Tuesday, January 31, 2012
ANNUAL RITUAL
A memorable poem, sir.-
Yacov Mitchenko
Super poem.-
allenpaulson
Awesome! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing-
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Monday, January 30, 2012
Sunday, January 29, 2012
ANOTHER TRIAL
Smile ˜ Stuck amid a revolving door going round and round and round and round and round ˜ Smile, and there is no bloody revolution but, if there were then I would only count it as a blessing to the blind caught amid that spin cycle design ˜ Love-
John Rhinem
S.V. - I don't see the ABC structure, but really like the visions of this write, "I was not ready for this disgrace of religion." says what others take entire books to say...well done. ;-)-
Goode Guy
Saturday, January 28, 2012
A LANTERN GUIDES
Sir: I enjoy your posts; they ALWAYS make me think and explore my inner self. Have a GREAT weekend.-
Lady Dragonwyck
Friday, January 27, 2012
MIRAGE
A mirage of metaphors that melts amidst themselves and speaks in volumes.-
H.H. Holloway
Wednesday, January 25, 2012
A SICKENED CRAFT
sane craftsmanship, is a craft of excellence and distinction...elegant, dignified, much sought after today...leaves a lasting imprint on the artworld...adorns and soars on popularity...Shanti Satish...-
classic
THIS ODYSSEY
"Playing truant from black death ..." excellent capturing line. Blessings to you.-
LightH2O
Tuesday, January 24, 2012
IRONY
"Again you cry in your skin for sake of a forgotten god. " A very strong point to end your well penned write.-
LightH2O
BROKEN PROMISE
I agree, great write. -
LightH2O
Wow. Sweet write. Great job.- allenpaulson
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Wow. Sweet write. Great job.- allenpaulson
http://www.poetfreak.com/
Monday, January 23, 2012
JEALOUS BLOOD
nice..... enjoyed,.. Have a great one, always & forever-
Destroyer ~ Poet
Friday, January 20, 2012
TOXIC
Thursday, January 19, 2012
TRAILING WAR
good morning Verma, I do not like that image of kids buried like insects.. This is a very very brilliant poem...disturbing, but with homestyle honesty...love it..always..-
Destroyer ~ Poet
Wednesday, January 18, 2012
FAITHFUL
Good morning. I really "felt" the last stanza. Incredibly moving write. I do enjoy your posts. -
Lady Dragonwyck
Tuesday, January 17, 2012
TOXIC
MY GOD
I'm with john .... I'd like to see you put some comments in the author's notes to explain where you are coming from in your poems. It isn't we are not interested in them, but rather we don't know what the heck you are talking about. I know poets stretch the imagination, but ...... I for one lose interest after reading so many and not knowing what you are saying.-
e. Gene Myers
you know, I don't quite understand your poems. I like them, don't get me wrong, but I just don't quite understand them. an explanation please? but only if you feel like it.-
John Armlovich
Monday, January 16, 2012
Sunday, January 15, 2012
Listening To Rwanda Genocide
A poem with a dramatic subject in a modest style, very good.-
iniduo iniduo
Friday, January 13, 2012
INTEGERS
something from nothing is
nothing
nothing from nothing is
something else;
a four-sided Rubix cube algorithm
is a theory of abstinence,
where can I go that is not here?
where are you in the solution of nothing?- Kailashana
When you look for something
you find something else.- Ann Waddicor
nothing
nothing from nothing is
something else;
a four-sided Rubix cube algorithm
is a theory of abstinence,
where can I go that is not here?
where are you in the solution of nothing?- Kailashana
When you look for something
you find something else.- Ann Waddicor
UNCHARTED SELF
Strange and haunting thoughts
come from the sound of your words
echoed from the tombstones.- Ann Waddicor
come from the sound of your words
echoed from the tombstones.- Ann Waddicor
CROSSING
Million fingers will write history of wailing waves, frightened of hot winds. Very interesting.-
Debs
Thursday, January 12, 2012
THE PREDICAMENT
Really nice poetry. Enjoyed the read.-
Debra Squyres
Wonderful poem, my fellow poet. Great usage of literature. =)-
Charles Jefferson
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Wednesday, January 11, 2012
THE BRIGHTENED FIRE
This is such a gripping cry from the spirit. This clearly depicts all the injustices and destruction humans suffer as a result of war, famine and bad governments. The image of a hunch-back, tottering God amongst the destruction suggest this has been going on for ages.-
LightH2O
DROOPING
The eternal struggle or war between the upper and lower classes. The wounds so old or wise, they will develop whiskers. In other words this being such an old cause. TFS-
LightH2O
ENUNCIATION
I agree to become one of the crowd you become unconscious. Don't know what the crow represents? I get the feeling it may be a politician, because of the words that follow this poem. Thank God for the fire (righteousness or truth) which will dig up all secret bones... Thanks again Satish for another great work.-
LightH2O
FIRE AND STRAW
I enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon Satish. I hope to be able to read a lot more of your writing in this new year of 2012. Love-
Carol Brown
A SMALL CHANCE
"...aura of a lobbied avatar" this and other lines give me the sense this inspiration came to you as you typed in your computer? Your work is like a kaleidoscope it never quite repeats the same image and they are all intricate and beautiful.-
LightH2O
AGAINST THOUGHTS
"I smear the ashes on forehead of history and squander my poems. " Satish, your lines are so deep and gripping. It amazes me how you are so inspire to write night after night these great original symbolic/metaphorical lines. Best wishes in this new year.-
LightH2O
Tuesday, January 10, 2012
INTROSPECTIVE
Verma ji, full of vigour. The poem creates an atmosphere of darkness and horror in the mind of the reader.-
K.H.Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka
K.H.Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka
GENERATION
'Each death becomes a daisy" Optimism of a poet. And the ancient lingua franca ought to be pregnant with meaning- U K Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur
HALF-CLOSED LIDS
Vermaji, Very powerful poem. Better than your recent poems. Congratulations.-K.H.Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka
Very dark, bleak and graphic. True, we cannot wish away it. Thanks for sharing, Sir.-Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad
Very dark, bleak and graphic. True, we cannot wish away it. Thanks for sharing, Sir.-Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad
Monday, January 9, 2012
OBTUSE MYSELF
I have long admired Satish Verma's brave originality, which is no doubt lost on many people. His poetry deals with themes of violence, religious and political divides, and so on. I don't pretend to understand all his lines, as they tend to be obscure. But the obscurity and originality are subtly and inextricably interwoven.-
butterflyred (Yacov Mitchenko)
Very original lines as usual, much enjoyed.- LightH2O
Very original lines as usual, much enjoyed.- LightH2O
Sunday, January 8, 2012
FAINT WRITING
"You wanted to live
inside a shell
and step outside, in "
This bit was exciting and unusual it inspired me, I wish it had continued in that vein; could you? I should be most interested.- Ann Waddicor
inside a shell
and step outside, in "
This bit was exciting and unusual it inspired me, I wish it had continued in that vein; could you? I should be most interested.- Ann Waddicor
HISTORY
That I could be in your mind to discern each line...yet greatly enjoyed. Love this line "Do we need nitrous oxide to offset the gloom of hovering religion?"-
LightH2O
Saturday, January 7, 2012
WOUNDED FLIGHT
I am collecting the words to weave a phrase.. And Barren trees overhear the wailing winds.. Lovely words and imagery, Thank you for sharing : )- Brenda Victoria Northeast
VICTORY OF FALL
Such troubled times, but then again, from the beginning of time there has always been the struggle between good and evil. "...comatose truth was listening to lies"- LightH2O
BLEEDING DAY
I just love the imagery - - the strong use of adjectives so much in evidence. Beautiful words in abstract form-Alistair Muir
Friday, January 6, 2012
A SICK UNCERTAINTY
STONE CATCHERS
so interesting
are these 4 verses stand alone or connected
I find your writing mysterious and beautiful-A PAX
are these 4 verses stand alone or connected
I find your writing mysterious and beautiful-A PAX
POURING
may dawn continue to tread lightly
as you awaken us all
to a stark fresh image of morning
lamenting want in the land of plenty
nice to read you in peak form again, Satish-Roger Wayne Eberle
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as you awaken us all
to a stark fresh image of morning
lamenting want in the land of plenty
nice to read you in peak form again, Satish-Roger Wayne Eberle
http://www.authorsden.com/
Thursday, January 5, 2012
PRIZEFIGHT
Love that last stanza, specially the line; "The Essence of pain" very much enjoyed write.- LightH2O
Wednesday, January 4, 2012
Tuesday, January 3, 2012
TERROR TRAIL
Your use of language is just sublime -- so much texture and elegance. A great write and marvellous read thank you- omment By: Alistair Muir
Sunday, January 1, 2012
Unstitching
Really like this. enjoyed reading it. a great poem. may i invite you to read my new poem called, reincarnation.- Dave Walker
SHAMEFUL
S.V.- Your poem intrigues me, yet i don't understand it much. In S3, why wax, meaning the moon? In S5, are the sins of love, the sins of the father AND the sins of children? Is love a sin? If you please...- Goode Guy
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