Thursday, February 28, 2013
Monday, February 25, 2013
FOETICIDE
great imagery in this piece. aldous_hofmann
I always read every word for the lesson hidden in the slippery real- leafsailor
I always read every word for the lesson hidden in the slippery real- leafsailor
Sunday, February 24, 2013
WATCHING A GALAXY
a fantastic poem.- sammie bagley
Very thought provoking. I felt current and into the future with this. Your usual/always excellent inspiring write. - Lady Dragonwyck
Very thought provoking. I felt current and into the future with this. Your usual/always excellent inspiring write. - Lady Dragonwyck
CONSUMPTION
Hi Satish. I enjoy the subtle weaving of the tangible with the incoporeal, a carpetnas the exquisite corpse - I missed you and will catch up ~~ Blacpoet
Saturday, February 23, 2013
ONE SAINT WALKED OVER THE RIDGE
i liked your poem- sammie bagley
Morning Sir. I liked the first line. Very true. Very in-depth write as always.
Have a marvelous weekend.- Lady Dragonwyck
Wonderful write. - LindaM
STYES
Of course, as ever it requires more special concentration to get at the meaning of the poem. Smiles -Mangalaraj
Friday, February 22, 2013
MUTE DESIRE
It is guessed that most poems of the poet are vague and the meaning as understood by the reader is likely to differ from what the poet has had in mind. An uncommon write. Smiles-Mangalaraj
ASPHYXIA
I sense some rebelliousness in this write, "A neurotic dilemma to arrive or..." we shall all arrive one day, ready or not. Thank you for expressing from the depth of your being.- LightH2O
CLAUSES
Deep and in some lines painful. I like the ending stanza it shows resolution/determination, well penned.- LightH2O
MAGESTIC INNOCENCE
EXPERIMENTS
That final sentence wraps it up beautifully. "If the words had the answers..."- LightH2O
EXPLOSION
Unbelievable. Once again I find someone I know in your depiction of this complex personality . Like in Woe fom Wit of Fodor Dostoyevsky. Thanks for sharing- anaid
Within the bounds of time the day in Damascus was split into this poem in fragments- leafsailor
Within the bounds of time the day in Damascus was split into this poem in fragments- leafsailor
Thursday, February 21, 2013
PLEASE
Very coclorful terms and phrases in this art The poet extend outside the realm of norm- Alexander Coppedge
UNASKING
I have read so much poetry near and far, but I am at home with your mind~~ Blacpoet
A DREAM AFTER THE DEMISE
Hello, Sir. I really felt this write. So much covered in your excellent write. As always, have a marvelous day.- Lady Dragonwyck
You are a very talented poet. Your work always amazes.- LindaM
You are a very talented poet. Your work always amazes.- LindaM
Wednesday, February 20, 2013
ANOTHER CREATION *
I like the positiveness of this poem. Have a marvelous day.........- Lady Dragonwyck
Monday, February 18, 2013
FURY OF JUGGLER *
Sir: very in-depth write. I felt so much. As always, I LOVE your writes.- Lady Dragonwyck
I really enjoyed this powerful piece.- LindaM
I really enjoyed this powerful piece.- LindaM
RETOLD JOURNEY
I like this poem Satish. This is courage, not insanity. How often we forget the challenges that others face. I admire those who are content with much less than I myself have... ~-ouis gander
Sunday, February 17, 2013
Saturday, February 16, 2013
Thursday, February 14, 2013
AN UNBORN PRAYER
Morning, Sir. A thought-provoking inspiring write as always. - Lady Dragonwyck
ACCOUNTING
premature death of a dream And it is our fate. Thanks for the poem.- Gajanan Mishra
Wednesday, February 13, 2013
Tuesday, February 12, 2013
AFTER SERIAL BLASTS TO MAKE A POINT
Very touching and sensitiv ely penned poem!
Thanks for sharing.Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India
Terrible poem! Terrorists shout and we shiver! Enjoyed
Culture cannot grow when scandals and bombs spread in a democracy. Degeneration indeed when violence creeps in.-UK Atiyodi, Kandangali,Payyanur, Kerala
Thanks for sharing.Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India
Terrible poem! Terrorists shout and we shiver! Enjoyed
Culture cannot grow when scandals and bombs spread in a democracy. Degeneration indeed when violence creeps in.-UK Atiyodi, Kandangali,Payyanur, Kerala
Monday, February 11, 2013
Sunday, February 10, 2013
CREATIVE SHAME
"Neglecting the presence of choiceless pain.." very sad opening and closing lines. I heard we are all granted just a certain amount of heart beats and then our life is over. A fact we all have to come to terms with and accept. Just wish the wait was pain free. Take care my dear friend.- LightH2O
Age will undo the million dreams behind the creative shame. Sad indeed!- nimal p. dunuhinga
Age will undo the million dreams behind the creative shame. Sad indeed!- nimal p. dunuhinga
NEW KINGS
Corporates lacking in sympathy. Everything can be purchased. Strong images and synecdoche. Very nice and enjoyable-UK Atiyodi, Kandangali,Payyanur, Kerala
Saturday, February 9, 2013
Friday, February 8, 2013
INVISIBLE PARTICLES
Wow. it is a powerful and thought creating write. It takes one places they may have not been before. always maggie.- maggie lopez sherry wilbur
I really liked the ending. Always enjoy your writes. - Lady Dragonwyck
I really liked the ending. Always enjoy your writes. - Lady Dragonwyck
GREEN VISION
Superb! Recommending this, what descriptions and imagery, fabulous!- Some Girl
FANTACIES
Satish libidinous encounter with a spark, what a creation. I envy your life. I don't wish to live it. I don't wish to feel it. But I want a part of it. I want to smell its aroma in the bosom of my fantasy, brilliant poem.- Hardik Vaidya
Nice poem! The use of imageries in this poem keeps the reader thinking deep. Pls read my poems and comment- Babatunde Aremu |
Thursday, February 7, 2013
FIRST WORDS
You have my consent also I will not abandon you. "I cannot go back to my dilapidated house..." very touching poem.- LightH2O
SUNBEAMS
Satish, I don't have the right bent of mind to dive into your creation, therefore I lie bereft of its smothering kiss. But I am touched, pushed, shoved, thrown, tossed and bitten by its raw power. I enjoyed reading it.- Hardik Vaidya
Wednesday, February 6, 2013
CLAWING NIGHT
Feels like a "reality check". Very in-depth. Your always interesting thought-provoking write. - Lady Dragonwyck
MEMORIZING
those who doused the flame should be punished! I hope there is no double meaning in this poem! if it is politically based I agree with you and both of us may be in the wanted list!- Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
Tuesday, February 5, 2013
Monday, February 4, 2013
DISTURBING
simlicity of the poem is the most sketching, I love this but I cant....I will try- Aftab Alam Khursheed
Friday, February 1, 2013
AGAIN FALLING IN LOVE
"This is for you my fellow-traveller, a beautiful sector of my hidden garden, where I have permitted you to come for a walk. " So beautiful and love the way you so softly end this poem, yes, you allow us to come to your hidden garden, thank you!- LightH2O
Beautifully written. Really lovely.- Some Girl
Beautifully written. Really lovely.- Some Girl
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