Friday, June 29, 2012
GIFTED DEATH
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Thursday, June 28, 2012
THE SOCRATIC EXISTENCE
Socrates was a philosopher who loved to 'interact with people' and teach them how to think, till his cup of hemlock spilled ! I had covered him in my Story of Ancient Philosophy in Verse! Thanks, -
RAJ NANDY
Hi Satish, I enjoyed the poem, the truth is not defiled just covered and hard to see sometimes.- David Taylor
Hi Satish, I enjoyed the poem, the truth is not defiled just covered and hard to see sometimes.- David Taylor
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UNMADE FUTURE
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Wednesday, June 27, 2012
SPLITTING
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HOISTING
"a fledged reincarnation" -- great opening and the rest very descriptive -
Lady Dragonwyck
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Monday, June 25, 2012
NEW YEARS MIRROR
dont laugh too loud you will wake the neighbours,lol,nice write Satish-
RICHARD PALMER
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REVELATION
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Saturday, June 23, 2012
UNASKED
good to hear your solid voice yes I understand the" you" in this dogs will lead them home-
leafsailor
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Friday, June 22, 2012
ONCE UPON
Sir, thank you for entering one of your awesome writes in Topic of the Week. -
Lady Dragonwyck
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GOING NOWHERE
Morning, Sir. Very insightful write. Your usual incredible insight.
Happy Monday............- Lady Dragonwyck
Happy Monday............- Lady Dragonwyck
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Thursday, June 21, 2012
UNBORN
This is beautiful. Lucid, simple, enigmatic, suggestive, emotional.
Thank you.- PegasusWhiteRose
And terrifying...!-
PegasusWhiteRose
Thank you.- PegasusWhiteRose
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COUNTING
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Tuesday, June 19, 2012
WAVERING
As usual you present the deepness of spirit in such captivating lines as "the past will question the future & the anguish of infinity" which leave me mesmerized.-
LightH2O
Thoughtful . . , with clear expressions,- Dulen gogoi
Thoughtful . . , with clear expressions,- Dulen gogoi
Melancholic sentiments but bear truth!a- marvinbrato
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Monday, June 18, 2012
IT OPENS
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HALLUCINATION
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Sunday, June 17, 2012
LEAVES
There is an earthiness to this gritty verse on life, nature, and what is a natural death. How we fit in, I suppose, is how we deem ourselves to. Fourth stanza in particular, moved me. Thank you for this.-
Pamela A. Lamppa
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RAGS AND RICHES
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Saturday, June 16, 2012
Slashed Wound
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Friday, June 15, 2012
IN SELFISH VEIN
Satish,, yup... you said it... and only you know...xox~pd ((glad i read this one))-
Destroyer ~ Poet
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Thursday, June 14, 2012
THE REVENGE
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DISASTER AND AFTER
It's been this way since time began, nothing much will change until sin is abolished! Great words of wisdom penned, Blessings-
Linda Winchell
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WITH LICORICE
Whip slap kick and jive,
your voice is heard you're still alive,
the garbage rustles round and round
while you a chant make sound.
This is a fun sounding poem
satisverma full of cacophony.- Ann Waddicor
your voice is heard you're still alive,
the garbage rustles round and round
while you a chant make sound.
This is a fun sounding poem
satisverma full of cacophony.- Ann Waddicor
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Wednesday, June 13, 2012
PINK CITY
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WARMING UP
The skeleton of republic and we, Indians are the fools to live the life like this. Day in and day out, carrying the placard and praying to our Gods! !-
Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Tuesday, June 12, 2012
IT HAPPENED
Your poem speaks if our times, the senseless killings of innocent victims - war is almost like a hatred of humanity.-
DannySy
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Monday, June 11, 2012
MOCKINGBIRDS
I don't think Man has the desire that he once did to bring order to this stead we call Earth...Epochs come and go in many years by the scores...yet ostensibly, billions of years later, it be only our feathered life that understands the beauty of freedom and the serenity of positive reclusivity... If only I had 2 wings, what an orderly house I 'd possess!-
Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
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Sunday, June 10, 2012
JUXTAPOSED
Such a cry from a spirit that has witness much pain. "...why not the right to live..." a question many ask after going through the pain left by death.-
LightH2O
a thought provoking write.- seema chowdhury
a thought provoking write.- seema chowdhury
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FAITHLESS HANDS
Devastating circumstances can feel like faithless hands at times.-
LightH2O
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OF TIME AND CHAINS
I agree with the others, a thought provoking poem, intriguing.-
LightH2O
Thoughtful - I read it four times, it's one of the most thoughtful poems I have read- Dulen gogoi
Thought provoking, well-penned!- marvinbrato
You lift the standard of poetry to celestial heights and offer many a thought lines for the readers to chase. I am amazed at your skill and craft sir.- Nikunj
Thoughtful - I read it four times, it's one of the most thoughtful poems I have read- Dulen gogoi
Thought provoking, well-penned!- marvinbrato
You lift the standard of poetry to celestial heights and offer many a thought lines for the readers to chase. I am amazed at your skill and craft sir.- Nikunj
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LOCKED DOOR
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FREAKING OUT
i've read this a few times and it gets better and better. mysterious and intriguing!-
ilene bauer
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Saturday, June 9, 2012
FACES
The faces of living and non living things! well written!-
Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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OLDIE
A beautiful day full of sunshine and good cheer. I am so happy to be able to read your poetry today Satish. I wish you a weekend of sunshine and joy and hope you continue to find the inspiration to continue your writing. Will be back reading come Monday I hope. Love,-
Carol Brown
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Friday, June 8, 2012
Genesis
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SMALL TALK
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Tuesday, June 5, 2012
HEAVENLY
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Monday, June 4, 2012
SERIAL DEPLETION
a clear concise thought, a very readable poem, well done Satish, regards, dale-
Dale Costello
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BIRTH OF A POEM
Hello Satish - Again you have given us a profound statement with a penetrating message - this in your gifted writing. You write with such passion and conviction where we may a learn from you. God bless all those who serve and those who have given it all for peace. Sending sincerest regards.-
Nancy Crossland
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Making History
Hello Satish,metaphorical mayhem as the futility and indeed horrors of war are laid bare.History is carved by guns and bullets and fatherless children.Amazing images! Thankyou! Wm.-
William Willis
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Waking
Satish, again, you bring me to my knees in thought and prayers knowing I will never understand the crime of war and the bodies that bared the pain. Your window of words opens the truth of not only soldiers, but also innocents who suffered the horrors of Holocaust and war. It is a privilege to read your work, thank you for sharing your memories and your talent-
Marcia Schechinger
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MOSAIC
Satish the "wings" of the brave who defy against unjustice, war or the time of the Holocaust may not be lit, but their bravery is ever remembered through your words. Thank you for your constance in fighting for peace in this world.-
Marcia Schechinger
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PINK REMINDER
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HUSHED SPEECH
Satish "...holding the shoes of his sons...", some lines in war-time poems hold a great impact for the reader, this is such a line. Though I am sure you have much "Hushed Speech" about the Holocaust and the innocents who suffered from this war of mental illnhttp://www.voicesnet.org/ess, your words give all the unspoken voices lifes. Thank you again Satish for opening our eyes with your bold and blundt metaphors which give us great insight to the goings on of the past.-
Marcia Schechinger
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THE CANDLE BURNS
Satish one can not start the new year without reading one of your verses. In this particular piece of art, one feels the silence of the heart that can only be felt by one who has experienced war on the innocent or the Holocaust. Some things of the heart can never be understood even though spoken. May peace in the world be found, that joy is found in the "brown eyes" of those who care.-
Marcia Schechinger
NINTH MONTH
Hello Satish: I found your poem compelling; repleat with poetic phrases that left me wondering?! Paul Happy New Year!-
Paul Rainwater jr.
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PEACE
Satish incredible, I am in awe of how you can form words into such amazing pieces. I know this is for peace in the world, but it held a kind of reflection for me personally at this time.-
Marcia Schechinger
RETURN OF THE POET
I loved reading your poem, a very sad time when such beauty changes into a world of catastrophes, so well written! thanks for a wonderful piece!-
Shirley Thurmanjohnson
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MORTAL BLUES
Satish again a masterpiece of metaphoric use. The wingless "monarch", the "tree of hypocrisy", the questions of the possible "temple" destruction - such thoughts give way to the questions of man and power/ peace and war. Thank you for sharing your work, your poetry is a fine example of displaying the truth of war and the holocaust in a tone of the cold reality of it not the pictures left unseen-
Marcia Schechinger said:
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CHEMISTRY
Satish a very emotional poem of the pain, mental and physical, experienced by those who were and are innocents or prisoners of war. "...I blink for a dot to punctuate the intelligence...", there is no "dot" when man hurts man. Greed and fear of those different make for such "bruises". Again thank you Satish for your poetry and sharing your experiences of the Holocaust, always admirably yours Marcia. -
Marcia Schechinger
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IN CLOUDS
Satish an emotional poem of youth and the remembrance that they never had to privilege to begin their lives as the war destroyed their path prematurely. Thank you for reminding us of all those who left this world early because of the insanity of the Holocaust. May peace find itself in this world soon, so as no more innocence are destroyed. Thank you Satish.-
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THE END
The last line had such an impact on the whole poem, it left me reflecting on the casualties of useless wars. Great relevance and timeliness!-
Cyn BuhainBaello
Such sadness to the futility of our dead flesh... glad our energy does not die.- LightH2O
Such sadness to the futility of our dead flesh... glad our energy does not die.- LightH2O
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LAUGHING SKULL
Satish "...In my heart lies a trapped river...", memories of the days of war and the Holocaust. Through your words the river flows and gives us true life events of the horrors that an insane society can bring. Thank you for sharing the truth that we might mourn those lost, especially the innocent, to the greed of war.-
Marcia Schechinger
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ANOTHER STROKE
"...the perfect insult to bubbling life... I was young with small eyes, full of water, " Such painful statements, the inevitable sock of cruelty who spares not, nor respects the pureness of a young soul.-
LightH2O
Strong, expressive & cutting. It jolts with a lot of humanity and inevitable destiny for all -"Death will walk on payments now..."- Cyn BuhainBaello
You express the Dark Angel as both a personal and societel hemhorrage...physically incapacitated...mentally imbued in haunting flashback...and forseeing Death as a sojourn of many backdrafts and mirrors reinacting a lifetime of premature apocalypse that is finally ready to erupt...But after so many signs and sybols...warnings and prophecies....Are you ready?!- Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
Strong, expressive & cutting. It jolts with a lot of humanity and inevitable destiny for all -"Death will walk on payments now..."- Cyn BuhainBaello
You express the Dark Angel as both a personal and societel hemhorrage...physically incapacitated...mentally imbued in haunting flashback...and forseeing Death as a sojourn of many backdrafts and mirrors reinacting a lifetime of premature apocalypse that is finally ready to erupt...But after so many signs and sybols...warnings and prophecies....Are you ready?!- Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
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TO BE NOTHING
Hello Satish, This reads as a very reflective poem; self communication of the deep and enquiring kind. I find this verse very interesting, and consider your words to be self revealing and honest. My kindest regards and my thanks for sharing this. - Roy Kneale .
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Sunday, June 3, 2012
Death In Exile
Interesting perspective...can feel a sort of frustrated dissappointment in life and mankind in this one.-
Felix Perry
Taking On
Could be comprehended in so many different ways...or maybe just meant to be read and accepted...-
Felix Perry
EXISTENTIAL DILEMMMA
Strong and intense rendering of a man's look into his own vunerability....-
Felix Perry
Anarchy
Always interesting to read your work and consider the options for interpretation....like this one-
Felix Perry
Unforgetting
As always you write with an intensity of spirit and a unigue turn of word leaving the reader to ponder what lies between the lines.-
Felix Perry
Doom’s Day
Interesting perspective,not sure I understand all of it but it does give me pause for thought, especial that last line....so true in the area of international politics at least. -
Felix Perry
Drift Wood
Wow...stunned, this is expressive poetry at its very best....well done.-
Felix Perry
MANY NAMESAKES
This poem, I'm sure, will direct my dreams tonight!!-
Jane Noponen Perinacci
NIGHT RAID
At last I have conquered the riddle in this poem, unlike the others. You are writing about the death of Osama bin Laden.-
Ronald Hull
CHASING THE SHADOW
Mystically unconnected. Gives me visions leading to nowhere, like chasing shadows of meanings that don't exist.-
Ronald Hull
DANGEROUS
In geological history, dangers were oft brought upon us. But recent history is mostly hyperbole and and 2012 will go the way of just another year.-
Ronald Hull
Even The Planets
"We are becoming naked, like pupils." Such a beautiful line.-
Cierra Norman
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NOMENCLATURE
Great last line. That's where the focus is.-
sstoth0
A love song or a siren song is never nothing. It's all us humans have, even in our wolf-skins.-
Kailashana
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DUST GRAFTED
Awesome poetry, chaste and just. Fluent and well- crafted one, in that it is spotless. Kudos. -Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad
Saturday, June 2, 2012
CURVATURE
I have enjoyed reading your always amazing writing this morning Satish. I hope you will continue to write and share your words with us for many years to come. Have a wonderful weekend filled with joy and love. Love,-
Carol Brown
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THE END
Such sadness to the futility of our dead flesh... glad our energy does not die.-
LightH2O
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* YES
Tumbling in leaves snatching at meanings,
I found this food for thought in a most entertaining way.- Ann Waddicor
I found this food for thought in a most entertaining way.- Ann Waddicor
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Friday, June 1, 2012
THE VISITOR
This is such a deep and interesting poem, as well as the comment from Frank.-
LightH2O
Such "Revelation", said St.John The Evangelist to Satish...but the Lord is not only the Moon...But HE also be the Sun, theLight the cusp of Darkness....And Satish replied..."Give me a break, Johnny...I'm still in the Old Testament tring to figure out What King Nimrod said to the contractors of the Tower of Babel to upset them all to a point that resulted in The Moon, Sun, Light and Cusp of Darkness to cast fork on every tongue....//////////////////////Commentors After-Thought:This would not happen today, as The Contractors union would have stepped in and on the Moon, Sun, Light and Cusp of Darkness and cause a grand Annular Solar Eclipse, that would either burn or blind those workers at the top of The Tower- Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
Such "Revelation", said St.John The Evangelist to Satish...but the Lord is not only the Moon...But HE also be the Sun, theLight the cusp of Darkness....And Satish replied..."Give me a break, Johnny...I'm still in the Old Testament tring to figure out What King Nimrod said to the contractors of the Tower of Babel to upset them all to a point that resulted in The Moon, Sun, Light and Cusp of Darkness to cast fork on every tongue....//////////////////////Commentors After-Thought:This would not happen today, as The Contractors union would have stepped in and on the Moon, Sun, Light and Cusp of Darkness and cause a grand Annular Solar Eclipse, that would either burn or blind those workers at the top of The Tower- Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
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FARTHER AWAY
Those first two stanzas are so deep, the disconnecting of your spirit and the drifting towards eternity, it all sounds so spiritual yet a little sad in this lonely spiritual voyage of yours which only those that understand you can relate to. Well penned!-
LightH2O
Love lingers even at old age, it meets those who are farther or far from each other.- marvinbrato
Love lingers even at old age, it meets those who are farther or far from each other.- marvinbrato
FROZEN
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FUTURITY
"Extended pain of centuries haunts the future." such futility of destruction, very well penned in this poem.-
LightH2O
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REMINISCENCE
"The land of gold dust evokes a disquieting sadness..." I feel the mood of your sadness in this second stanza.-
LightH2O
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DESTINY
I like your ending sentence ... much to think about.-
LightH2O
Beautiful opening line, very meaningful- seema chowdhury
Beautiful opening line, very meaningful- seema chowdhury
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