The Biometrics

tripy :) -Poetic T

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Jottings

unique expression and excellent thought...loved the poem, dear Sir. -partha sarathi paul, guskara-burdwan

My profound regards for this beautiful poem. I find myself in complete alignment with the well-strucutred thought here, until the last dew drop. And it was heartening to see you unchain from your signature form Sir!
Warm regards, -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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I Think

i understand this well i think, i always say.'fate, the cruelist master, the moon a crueler mistress still,' yet, the moon can sometimes be seen in the day, even if the sun is brighter.-Richmond Harding

Do not go gently.... well written, albeit dark.-Percy Keats

Excellent, thought-provoking lines. Worth reading twice, to absorb more meaning. by Briz

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Dawning Blue

Dear Sir, nice going with this cute and lovely poem.thanks!- V P Mahur

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White House

good writing.-neehu

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Wandering Jew

Where will you end up.-Gaffer

well said thanks!-T.G.Raymond

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Meditation

Good write!
I am getting more and more curious with this signature form! Does it happen all the time in 3 lines without any reason I wonder! This time I'd even seen two blanks on the first line...is this by design?
Warmr regards, -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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Outplaying

Good read thanks & keep it up cheers......-Sagar D Rebel

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PAYLOAD

abc form very well tackled. enjoyed. -Paul Callus

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Travails Of Vivisection

Sheer poetry, enough said.-sheila

i liked it-rochishmon

Such a sophisticated creation lovely.......-Sagar D Rebel

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Imperiously

Awesome write pleasant read keep it up.........-Sagar D Rebel

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Forgetting The Hymn

Challanging poetry.-john graham

Loved it thanks....-Sagar D Rebel

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Moon-ed 'I'......

Struggled hard to understand the hyphen placed as a grammatical explanation...later found its usage as a submission or a connection.
I am reading.
Wonderfully bold.
Warm regards, -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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IN THE GARDEN OF GETHSEMANE

A deep powerful write. Brialliant.- GaelicRogue

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WITHOUT A NAME

you will be remembered as a hero without a name!............................in the cycle of birth and death we meet in different names?- nimal dunuhinga

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Bruised Spots

Liked the second one , especially.- Seshu Chamarty

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Ripped Apart

contemplative words, both beautiful and filled with the complications that come with life-Richmond Harding

Beautiful :)-Demon Poetess

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An Opusculum

Very nicely infused poem.....-Sagar D Rebel

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A TREE HOUSE

Plant trees and save environment! ................very beautifully crafted, Sir.............Liked it- Suman Kumar Das

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WITH APOLOGIES

The three situations you have described here are all enough to ruffle somebody's fur.-Robert Pettit

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SATURN WILL SHORTLY RISE

Saturn's beautiful.- Hannah Chloe

Very very beautiful.!!!.- Mr. Frivolous

Very very beautiful.!!!- Mr. Frivolous

Always a pleasure to read your deep thoughts and metaphors my friend. That question in the first line had my attention and what follows makes a compelling read too. A message which all should take note of and end this masquerade of human pride and domination.- Fay Slimm

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A Sneak Preview

Deadly and too close to touch.-KateB

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COUNTDOWN

a stunning comment on contemporary scenario- hypocrisy, degradation of environment. An ancient fear descends from the hill. Wants to marry a tree. Or worship the terror of a diaspora haunting stanza- mamta agarwal

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Guiled me...

I'd say it's bliss of being in injury with regret or remorse of any kind.
Let words swim in the eyes of the beholder.

Excellent is not excellent enough to express what I read just now! 

Warm regards,
Your reader.-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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HEMLET BY CHOICE

This post is very well written and quite interesting to read. I like the style you chose and was especially impressed with these lines, (No hope of breeze. It is hot inside, the spirit burning.) I expected you to write it is hot outside but the word inside was a beautiful surprise and poetic device.- OnePurpleCrayon

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ETERNAL CUDDLE

I like this one. The title captured me...- Ginger Blue

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SHOCK THE GARDEN

This is a perplexing piece yet an obvious one as well. The battle between the positive and negativity aspects of life, though the latter seems to have greater strength despite goodness present to overcome it.- Jarrod  Lacy

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Outsider

Nomad in exile!
What humour! Read it a number of times. Will read it again!
Warm regards, -Supratik Sen, Hderabad

I was nowhere in the circle of untruths,
the pain was slipping inside
and self-denial took its toll.
lovely and beautiful lines.. welcome.-Hasmukh mehta, Ahmedabad

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I SEE MY OWN DEMISE

To see one's naked soul before the mirror of our own perception varies, depending on the day it is done. Some days the euphoria of day is more lenient while others we are more severe in our judgments. The last two lines are sad and beautiful, sad if the flower is just floating as a cut flower and beautiful if it's a lotus flower with roots and alive. This is such a real and deep evaluation for I too have taken these deep dives. Thank you for sharing so much of yourself with us.- Light H2o

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NEIGHBOURS WATCH

Awesome! Great imagery.-Hannah Chloe

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BYANTIUM -2

Interesting Loved it.- SuperSlimJim

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Encircled GLOOM

Though I have run out of steps... So nice presentation.......

Still I am not taken over by gloom
Life still provides fragrance and blossom
Whether I sit quietly in the four wall room
Or roam out in open with full freedom

I love to be at the feet of nature
I see plenty of birds to assure
My mind rests with many thoughts
Where is animosity and need to fight?-Hasmukh mehta, Ahmedabad

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UNPOURING GRIEF

The word play in this is great. What a great read for my first of the day!!- Jared Pickett

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THE WHISPERING SILENCE

Beautiful and soft written, Satish ! - Have a great weekend.-Anne Lise Andresen

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VALLEY OF TEARS

Beautifully expressed.- Weeping willow

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AHAM ASMI... *

This is "ART." You have created a brilliant write.- GaelicRogue

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BECOMING ONESELF

Satish, Sweet Beautiful Satish! I Loved You When I First Beheld Your Beauty: I Still Do..No Kick Start Needed Far, From Black Currants..My Love.-Rachel St.Cross

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