AUBRURN DAWN

"wilderness of three dimensional sorrow" very intriguing line, a very deep and painful poem.- LightH2O

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DISTANT VOICE

"I think I live to die daily..." this poem has a sad and longing feel to it. I love that last stanza, melancholic yet beautiful.- LightH2O

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JILTED

The slice of moon can also grow into full moon. In that case it is optimism. Life, in short, is ups and downs.-UK Atiyodi, Kandangali,Payyanur, Kerala

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SWAYING

Enjoyed, love- Elizabeth O'Driscoll

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IN CHAINS

Very thought-provoking, Satish. I think Death and the Spirit are the ultimate subjects for a poet.- Ye Caterpillar

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HUNGRY ANGELS

"a riot among the gods.." "..throw the boys to appease the hungry angels." I agree with rain, these sounds concerning.-LightH2O

Mysterious words weaving a worrisome image of danger lurking... Very mesmerizing.- rain

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MESSAGE WRITTEN OFF

An expressive write, meaningful indeed.- seema chowdhury

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I AM WALKING ON SHARP EDGES

Passionate verse...a poem we could all recite . Wonderful! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing- Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2

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BLAMELESS?

Satish-Good poem......... Kahlia Mazacalletti

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NO MALAISE

The real democracy.! the ancient civilization is not yet matured enough to have the blue butterfly! Nice poem!-Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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I DO NOT DIE

Urge to continue life here is throbbing here.- Nasarudheen.P.

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GOODBYE

this touched me.. it reflected somebody that is deer to me and reminded me of my poem "he walked alone" Great one !!- anaid

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DEATH’S REVERSAL

Good write, not sure I get it the way it is meant to be but I still liked it, I like the way you used your words.- Tracy McDaniel 

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Immersion

Fine love fine waterfall. I like it.- Gajanan Mishra

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I AM SMILE WITH TEARS

"stones had committed suicide" interesting concept makes me wonder. "I am emptying the urn, again and again to write poems on the flyleaves of life." this line is so poetic and beautiful. It amazes me how you never run out of creative, original lines in your poems. Best to you my dear Satish, you're in my heart.- LightH2O

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CONCORDIA

Reads like third glass of aromatic, intoxicating red wine on a quiet reflective night.- LightH2O

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A MYSTIC PARADOX

Million faces of yes or no. Wrinkles are getting larger. Fantastic Sir!-nimal dunuhinga

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DARK MOONLIGHT

So much imagery from this great creation of words that make my mind picture amazing mind paintings specialty that last line of the shower of meteorites in dark moonlight.- LightH2O

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I AM DRUNK ON THE HEMLOCK

"I am still in love with pain" So many lines that make me wonder into many different possible scenarios that could be your perception while writing this intriguing write.- LightH2O

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ADAM’S MEND

Sir: your usual in-depth write. I always enjoy your writes and your poetry books. - Lady Dragonwyck

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ETERNAL WAIT

Superb! What a great poem! Loved the last line! -Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

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CHOKING ON WORDS

Reads as a beautiful abstract painting with hidden meanings..."he was evaporating, from the eyebaths, steadily for a spiral journey"-LightH2O

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Care

Subtle and smooth! - Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P

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Woodrose

I liked the poem. The meanings are intelligible but one has to guess at it. Some of the lines are vivid and telling. A lively poem. - K.S.Subramanian, Chennai

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WILL NOT FORGET

broken bread...words of life
taste a bitter truth...a realization
entering into a stupor....stunned
Intimate torture...heartache of lost love
the bird watching...? ? ?
meaningless ailing....life without love
return your globe...the world, your freedom
The river...continuous life
for- get - nots....seeds of hope for the future.- Thomas A Robinson

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BRINGING DOWN

I like this one. Thumbs up. Well said.- louis gander

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BLOOD WAS ON SHEET

"Pain was you was me was him the guilt of chewing polluted words...naked lies" So very true, I once heard someone say that if we love others we will never find happiness here on earth, for how can we be happy when our brother suffers, pain, hunger, abuse, etc. I sense your sensitivity and connectedness to all life and energy.- LightH2O

A good poem you wrote here- RonaldLearner

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PANDERING

Wow so many contorted images to dwell and perhaps a grotesque subject requires this..yes! fav verse [I should, if I could/rip open the zipped mouth of black death to count the/teeth of shrunk questions.] I have missed your writes hope you are having a Happy New Year. Light & Love- Debbie Guzzi

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VALENTINE

Packed with rich images that make me wonder at the meaning you intended yet it brings up my own deep interpretations to consider.- LightH2O

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SALT LAKE

So symbolic, I like how you detach yourself from your body "I'm dead in my arms". "salt lake" on your last stanza reminds me of a prayer used in the Catholic religion that refers to us being in a "valley of tears" here on this earth because of our sufferings.- LightH2O

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sui generis

You combine elemental forces, with the minutiae of insects and tears. I love it!- Ye Caterpillar

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MILK BATH

"Let us first accept the defeat of eternity" a deep revelation.- LightH2O

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BECOME MY FATHER

Deep thoughts!- LightH2O

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NO ROOM

Wind snatches a sun. good. I like it.
I invite you to read my poems and comment.- Gajanan Mishra

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LUNAR ECLIPSE

Thank you Satish Verma... for your nice sharing...enjoyed your amazing work ...luv and hugs :- Sukmawati Komala

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CORPSE IS BEING SENT

Thanks for sharing.... Happy New Year my dear friend.- LightH2O

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UNSPOKEN

touching... good write.- apoorva patrikar

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NOT SINNED

Very nice write. Once bitten... twice the wisdom- Tony Karas

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SANITY

This thing named me,
And there is work to do here
Is why I want to believe
And just that. I must challenge the way, however, beware
Any more,
and to watch out
For being here,-Richard Bowers
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WINTER STORY

You are a good writer Satish- steve Chering

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