I was drawn by the title and your words surpassed anything I might have expected..."the indulgence of self becomes a second hand event"..so so profound and fit an ending to a thoroughly powerful piece of writing...yes.. this dug deep and reached far beyond.-Naajir Rashad
Sunday, December 28, 2014
FALLING SEED
Morning, Sir. I felt a lot from this write. Your usual thought provoking writes. Have a great weekend.-Lady Dragonwyck
Friday, December 26, 2014
Anarchy
Saturday, December 20, 2014
Leviathans
deep piece - great lines: 'Civil war started between the yawning wounds'... and how true:'The autocracy will belled the earth till death.- eleanor prince
Monday, December 15, 2014
Lame Duck
Wow. This really grabs, and it bites with its teeth. I like it.- Arlo Disarray
Sunday, December 14, 2014
Swan Song
Deep but full of food for thought this introspective dance to a swan song. Excellent imagery.- Fay Slimm
Friday, December 12, 2014
Very Disturbing
like it too for the imagination used. Moon seems to be your fav word. Its my sincere desire to see that work which arouses absolute feeling of happiness, bliss flowing from each of the words. I look forward to the other side of life, through your fantastic poetic imagination.-purnimamanhas
good write.-sueb
Loved this, brilliant write, great imagery.-Madeira
AFTER LEAVING THE HOME
Cool Poem.. I like the abstract imagery. It is a fun read. -Joel Thornton
Thursday, December 11, 2014
VIRTUE
I love your poetry, powerful as I enjoy because it touches something inside my walls, my gosh-Entelechy .
Wednesday, December 10, 2014
RECAPITULATION
we journey on my old friend I first read your poems years ago and was captivated , and remain so , you can take this form to new levels with such ease.-David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)
Sunday, December 7, 2014
Choking
love the wording! - Cameron Williams
Another unmissable posting from your talented pen my friend. This write of excellent metaphor and intrigue must be Recommended.- Fay Slimm
Another unmissable posting from your talented pen my friend. This write of excellent metaphor and intrigue must be Recommended.- Fay Slimm
Saturday, December 6, 2014
WHAT WENT WRONG
Very intense nice pen versa! A 7 for me! Have a lovely day! :) love and hugs! -Dorian Petersen Potter
Wow.. Really cool Satish! This is my newest favorite poem.. Very well crafted piece. That middle stanza is the impetus of the poem for me. It is just so well written I do not want to condescend by regurgitating some cliche dribble about how impressed I am.. Rated a 7 (highest rating) and tagging as a fav. Thanks for sharing, and I am excited to read more of your poetry. Joel Thornton
Wow.. Really cool Satish! This is my newest favorite poem.. Very well crafted piece. That middle stanza is the impetus of the poem for me. It is just so well written I do not want to condescend by regurgitating some cliche dribble about how impressed I am.. Rated a 7 (highest rating) and tagging as a fav. Thanks for sharing, and I am excited to read more of your poetry. Joel Thornton
Friday, December 5, 2014
Committed
Flashpoint in looking for its own face will wait - - a set of stark but brilliant metaphors to open eyes and ears - -thank you dear Satish. - Fay Slimm
Thursday, December 4, 2014
BEYOND TRANSCENDENCE
a place that is well beyond agony. great crafting...- JohnFeddeler
Oh gosh this is beautiful!!~Ebonyrose-Entelechy
Oh gosh this is beautiful!!~Ebonyrose-Entelechy
Wednesday, December 3, 2014
Drifting Pain
Strangely charming, well done mate.-martin james
Good write, again-Karen Fromtod
your writings have their own unique style..keep up-Sammour
Climbing
Darkness sings in the valley of sun. Tongues are free to weave the moon. Beautiful presentation with nice wording really. - Kumarmani Mahakul
Monday, December 1, 2014
TENDERNESS
reminds me of a winter kaliedoscope - the patterns seems on fire - liked this one. - Lady A
Sidelined
A strong write. Beautiful language. That last stanza pulled me up sharp. Liked.-jennie charles
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