Shadows

Struggling with it. Held my attention. - Steve .

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DEGENERATING

Deeper than deep once again Satish. Love grappling with these ones.-Steve .

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THE BRIGHTENED FIRE

I do not believe that God wants us to treat His world with the disrespect that we do. We are the ones who desecrate His creations, not Him.

Satish,

I have trouble commenting on your poetry because I don't know where you are coming from in your writings.; the issues you are addressing, the life styles you are describing. It might help me, and others, if you would take time to explain your poems in the Author's Notes window just below the window where you post your poems. If I can't understand them, I can't comment on them. I enjoy reading them, I just don't understand them well enough to make an intelligent comment.- e. Gene Myers

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FROM THE CHERRY BLOSSOMS

amazingly written- PillowQueen

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ALONG THE SORROW

I loved this poem.My best wishes to you:)- Irena

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A FAMILY DUST

Strangely fascinating,
tossed from the silkiness of petals
to the desperation of pain...- Ann Waddicor

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SMELLS MURDER

You write wonderful , Satisverma
but this one doesnt really make sense to me

Why is this for you sacred poetry ?

Of course, thats a whole discussion by itself, but it would be wonderful to enter it!

For me this sounded a bit too dark,
indulging in the energies of destruction itself.
I know that murder happen.
I have always wondered why.
Why bad things happen.

I understand that life is decay and spring at once,
but like to talk about it, like to understand.

with love
~ eldyheart

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O LOVE

Very powerful and moving poem.- uncia2

Interesting write this morning..I have to take some time to contomplate (sp) this one..Hugs - Raggedyann

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ENTRANCED

HI Satish, an enjoyable read, Eddie, 5 stars,- Edwin Jepson.

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COLLECTING MILKWEED

Satish your title milkweed drew me as that is the poisonous plant but also gives a lot of soft cotton..well wriiten it is karma that what you do comes around. love and regards - Rita Singh.

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INTIMIDATION

Brilliant, give it to the world- Dale Costello.

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SOMALIA CALLING

A wonderfully strong poem SATISH. While I may not accurately interpret every line, I do appreciate the quality of the writing. Kind regards, - Linda Lee.

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THE WHEELS

Satish, it's sad when religion is used as an excuse to cause fear and havoc. Your last phrase, 'Religion was a proxy to kill ...' got to me- Jacinta Ramayah

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Praying Hurriedly

Satish your stark and realistic poems of war and the Holocaust are true visions of a scene so graphic and sorrowful that one can relate, even for a moment, to such madness. As always I bow before your 'exposed heart' and thank you for opening the scenes that we might reflect on those who died needlessly. Humbly yours, - Marcia Schechinger. 

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AFTER THE STORM

. . . the fallen seeds of night . . . each line is clarity and reaches out to touch - beautiful imagery, a nice place to walk - Blacpoet

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MOURNING BAND

Insight, being welcomed into the afterlife. Well written!- Scribe Marlon Linton

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BABY GOD

Interesting and diverse images, makes me wonder.- LightH2O

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TRUNCATED

hE HAS SPOKEN.. AND SPOKEN WELL,-Steve Chering

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THE TWILIGHT

So sad and interesting read this morning..-Raggedyann

Your images are painted with a fine brush and the shadows actually move for me - you are in a good place right now, seems - Blacpoet

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RAGING MOON

Enjoyed...well penned :) -Enchanted Raven

Enjoyed the read this morning..Hugs - Raggedyann

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INWARD JOURNEY

Each line so gripping and full of meanings that makes one think deep.-LightH2O

A bitter truth-seema chowdhury

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PACEMAKER

Gripping perceptions- LightH2O

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PROGNOSIS

The images are more cohesive for us lay persons out here . . . summer whispers. . . very beautiful way to be profound - Blacpoet

forgot to bookmark. this one is special - Blacpoet

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DISCLAIMER

A streak of clarity, on the surface, the view from the deep belongs to you yet - Blacpoet

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UNENDING

You have, of course, written your autobiography. I've outlined mine and filling in--alighting--a favorite word of mine in verse. Sensuous, this one - Blacpoet

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OD OF BLESSINGS

caldron of acrimony~~the absence of the plural caldron(s) creates a shorthand that pushes the reader elsewhere between the expected...troubling poem, lovely images and vocabulary - Be well and keep writing for us - Blacpoet

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AN ACID RAIN

A very sad situation indeed it is...!- T A Ramesh

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BLEMISHES

Each verse is a puzzle in itself for the reader to unravel.- George Carroll

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AGONY

That third stanza says so much, deep waters yet so clear.- LightH2O

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FORGETTING

Wow, interesting wordplay and theme! Very much in sync with my state of mind, i like how you twist these words together- Justin Debrosse

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BROODING

I lack the words but I'm listening.- LightH2O

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SICK TIMES

A universal tragedy that can be applied here and there.- LightH2O

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Adam's Mend

Verse befitting the great work of art. Thanks for sharing your skills in poetry which are always at their best, Satish ji. -Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad

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GENERATION

I come from a blameworthy generation
We were sure the radio
would always play our music
We were sure the laws
would change in our favor- sstoth0

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A TUMULTUOUS WELCOME

I like your style of writing.
Very well done - Adri

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TIRELESSLY

wa'y to go Satish- Steve Chering

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PURE STEEL

Lovely and gripping, Satish! Some very 'exciting' phrases, like 'reaching the edge of poetry. I ask you to clamp my name' and 'the gash on the book was bleeding'. I love that, in a saddened, morbid se- Erin Kelly-Moen

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Wounded Path

The birth can be expressed this way! ! as usual nice!-Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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THE DEAD TIGER

Mindblowing sir... Short of words to comment...- Indranil Bhaduri

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WHO WAS SEEKING THE LIGHT?

Your wisdom is ahead of the times- LightH2O

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UNDERSCORING

The title points to the i.q. to create emphasis, no way to assess, o take note, to mark, to not achieve...it does what a title should - Blacpoet

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FREEDOM AT LAST

An excellent write.- Some Girl

What a freedom to enjoy after liberating the imprisoned past. Well penned Sir.- John Thomas Tharayil

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SHELLING UNCOUNTED

What a sad piece you have penned, yet, it is written very well. Thank you for sharing.- Kimber Turpin

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INTERRUPTED

Stanza 4 my fave!- James Marshall Goff

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HUMILITY

Satish...stanza 2 ends in genius fashion! - James Marshall Goff

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Acrimony

Wonderful images yet so sad. Kudos, Vermaji.- versetile

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UNDOING

Written with beaitiful abandon! Satish!  James Marshall Goff

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VIBRATIONS

I am a bit past the middle, I think, descending, yes - Yours In Writing,- Stella

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GOLDEN THRONE

Touching! best to you.- LightH2O

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DAY DREAMING

This is so beautiful, wishful and lovely.- LightH2O

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WINTER STORY

A sweet winter poem my friend- Varna Salunke

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NAMELESS

beautiful and thought provoking poem as usual! thank you for sharing!-Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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NO GRAND LANDING

This is very sad, you capture the emotion, but fantastically written.
Fantastic job!-Adri

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INADEQUACY

nice write Satish.- Richard Palmer

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THE PREDICAMENT

Really liked "a god mourns in fading light" -- great write; very soulful. Always enjoy your writes.- Lady Dragonwyck

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TOXIC

Sad portrail... lots of good wishes.-LightH2O

it is bad fighting against evils we can't see.. sometimes the battle scars us deep.. nice poem.. -Cat

Havoc wreaked in the name of god , mankind pays the price .-Nikunj

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EARTHLY WOUNDS

A scintillating thought that renovates my mind- rajat kumar

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JUGGLING

Very nice... A thought provoking write.- kash poet

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ONLY BEING

A thought provoking poem Satish. Thnks for sharing- Avril Meallem, Jerusalem Israel

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UNENDING WAR

Felt a lot of emotion and fear. As always, your excellent writing comes forth. -Lady Dragonwyck

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Pink eyes

A very powerful poem Satish. Thanks for sharing-Avril Meallem, Jerusalem Israel

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UNTILL I ARRIVE

...the glaciers decided not to melt away...at so many levels - nice line for me tonight..- Blacpoet

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LONGEST ECLIPSE

I just want to keep reading and reading your offerings - Blacpoet

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GOLD-TIPPED

Suicidal Gods, Batman! I blow away like winds of winds - Blacpoet

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WORDS OF NEVER BEING

my shadow will sit beside me and we will drink the pain~~solitude and beauty in one, alluring and illuminating for an okay writer..-Blacpoet

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COUPLING

The background selections are lovely - so are the synapes firing well and fine...-Blacpoet

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EVEN THE PLANETS

An interesting combination of words to render a surrealistic view of our surroundings.- Robert Pettit

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RELIGION

Thought provoking!-uncia2

So dark and absent the opposite for balance, tilted lines...unanticipated equals. My my...-Blacpoet

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CLUSTERED

Quite an interesting write. Your use of metaphors is great.- Robert Pettit

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IN THE NAME OF ………

Such a sad write...-Raggedyann

Tonight, nouns that hurt, healing requires too much energy...Stella

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JUDGEMENT

Very sensational judgement indeed! Thanks and regards.-K Pankajam, Chennai

Amazing Judgement...! Thanks for sharing Mr. Uniyal.-Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

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FALLING

Dear Sir, Truth having become almost extinct, fakes have now reared their urgly heads. Redundancies or residue of fakes and slogans make morale extremely low.

The scenario of the present day has been portrayed well in the poem. Thanks for sharing. -K. Sadasivan, Chennai

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The Moon-ed ‘I’...

Nostalgic-LightH2O

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Guiled ‘me’...

Such gripping words and deep thoughts, blessings to you.-LightH2O

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AWARENESS

And such are the spoils of war. Even in its end, the pain never stops. Always a winner, always a loser. Maybe the wars would stop if everyone broke even. All dead ... no war. Certainly .... no winners. They only breed more wars.-e. Gene Myers

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ARTFUL PINCERS

Very well written piece, I really enjoyed reading the piece-dri

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