LOYAL TO DEATH

Nice openin lines- seema chowdhury

Wise sentiment and timeless style...:)- 'stiltskin

A pensive write that makes the reader think.. we really dont know where the world's headed towards... with stories from Syria very recently in the news, the last two lines make for a very strong ending..- Prashant Shaurya

I always enjoy your original work, thanks for sharing.- LightH2O

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A SPIRIT'S TALE

A magnificent poem.-bernadette

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DROUGHT

Really good poem.- john loving iii

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SPIRAL DESCENT

Satish, this is just beautiful. Recommending!- LightH2O

When sorrow ends..laughter makes an entry..just laugh..cast aside your sorrows..save them for the morrow...we may have great words which encourage others..but what about us.- Ultra Violet

My teacher sir, you have been here from the first days , beyond the vale I have always completely loved your work, nothing else like it- leafsailor

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UMBRELLA

You well paint quite the picture with your words. Starts off being ominous and wraps up with determination and strength. I like this a lot.-ragamuffin

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SPIDER

In my mind I can go a couple of different ways with this, but I'm sure it's not what you meant? you puzzled me with this one. Thanks for sharing.- LightH2O

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WILL NOT FORGET

Like to know what u described...but nicely written.-Allen Danie

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SONG ABOVE THE SORROW

I listen to your wise old charm, remembering the good to last and knowing that space is for infinite clarity, not for the innocent hikers from the surface of the critical mass we assume to be our home...I'd rather your charm than to hold your arm...- FridayJunior

Very lovely!- Some Girl

nice write, very inspiring, and beautifully written. it has a great flow, and it says so much. thanks for sharing.- Fallen Rose Petal AKA ScreamingNightmare

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SPARKS IN WOODS

Great expression,love it;] Keep the ink flowing.- Weeping willow

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STRANGE ENEMIES

I love some of your lines, so amazing, while others puzzle me a bit, thanks for sharing. Sending my best.- LightH2O

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MOB WAS COMING

We will collectively burn the scriptures in the city. Alas!In the name of God brothers kill each other?- nimal p. dunuhinga

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THE INDOMITABLE

Simply WOW!!! -Safiyyah Patel, UK

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Humbled

Reminds me of my own school days...beautiful poem- betrothed

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WAKES THE BLOOD

I am only at the start of my searching jurney but I can feel deeply for your poem. When or if (rarely) I get into a state of oneness I may be in harmony with everything, but a next moment I can also see the hollow beliefs that is pushed on us for more than centuries...Then waken blood sometimes is revolting but not that is what I search, when I deep into myself all I wish is to be at peace with everything..Thank you for sharing, this poem is more than just a poem, it is a teaching.- Elena S

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TRAMPLING

Ugly scrawls are scaring.................................mesmerized!- nimal p. dunuhinga

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COMPARISION

"Like stars we are sailing in our separateness." going into your spiritual sanctuary and bringing forth some of those great gems for us to delight in. Satish, I'm sending you lots of love and blessings.- LightH2O

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SEA SHELLS

This sounds like a wonderful trip of your spirit "Non-stop travel, half the world to meet you." it is true we travel beyond our limitations in our sleep, hope to meet you at that beach.- LightH2O

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BOUQUET

Romantic with a touch of sadness, love the imagery.- LightH2O

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UNWORDED

You're the master of deep phrases... "I will find the ultimate path"- LightH2O

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BLACK AND WHITE

I'm going to bed after reading your deep words. Blessing to you my dear friend.- LightH2O

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EMOTIONALLY

Very beautiful poem...loved reading it.- Geetha Jayakumar

keep up the Good Work! ! ! ! ! # i like- Zandile Zoya

Love; y..so lovely... Great work.- Bob Brown

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A SMALL CHANCE

Good write, enjoyed, Love & Regards-WILLIAMSJI MAVELI 

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MANOEUVRE

Sir: as always, enjoy your writes. Have a great weekend.- Lady Dragonwyck

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UNASKED

Wow.. This blew me away! I like your style and usage of wording.. Great piece....- MoonStar

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ENUNCIATION

I think this one of the lovliest things I have evrr read.- TianaKR

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LEARNING

A wise poem, well done Satish - Have a relaxing weekend. - Anne Lise Andresen

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APARTHIED

Just at the break of day I see this poem on the slim horizon.- leafsailor

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FRUITS FALL LIKE DREAMS

Very well written. Thanks for sharing- Some Girl

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PRIZEFIGHT

Interesting I like it very much reads well Great Poet.-SuperSlimJim

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A SHORT JOURNEY

watching the civility of a nude, good write.- Gajanan Mishra

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Catch a Butterfly

Yes sit and contemplate and feel the colors moving with you you catch just a glimpse for a moment and then it disappears, so you held it there and it flew away but you received something you felt something and you remember ,you release again and vise versa. Your poems are purely stunning. Thank you!- kfedyk

Stunning!- LightH2O

Very profound and full of imagery. Catching butterflies is useful : )- leopardmcewan

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DESIGN OF DEATH

Out of words in awe! I'll be gone for 10 days in case you wonder. Best regards.- LightH2O

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LIFE DEMANDS ONE THING

It is a beautiful write, it is difficult to look in the mirror and not be able to see beyond its limitations, beyond the veil of illusion. Such incredible write it brings all these thoughts within me that already are rooted so deep. Namaste Kasia- kfedyk

Amazing as usual, the mind goes nuts at times trying to decipher.- LightH2O

Very expressive and deep- seema chowdhury

Wow this is just so intense to read...you really make me think about things thank you.- Kaylanna George

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On The Annıversary Of Gustav Klimt

A great poem, like it.- Dave Walker

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