LANDING WITHOUT GEARS

loved the poetry, Sir. sordid tales of pain writhing... "The body bags are full of remains." 'remains' is an interesting word... thank you for the share. Regards-Purabi Bhattacharya, India

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Millstone

A very enigmatic write Satish. Enjoyed, especially the way it began.-Lynne Colgrave, UK

"Ravi" Good write Satis, Enjyed reading you thoughtful poem. Warmest wishes.-Dhal Jirel, Nepal

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SILENCE UNSAID

The loss of love and how you want to express gratitude or are unable to do and are waiting for it all to pass away.A left of unsaid things make this poem so immersive. -Rajeev Nair, India

beautiful as ever... -Purabi Bhattacharya, India

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OICELESS CALLING

WOW! this is so profound I took my own particular message from this poem but wouldn't attempt to try and debate THIS IS THOUGHT PROVOKING FOR EVERY HUMAN THAT BLEEDS TO ME YOU CANNOT CARVE BLOOD SO PERHAPS YOU CAN UNDERSTAND WHAT I TOOK FROM IT STUNNING POEM- Marie Smith, UK

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ONE SUMMER MOON

A sense of foreboding haunts this poem yet there is beauty too. Excellent.- Lynne Colgrave, UK

Hello Satish- you paint a picture of peace yet an unknown peril exists. With your expressive verse there is a tension that mocks the calm of the moon. Enjoyed this talented write. Sending warmest regards.-Nancy Crossland, USA

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EGOCENTRIC WIND

"A dropp floats in an ocean of solitude... Egocentric wind scrapes our bones." marvelous lines.- LightH2O 

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VOICES

hey Satish,have i not said it before,....you are simply the most `imagic` writer of all time.try reading my poems sometime, okay!- k k iloduba jnr

Hmmmm, interesting- Andy Dube 

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TIMELESS AFFAIR

A deep timeless affair, tfs.- LightH2O

interesting write... the ambivalence, the challenges within...- robyn selters

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FUTURITY

Mr. Satish Verma, Sombre poem! Yet, we look forward to a glorious future! This is enigma of life. Rajat Das Gupta, Kolkata

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IN THE INTERMITTENT LOVE

A haunting song hiding in a poem,... A good read.- just Arun

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THE VACANT FRAME

Each line is much enjoyed..well penned:)- Jharna choudhury

!Self immolating silence! I love this line and this poem. Also very descriptive. Nice job!- Gary Loftis

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EMPTYING

I need a dictionary to read ur poetry .... None the less I knw talking deepness keep writing.-CALI_Rp

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SHADOWS ARE THINNING

"burning the boots" you are one of my most favorite poets in the world- leafsailor

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UNLEARNING

This hit me on so many levels that i don't normally relate. Can i request context? Seems there is a lot here that i'm ignorant of.- Jenessis

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HELIX NOW UNCOILS

Gripping! tfs- LightH2O

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AN ART

Unique work that you have penned..- Sara Kendrick

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TRANQUILITY

A peaceful poem with peaceful thought nice one- Aftab Alam Khursheed

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Nestling

Life becomes vivid with words and sincere activities.We should try to do something better as the bird tried to make her nest for forthcoming children.
Good imagination.Thank you sir.- Nathmal Sharma

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IMAGES

Good write. Congrats-WILLIAMSJI

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FROZEN

Vrmaji

I am intrigued by your poems.There is dark humour in it.It is minimalistic and the one of best poetry in Muse India.(the best accoring to me.)Yet it is highly incomprehensible.Why don't you provide some foot notes please? -Sivakami Velliangiri, Chennai

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WINDOWS ARE NOT SUPPORTING

A clever write .. So well composed!-andra Martyres

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A RIVER FLOWS UNDERGROUND

A deep and well written poem Satish, well done! - oxox //- Anne Lise Andresen

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CELEBRATING MY DEFEAT

Think I'llpick up a copy of Farenheit 451....~Interesting co-ordination of expression....- rank James Ryan Jr./FjR

Always so profound in your original lines.- LightH2O

Wonderfully written, a gem- Some Girl

The defeat is the battle engaged , this is all we can do- leafsailor

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ETERNITY

Your poems have been the inspiration of quite a few I have written, so I may not respond to all your poems, I do read each and every single one of them. Thanks for being consistent in posting. Kind regards.-Safiyyah, UK

Simple and so Sweet!- Padmavathi, Secunderabad

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UNFOG THE SKY

My dear Satish, you never run out of original metaphorical lines your creative mind is unlimited. I'm always intrigued and astonished to read your great work. May the unfolding of your self knowledge enlighten and inspire those of us who love and admire you and your work, thank you!- LightH2O

An excellent write... Nature compared to real life... Your imagery is brilliant SV!- Sandra Martyres

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CATCH THE SUNSET

I love your opening line, "A lifetime with a classic pain" what a fine way of looking at pain. "I wanted a life as a leaf, drifting out on the hill..." I guess that peaceful desire was one of mine also.- LightH2O

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A HYBRID OF MAN

I'm baffled by such wise and elevated thoughts, "The ultimate otherness, of an idea baffles me. Charity creates the misery"- LightH2O

I like: "I wanted the sanctity of a tree, full of fragrant bloom, to break the spell of hot arguments...' Impassioned write- robyn selters

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I WAS ALWAYS ANGRY

You take such deep inventories each night. I love you for it.- LightH2O

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SUMMER’S FAULT

well done sir literary as well scientifically the concluding- Aftab Alam Khursheed

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FATIGUE OF WASTED YEARS

I totally agree with Robyn. I'm speechless. Recommending- LightH2O

profound write... stirring- robyn selters

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Delhi blast

Satish, this is moving, heart wrenching. This is poetry in every way imaginable, and unimaginable. Please, I invite you to read my blog for India and to enter this incredible poem into "a love letter for India" as a tribute to your people. Sincerely- CYNDI MACMILLAN

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FEATURELESS AND WHITE

"Truth has made a big dent in my heart." sensing your truth.- LightH2O

The dead and living start talking.! It should be...............................thanks.- nimal p. dunuhinga

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A HANDFUL OF VICTORIES

No frills no excuses just plain truth. Beautiful! Recommending.-LightH2O

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NOWHERE IN SIGHT

I will meet you in zero space, I'll be holding white flowers. Deep and beautiful poem.- LightH2O

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DESERTED WASTELAND

She does come silently, "We were already dying..." sad realizations we all must face... everything else is just a distraction.- LightH2O

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ONE SILVER BOWL

great job..- Karen Degnan Foiles

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DEPARTURE

So touching is this verse, Verma-ji!!! Beautifully expressed. Kind regards.-Safiyyah, UK

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Knuckled down

Very strong, Satish Verma ji. Kudos.-Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad

Loincloths hanging on the strings to strangle
the pigeons.
Everything moves with precision.

Your images are haunting
Is this about some swami(ji)?-Sivakami Velliangiri, Chennai

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FURIOUS WOUNDS

Satish, a good poem... happy mother's day.. - Poet Destroyer A

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DEPARTURE

So touching is this verse, Verma-ji!!! Beautifully expressed. Kind regards.-Safiyyah, UK

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GLITCHES

Except, The Beauty In The Beauty Of You, Sweet Beautiful Satish! ˜ My Love, Always- Rachel St.Cross

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A HERMIT

Fine reflections of a hermit. "I was watching the crowd of centuries piling up in history."- LightH2O

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SMASHING THE ROAD SIGNS

"The essence will not heal, this bandaged soul, ...I walk in the shadows of sounds, smashing the road signs." and move you must.- LightH2O

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INTENSE POETRY

Soul gripping!... "Knowledge explodes the myths, and hurls the naked truths."- LightH2O

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DYING BEAUTIFULLY

I started to quote a line in the first stanza but found so many other lines worthy of quoting that I have to say the whole poem is worthy of quoting. You never run out of great lines.- LightH2O

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THE NIRVANA

Deep questions makes one ponder.- LightH2O

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HOLDING MY TOES

I agree with Some Girl (Wow!), we wonder about her while we enjoy such peaceful times in the beauty & tranquility of our moment on earth.- LightH2O

Wow - amazing poetry - just what I like to read. Recommended- Some Girl

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FIERCE MOONING

Not exactly sure how to interpert this one..If it is really a bout with cancer, I am truly sorry to hear of the illness effecting you or your love one..I hope that the treatment is working..I will remember you and your family in my prayers..If it is a metaphor for your muse, great creativity that you have displayed in this work..I have not seen your name in awhile on here but of course, I could have just missed you when you come on and I am not on..Sara Kendrick

Cancer ...... chemotherapy ..... so hopeless! - Terrible sad, Satish. - Well written. - oxox / /- Anne Lise Andresen

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FOUND YOURSELF

"..too shy to die..." lines like this make me think deeper than the deepest allowed. My best to you.- LightH2O

only for a mount it seems then off again, san untangled poem ,smiles- leafsailor

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WALKING TOELESS

Enjoyed reading your poem.-Ndaba Sibanda

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WITHOUT QUALMS

Happy weekend, Sir. Another thought-provoking write. I like the "feel" I got here. As always, wonderful work. - Lady Dragonwyck

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FIERCE MOONING

Cancer ...... chemotherapy ..... so hopeless! - Terrible sad, Satish. - Well written. - Anne Lise Andresen

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EASY TO FORGET

"The flash of insight burned my thoughts." "Here was a naked truth unclothed..." here is a naked soul, disrobing before our souls eyes, voicing what we all wonder deep inside.- LightH2O

Here was a naked truth unclothed by time beyond the innocence of age................................ageless!- nimal p. dunuhinga

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SECOND-HAND EVENT

Deep reflections, "ego was the last refuge" I love how you end it with those last two lines which shed much light.- LightH2O

Got it-leafsailor

"It suddenly transports you to the otherness" Love the use of words and its meaning. God bless- Linda Winchell

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RETURNING FAVOUR

Deeply, powerful and very well written Verma. - Anne Lise Andresen

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WHO WAS FAITHFUL?

it is so deep... metaphorical!- Prabesh Dhakal

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ANCHORED BRIEFLY

Felt like someone trying to balance their life/lives. I felt a lot from this write.- Lady Dragonwyck

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