical are also violent and brutal.- LightH2O

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HOISTING

Written by the spirit and interpreted only by the spirit... in all that takes place the last stanza sums it up well, as it pleads for the glimpse of fire either to enlighten or to purify with it's burning quality.- LightH2O

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BETWEEN HUNGER AND ESCAPE

In this write you see the malice of almost all of whom in their darkness and ignorance are ready to destroy those that posses the light of truth. As toxic as mercury is, it brings out the gold just as well this can be attributed to human hearts in a symbolic way. The last stanza, a gift of innocence to be given to all upon first entering this Earth.- LightH2O

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CRISSCROSS

Awakens many thoughts and various "paths" to explore. Your always in-depth writes.- Lady Dragonwyck

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AGAINST DEPORTATION

Mind boggling! ... yet it is always a pleasure to read your work. Best to you.- LightH2O


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ECHOES

great writing. beautiful wording in your poem too numerous to quote.- heather wilkins


Great observations here... "the time's predicament will not tell the secret of death" just one more of many great lines. A write deep and full of symbolism as only you can write. Very much enjoyed!- LightH2O


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FRUGALITY

Powerful, gripping and intense.- LightH2O

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STRIKING PORTRAIT

Beautiful wise original masterpiece chasm in mountain.Water dripping vertically high .- Me 

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TERRIFED

seven billion of us.- Nesster 

"seven billion of us."

. . . the many,
in The One.

What is there to fear

when Perfect Love casts out all the forms of fear.- Tom

Perhaps that we don't live the perfect love....all 7 billion of us.- Kailashana

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GOLD-TIPPED

I can't fault this poem! I'd love to leave some helpful feedback, but frankly I'm intimidated by its quality. It's so sweet and sorrowful, and creates such a beautiful sense of yearning in the reader. If I'm reading the themes correctly, the entwined motifs of natural beauty and remembered sensual love, and in particular the metaphors used, put me in mind of all the best qualities of Pablo Neruda, yet the poet's own voice remains clearly identifiable throughout. An absolute pleasure to read.- Bokononsense

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STRAY FALL

Gripping write, such is the state of our poor world, some can't handle it and commit suicide, others tired of crying still hang on to hope for the future, some live off their pride, while others are entrapped by bribes. Much enjoyed!-LightH2O

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TERRIFED

seven billion of us.- Nesster

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OLDIE

very beautiful.

This alone says so much:
"O, harvest moon, don’t go away.
I was playing with the black thoughts
eating the yellow grass,
learning the alphabet of white pain."
***

I wonder how many lonely people
the moon comforts each night?- realnothings

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DEATH AND VISION

A great poem really enjoyed reading it. A great write.- Dave Walker

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