INSIPRATION

vry nice sir.............
i invite u to read mine..........- Shraddha The Poetess

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THE WHOLENESS

a heartfelt poem bless you.- gert

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TREE OF LIGHT DANCES

As the sha doe prances. - Ultra Violet

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ENDING OF TIME?

End of first incarnation..but not time.- Ultra Violet

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GATHER THE SUN

Watch out for blackholes..makes all your sorrows look like joy.. go behind the curtain..life is just a stage..we are the actors..youknow! - Ultra Violet

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HOUSE OF RAINS

What lies beyond fear... i'll give you a hint.. fear came before hope and glory camebefore fear.. sorry..i messed up words! - Ultra Violet

What lies beyond fear... i'll give you a hint.. hope camebefore fear..and glory before fear.. glory is what you saw.. Glory.- Ultra Violet

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INNOCENT WAS THE BETRAYAL

You felt that..that's awesome!- Ultra Violet

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CLAUSTROPHOBIA

Dust off those thoughts..they're still good! - Ultra Violet

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Sheela-na-gig

very powerful write thank you for sharing ~always -Poet Destroyer A

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NO COMPLAINT

I enjoyed the read,well written- wordman

This is an excellent write, Congrats. Glad, if you can send me your email id.for further interaction Regards & Love - WILLIAMSJI

The fangs penetrates deep, in the breast of sleepy pride What a phrase I must be mesmerized.- SuperSlimJim

WELL WRITTEN I ENJOYED THE READ BLESS YOU TAKE CARE- gert

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LIPS WILL MEASURE

a pleasure to read, inspirational!!- labchaddy

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PASSION IS A HURRICANE

wow this is exquisite, i enjoyed this as well as your other pieces!!- labchaddy

Excellent, thought provoking piece!- Deletemarvinbrato

magnificent- DeleteMatloobBokhari

Very true.- DeleteUltra Violet

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SYSIPHUS

I felt a lot from this write. Feels like one of my many journeys. Love your work, as always. -Lady Dragonwyck

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BYANTIUM -2

I always enjoy your writes. Wisdom, foresight and thought-provoking. - Lady Dragonwyck

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PASSION IS A HURRICANE

Excellent, thought provoking piece!- marvinbrato

magnificent- MatloobBokhari

Very true.- Ultra Violet http://www.poetfreak.com/

SINGING DUST

A good collection.- seema chowdhury

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FANTACIES

A sweet poem.- Have a great week, in love and peace, Satish ! - Anne Lise Andresen

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SUNBEAMS

This is nice and neat.- Hsu Mr

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DISTURBING

Hi, Satish Verma, awesome write. I feel the emotion in your deep write, very clever way of bringing the imagery above the surface...- Poet Destroyer A

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STARED BLANKLY

A beautiful poem. The sacred is our highest sense of being- Some Girl

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NAMELESS INTRUDERS

Not all enemies are evil.- Ultra Violet

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LEGITIMACY

I love the legitimacy of alphabets, and the last line the dignity of its own, very good stuff- Spaceroy 

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SAVAGE FIRE

Thank you for sharing, best to you.- LightH2O

Hoplessness to you is a burning feeling, but perhaps it is not hope that you need to cast out that savage flame..perhaps a cold glass of water?- Ultra Violet

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POETRY BOOM POETRY BOOM

I can't hear...beautiful imagination..- Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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PASSAGE TO UNKNOWN

Excellent Satish, I've had similar ideas lately ....:)- 'stiltskin

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SUDDENLY SO!

Good write with lot of emotions and good message, sir! -Padmavathi, Secunderabad

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UN - ME - ING 'I'

Good imagination and nice presentation! sir,,, Nice toread it....-Padmavathi, Secunderabad

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INVERTED BODY

Death has no meaning? Cause death is for the body, but life is for the spirit.. Our body is like a cross..the older you get..the more like gold it feels..without a strong spirit..the cross will crush you. ^-^... Guaranteed 120..gonna have to dig deeper for the other 780. ^-^- Ultra Violet

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SCARY?

quality we want and not quantity.- Gajanan Mishra

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It was time

Deep and placid like ocean lovely thank for share- Aftab Alam Khursheed

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MOST WANTED

well done , wows me .- yvette kelley

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LUNAR TOUCH

I break a flower into hundred petals. it's hard to fix scattered petals as a flower again Sir?- nimal p. dunuhinga

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DEATH OF CALENDERS

Last stanza reminds of about the wisdom of aging, but it's sad to stop watching the carnations in the eyes.  Nice penning.- LightH2O 

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DEAF CITY

I take it the use opf car horns is prettu much a moot if not mute issue,yes? lol....Some solid expression, here -Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR

Wisdom at its best my dear teacher. Nice you posted right after me, love being next to you, if at least this time. Take care.-LightH2O

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