Identically

fantastic. the fissure, the divide. the chasm that creates the rift. swallows the lions and the lambs into the abyss. not a moment to dream. only a silent choice of anguish scream.- Bo Raven S.

Yes sir poet so well the words know the hour here.- David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

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THE STERILITY

... I decided that sane thoughts was not the opposite of untruths - I could be wrong. - Stella

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ABSURD MYTHS

It was the words. They always get you in trouble. The letters are innocent ~ :D - I found that humorous. - Lady A

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A LONE JOURNEY

The image of a feather falling on the mirror is softly and slow motion rendered. Nice image for measuring time perhaps. - Lady A

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Incinerated

"... the sleep will level the night..." this caught my eye. - Stella

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CURBING

wow! your poetry is never dull. and never shallow. you are a true master of subtlety brevity and power. incredible once again. sometimes we find tigers, and sometimes tigers find us alone. we are not prepared for battle. unless we arm our selves with armor of your poetry. - Bo Raven S.

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LIKE AN ASTEROID

damn! somebody get the fire extinguisher. this poem, this man's poetry is fire. why you guys sleeping on Master Satesh's poetry?? You guys are truly missing out on some really good, deep shit. His poems are mind blowing and heart pounding. They leave me with a dropped jaw. Poet freak learn from this man. He has style and power, his lightning will make your poetry that more thunderous.- Bo Raven S.

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Animation

Nicely written.- Dark Wolf

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Dream Landing

I must be honest and admit that I really don't get this poem. (Are you referring to the sun?) I read it several times and still think the wording is beautiful.-LaceRibbon

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LANDSCAPING

Lovely and thought-provoking, cleverly and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery. I quite enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing!.- Electric Peace

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FOETICIDE

Very interesting piece. I enjoyed the overall theme & the images it caused my mind to depict... Well done...Peace-disDain

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New Dictionary

Nicely written.-Dark Wolf

Indeed, it is an immoral and disitute world !-C Boomer

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Bracelets

very well crafted... fine work.- Electric Peace

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Suicidal

Great write.-TonyC

I think some of this was lost in translation but what it gained I bloody love it.-Puppybreath

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New Year's Mirror

Great message in your poem. Nice work!- Electric Peace

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LIPS OF MOON WERE HOT

Fabulous in all aspects. -Partha Sarathi Paul, guskara-burdwan

The poem seems to be an oracle that's sprung from the earth, for a change. Yes, you may not be lucky this time, when even the fallen leaves waiting for the fruits refuse to be overthrown, when the star mirrors are working on the sun, among other things. Wonderful images, a pleasure to read and learn. Warm regards.-Supratik Sen, Hyderbad

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Steaming

Ooh I very much like this one. Some great imagery and veiled content. -Helenmatherrogers

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CLAMPDOWN

Well written as usual, and as usual you've captured a bit of truth.- Electric Peace

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INCARNATION

A real look at Reality. Enjoyed very much. Have an awesome week. -Lady Dragonwyck

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FRACTURED TIME

If we do not speak out, no one will know what goes on in the minds of men....much enjoyed, there is a message in it for all.- Fred Clark 

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FOUNTAIN

Short but sweet, well written creative, a good piece. I enjoyed the read and am looking forward to reading more of your poetry .-Thomas Heath

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IMPOVERISHED

delighted. ignited and incited. A poem walks like a truth. penetrated, venerated and exacerbated. such power in your flow, Master Satish! King of Poet Freak poets, all bow down and kiss your feet.- Bo Raven S.

This is captivating and just beautiful.- Electric Peace

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Still Birth

A compulsive read again and again!-RAJESHWARI SRINIVASAN, MUMBAI

From the first to the last line, this poem made for not only a compelling read but several re-reads to get its full import. As usual, it represents the trade mark abstract style of the poet to express serious issues of mayhem and death and this time, hope too! -Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, India

A masterclass poem by a master poet. Thanks for sharing,dear poet. -Partha Sarathi Paul, guskara-burdwan

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Collected Thoughts

This poem is very deep, the phrases you use are strong and powerful! - Electric Peace

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Her Looks

you are a master weaver of words. delight to read all your poems. there is a strange intoxication to your writing, that makes women heat up and moist. you seduce and reduce them to pieces, bits and pieces. good craftsmanship.- Bo Raven S.

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BURNT OUT WORDS

a bleak outlook on technology...but we see the effects at this early stage...it was a good read...-sundeath

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Quenching

This is quite an original piece. Different, unique, and with a sad undertone throughout. Well done!-Drongan

Love this particularly the reference to pomegranates.-jennie charles

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What Ending

Nicely written.-Dark Wolf

For me a lovely but dispairing poem. Another one of your poetic jewels.-jennie charles

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My Diary

Nice job, very much enjoyed.- Electric Peace

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Logistics

I so sorry Mr Satish Verma, this is the third poem in a row that I've added to my favourites. And I feel like I'm slightly stalking you. The atmosphere of your poetry is unrelenting. It compliments this pitch black morning I am sitting around in. You have the gift of rhetoric that captures the space between man and his environment.I genuinely love writing poetry - though I may not have that much on this site. But when I read your poetry, you make me love reading poetry even more. If it wasn't for the fact that have errands to complete, I put the kettle back on and read all of your other entries.- Olm

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A Saint Between Us

Nicely written.-Dark Wolf

As usual an excellent poem.-jennie charles

From the first stanza onwards this is a seriously good poem. I've added this to my favourites.-Olm

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SEEKING

whoooo! you are a prophet, spitting dragon flames to burn my treasure chests. good powerful thinker and genius. you are a charm immaculate Master Satish.- Bo Raven S.

This poem, to put simply - is brilliant. - Electric Peace

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Acrimony

Amazing.- Angelica Poe

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A SICKENED CRAFT

beautiful.- Emily Preston

Your words provoke a lot of images so worth reading several times. No monotony with this one.- Electric Peace

The cascading dream, not a kaleidoscope but a thunderhead only you can write like this , I have been mesmerized for years now.- David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)

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GOLDEN VALLEY

Quit the Imagination so much power awesome story telling and keeps them mind working for the glory of the nations under God. Beautiful writings.- SuperSlimJim

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FATE OF THE KEY

I really love your works, very relaxing to sit & enjoy quietly.-Entelechy .

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DUALITY

Very profound and interesting to read!.- N e o S k i e s

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Conceiving

Read the poem but failed to understand it closely. But I liked it.-Gangadharan Nair Pulingat

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Give me some poison to live

The poem just takes you in. Warm regards.-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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Criminality

you have this remarkable talent to hold your readers to the edge of their seats and take them on a wildly thrilling ride. - Electric Peace 

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Fly-Trap

As challenging as ever with abstract metaphors, Satish ji. -GSP Rao, Hyderabad

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BENEVOLENCE

The dawn was still hiding in the bunker. Needed mercy of course. Nice thought expressed in this poem. Beautiful.- Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

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SYMPHONY

"SMILE, `BEAUTIFUL SATISH |*:*\(*{{....~- tristen temple

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Warming Up

Dark, well written.- Dark Wolf

Very dark imagery but well epressed.-  Gypsy Lane

A Great Write Very Expressive! Liked!-puds1957

Wonderful words but a chilling theme. Goor write.-jennie charles

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Moony Affair

A Lovely Write Liked!-puds1957

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POURING

Lovely...a pleasure to read, so filled with depth! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing. - Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2

Thoughtful and thought-provoking! - Electric Peace

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Death on grass

First the line "Violency has pregnancy" indicating the perpetuation of violence. And then these concluding lines:
Death on grass will never show
the second birth of the pain.
The spectre of violence all round us, is superbly articulated in this poem. Kudos Satish Vermaji. Thanks for sharing.-Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

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Debts of gratitude

With glory coming earlier, the satire is overhanging! Warm regards.-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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FOURSOME

Nice flow. - Lina Guerrero

very provocative and well constructed piece of writing.- Electric Peace

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MAKING OVERTURES

"...The pain eases, when the
"...The pain eases, when the memory fails..." That is true, I think. Forget the crappy stuff and remember the great times - the opposite of pain, joy? happens and you smile or at least feel good. - Nice line, rich in texture as always - Stella

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Tirelessly

Nice poem almost Zen like.-Dark Wolf

Beautiful. There is always a quiet insistence with your poetry. Sadness and reflection. -jennie charles

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Rendezvous

True mastry of metaphor… An experience (whether done or yet to come) that adds up to far more than the sum of its parts. - Chaos 1214

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Last Words

A Super Write! Liked!-puds1957

As usual, wonderful words with this dark poem. A pleasure to read.-jennie charles

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COLLATERAL

Wow! This really impacts... very fine concepts and poetry that is memorable... - Electric Peace

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Molten Grief

Very nicely done....................... - Electric Peace

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Obsessıon

an interesting piece ....Nicely done.- Electric Peace |

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