Stripping to the Bones

I could listen to chaotic cries and dwelling in a hollowness that makes the particles’ shrivel and collapse, a feeling to share and a feeling to lose the fear of the seeds within… that will set one free, when the voices become music.-Dolphine29 

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Secret Conflicts

Great write awesome.-Sagar D Rebel

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On The Annıversary Of Gustav Klimt

Art nouveau genius klimt. The kiss still my favorite. Shimmering gold.-

Well written take care..........-Sagar D Rebel

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EXPLICITLY

Great write - Thanks for sharing!-Pandita Sanchez

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I Am Thinking

And Again Great Write! Liked!-puds1957

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CATASTROPHE

Well Written Good theory.-SuperSlimJim

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Ancestral Present

This is a very well written piece of poetry!-preciouspoetess

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Constraints

Simply brilliant in their simplicity and clarity.-sheila

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Deep.-UrbanJ

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The Final Call

A Very Good Write Liked!-puds1957

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A LIVING SOUL

very, very nice piece-mizclaws 

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After The Carnage

Wow. Such a beautifully written poem. At once so heartbreakingly sad but then you've given that faint glimmer of hope at the closing. Beautifully done!-Colleen Courtney

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Altercation

a very fine emotive write ...stephen keyes

Very touching.-Sagar D Rebel

the pain of holding family grudges. heartfelt poem.- treble-t

Such a moving poem. Emotion is there, tinged with sadness. I prefer your poetry in this layout, much more flow to the verses. -Tattoo Queen

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DECAYED CENTURY

Wow Im impressed by your poem.-Brian Jani

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From the Cherry Blossoms

The décalage is expressed with firmness, with determination. Did not understand the meaning of the word studing. If the Sun, which is at the epicentre, refuses to deliver, then hopelessness becomes the only fate. In my opinion, the poem is more on acceptance rather than on any expectation of a shifting paradigm. The challenge with the poet is that he never responds, never. So learners like me have to focus only on his poems, on nothing else. But I guess that should be enough. Warm regards, -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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Sleepwalking

Beautiful insightful poetry.I thought the last four lines were perfectly placed. - sheila

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TRANSMIGRATION

A beautiful sunset of a poem and may you always find peace because without it life has no meaning. Best wishes.- assisi 

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A BITTER FRUIT

bitter indeed very creative write.- Nathan D.

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The Threshold

A great one of warning. Well done.-BrotherNewton

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One Hundred Moons

Oh, what a poem with a grim message! Terror and deadly terror instruments do seem to be the underlying themes of your strikingly written poems, Mr. Verma. -Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

Our mind too is a box with a bomb hidden. When it explodes epoch is created. -UK Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur

The position of the poet seems to be determined with the singleminded focus on the instrument in hand. Excellent, as it were! -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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The Massacre

Nice Write!-puds1957

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Acoustics are not working

This is one poem where I could see the poet really coming out. It does talk of hopelessness, thus a lie would be born; however it also prepares us of siutations which are always beyond our control - walls have no doors, meaning no exit, in my opinion. This could also mean a complete negation to bring in ideas of opposite points of view.

Acoustics used both in the literal and figurative ways to provoke multiple interpretations! Excellent, as it were!
Warm regards, -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

Very fine poem, Satish ji, on the present cult of terrorism.-GSP Rao, Hyderabad


This one brought a lump in my throat! The deafening spectre of terrorism has been so poignantly portrayed! Where terrorism succeeds, acoustics indeed fail! Respects Mr. Verma for this touching and sensitive poem!-Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

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SEASON’S CHANGE

Satish nice poem I enjoyed it.-Brian Jani

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ZEITGEIST

An interesting piece. Invokes deep thinking. Nicely written!- Colleen Courtney

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Something To Grieve

Intelligent poetry,very fine.-sheila

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Excellent write.-Dean Marsh

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INSIPRATION

Satish... Nice seeing your poem featured on the poetry soups home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~- Poet Destroyer A

aww a release to give birth to such cryptic line... i love poetry... very nice read.- Weston Gregory

The blank paper prints the nude,good write.- Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

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Scary? Scary?

Again, not just words, meaningful words, great.- sheila

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Getting Nowhere

well composed and crafted piece of work.-Chris G. Vaillancourt

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Payload

Great Poem!-puds1957

nice.-UrbanJ

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Crowd at the Morgue

It is still not a reaction in my opinion, but a response to the strange madness where death will come as a bride. Every line has a drama, a shock, till the end.
Warm regards, -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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BLACK WALLS

Greetings! thinking of you.- Light H2o

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STANDING ALONE

A bit sad, but real as we all stand alone... nicely crafted as usual. Lots of love from your faithful friend.- Light H2o

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Plummeting

great ink.- POET LOVE

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REPEATING HISTORY

very profound. what a beautiful tragic story. it felt like you were paying homage to a place that was wronged so it was very touching even though it was terribly sad.- Liz Smith

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ADULTEROUS

My friend of many years now , a totally captivating poem for me, once again adding to what poetry can be- leafsailors Ghost

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SHIVERING DOORWAY

There is some incredible metaphor in this. I enjoyed reading it quite a bit.- Dead Nation Scholar

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SUICIDES

Incredible work! How you used words in this poem is seriously attention grabbing. Great job!- Laura Luce del sole

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VOID

Disintegration? Interesting write. I sense shades of nihilism in your words, and the inevitable disintegration that must come when all my philosophies travel their narrowing roads to center.- Don Bouchard

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NOSTALGIA

Nostalgic indeed. Applause!- Light H2o

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MALIGNANCY

I work at cancer treatment center. This touched me.- Atypical Blondey

Intense! sending love your way.15 Apr by Light H2o

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ECLAMPSIA

A haunting write. I didn't know what eclampsia was until I googled it. I truly hope this is not based on any personal experience. God bless you. Take care. Hope you are okay.- Priyanshi Dass

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LIKE A Da VINCI

A loincloth was suffcient to hide the birth. Great.-nimal dunuhinga

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TRACKS

thousand of dark memories and time had stopped in its tracks. tattooed!- nimal dunuhinga

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STONES

I like this. I need to really read it a couple of more times, but I do like it.- William Patterson

I enjoyed this very much. Thanks for sharing.-Vicious Poetry 

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THE HEALER

there is no healer in the bush.Mesmerized!-nimal dunuhinga

The raw agony of failing sight in these terse lines touches the heart deeply. As only an on-going deterioration of health can be penned so brilliantly by a writer with such a successful background as your own I do hope this was written not from experience but from your well-known imaginative insight dear poet-friend. A most moving read.-Fay Slimm

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PICK UP THE DAWN

Quite a play with words and imagery.-just Arun

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SHAME AND FEAR

Fantastic visuals, a true delight to read. Thank you for sharing!- Tadghan

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Destination What?

well done satish.-Puppybreath

Nice Write!-puds1957

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Baby God

The spectre of violence amidst the beauty of nature - the contrasts and contradictions - very sensitively protrayed. Great write, Mr. Verma. -Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

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Odyssey

Delightful!.-puds1957

beautiful.-Puppybreath

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INTENSE POETRY

Intense poetry indeed abdul, I like it.- Brian Jani

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Of personal god

Read this many times!!!! With the last stanza, I couldn't agree more! Will re-read! Warm regards.-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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Breakthough

thank you.-Puppybreath

Nice Write Again Liked!.-puds1957

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Tonight

Lovely-Puppybreath

Nice Write Liked.-puds1957

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